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 Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:19 pm
A dot
A point of light
A star
Alone
In the emptiness
Of space
Of the sky
A single star
A point of light
A dot in the heavens
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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 7:36 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 10:23 am
I like that... zooming in, then zooming out... nicely done too.
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:42 am
It's a deliciously simplistic poem to described a interestingly simplistic subject.
I like it. ^_^
Though I'm curious, why did you choose the star to write about?
What made you write it like this?
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