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Takashido Nagasuka

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:32 pm


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Kuroi Hekireki

Age
11

Height
5'4"

Weight
110 lbs

Eye Color
Black

Hair Color
Black

Village
Kumogakure

Clan
Hekireki

Village Rank
Genin

Other Titles
None

Appearance Description
Kuroi wears a loose red tie around his neck, His headband is worn around his waist and uses it as a belt buckle for his outfit, and he wears a white collar shirt with a black sport coat over it. His Shuriken Holster is on his right thigh and his Hip Pouch is on his left hip.

Personality
Kuroi is rather different for a 11 year old boy. He holds an odd smile always on his lips and speaks in an elegant tone as if he were of a royal family. He doesn't show much emotion but will usually act rather smug without trying or meaning too and finds many things he just learns about or a different perspective on something he already knows as interesting.

History
Kuroi doesn't know much about his mother due to her death when he was only three from illness. His mother was of the great Yotsuki of Kumogakure in where the famous Kirabi and his brother the Raikage. Kuroi's father came from a rising powerful clan in Kumo known as the Hekireki. When Kuroi was 8 and entered the academy his father began to teach him in the Hekireki's Hiden jutsu, Thunder Release. Kuroi graduated at age 10 and for a year he has been a genin.



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Primary Element
Lightning

Secondary Element
Element




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Jutsu and Skills

Stats
Ninjutsu: 3/7
Genjutsu: 1/7
Taijutsu: 1/7

Total Jutsu Learned/Learnable
Genin Justu-1/4:: Chuunin Jutsu-_/1:: Jounin Jutsu-0/0:: Kage Justsu-0/0::

Ninjutsu
Thunder Clap

Level: Hiden

Type: Ninjutsu.

Thunder Clap is the basic of all Hekireki jutsu. Thunder Clap is preformed by slamming the users hands together with the use of charka to cause a blinding flash of light which can last up to five seconds which is a set up for the follow up attack of Thunder soundwaves which can not only hurt hearing slightly and make your ears ring but the shock wave has the power to knock an opponent back five feet with a head on shot and cause a moderate amount of damage to where it'll hurt to move.

Kawarimi No Jutsu

Level: Special

Type: Ninjustu

Where a ninja appears to be, they are not. When attacked, the ruse is revealed and the image of the ninja turns into its true form, that of a block of wood, with the real ninja somewhere within 30 feet. The user cannot attack after using Kawarimi No Jutsu until their next turn.

Henge No Jutsu

Level: Special

Type: Ninjutsu

Ninja can use this technique to transform themselves into the appearance of another person or object. The user must remain in concentration, or their true appearance will be revealed.
Taijutsu

Genjutsu

Bunshin No Jutsu

Level: Special

Type: Genjutsu

The ninja performs this technique to create an illusory copy of themselves to suit as a distraction. It requires concentration and a constant feed of chakra to keep the illusion going.

Chakra Control
Considerable control to be able to walk on water for a shot period of time.

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)
N/A



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Equipment, Items, Other

Weapons
Kunai (15): Basic Throwing knife.
Shuriken (20): 4 point throwing star.
Smoke bombs (3): Small dark balls that when thrown at the ground erupt in a 10' diameter of purplish smoke which can blind an opponent and limit sight.
Flash bomb(2): Flash bombs are conformed of small tags and when detonated releases a blinding flash of light. Most used for quick escapes or surprise attacks.
Explosive tag (5): Explosive tags are slips of paper with a seal that when detonated cause a mildly devastating blast that can cause good amount to damage. Often placed in hiding on trees or wrapped on kunai.
Wires (2 spools): Wires are often used to restrain opponents without their knowing, set traps, or attached to weapons.

Armor
None
Accessories
None
Miscellaneous
none
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:04 pm


I don't see why he needs a bloodline. His Bloodline seems like it's just restating what his starting Jutsu is. Which could just be a basic Lightning Elemental attack.

Not unless you mean "Thunder" to be a seperate element and thus the bloodline is a "Unusual Element" bloodline. So that you're really Sonic elemental rather than Lightning. But even that I don't see as being a bloodline trait. After all, Zaku, Doji, and Kin were not Bloodline Ninja after all.

Just saying, you should have more jutsus available if you nixed the bloodlien. I don't see why you're there.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:08 pm


Does this make it...what number 5 of lighting themed GK's
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:10 pm


GK's?

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:11 pm


Sorry KG
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:13 pm


I agree with Arc: This, like three of the other four Raiton Kekkei Genkai, should not be a Kekkei Genkai.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:19 pm


Well, Thunder Release really isn't lightning based. It's based on Thunder, the sound after lightning. the only thing lightning related is the flash the opponent sees.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:23 pm


But Thunder is a result of Lightning. Ergo, a 'Thunder Clap' sort of Jutsu would be created from Lightning, oui?

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:28 pm


That is the science in lighting.

You could say your KG is the combo of Wind and Lighting, but thats would be splitting hairs scientifically.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:29 pm


See my comment about Sonic and Zaku, Doji, and Kin. using Sound isn't a bloodline either, nor is it an "Off element" that requires a bloodline like Ice. And what's Thunder? Sound.

So still not really a bloodline.

Please tell me why this is a bloodline, keep in mind what the Powers that Be want Bloodlines to be: An "Enhancement" to your character that is not an attack in and of itself but can be the basis of a particular style or theme to your character that would be unique to your clan.

Example: Hyuugas can see 358 degrees or so and see chakra networks. So they developed a combat style around attackign the chakra networks and developing spheres of defense.

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Takashido Nagasuka

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:36 pm


Yes, thunder is a result of lightning, but it doesn't use the lightning element. More advanced versions of the jutsu later will but the main principle is using chakra to manipulate air pressure and sound waves. The "lightning" blinding image is also an small burst of chakra which is combined with a metal object. Most commonly the shinobi's headband or a tool.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:39 pm


How does Thunder result without lighting? Thats not thunder, thats called loud noises.

What you seem to be making are flash bang grenades.

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Takashido Nagasuka

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:54 pm


okay.... Now my brain hurts.... How about this then. I can edit the profile and just say that the jutsu are like the Nara and Akimichi, Clan exclusive. does that work out better?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:03 pm


It works better.

Note: Bloodlines cannot be "Attacks" in and of themselves after all. Such is what Kakashi and his cronies have stated.

Also your character didnt' NEED the bloodlien as the bloodline was just a copy of a jutsu you already had. Not having a bloodline means you get about 33% more jutsus to learn. More versatile and able to more accurately delve into your style.

We tried to dissuade you to make you a STRONGER ninja, not a weaker one. wink

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