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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:53 pm

Boot Camp Commanding Officer
Colonel Dean Winchester

Boot Camp Executive Officer
Officer Jessica Dream

Boot Camp Senior Drill Instructor
Captain Albert Wesker

The Boot Camp is Run by Two people, and a Senior Drill Instructor, and the rest are Drill Instructors. and if you have any questions, direct them through PM. Everyone of the Boot Camp such as the Commanding Personnel, and those of the Drill Instructors will help you through your RolePlay training to make you one of the best, and make sure you survive in the field.

Basic Rules:
Be as literate as humanly possible.
3rd person is highly preferred although 1st person is tolerated.
Punctuation, spelling, and grammar should be your main points of concentration.
No posts less than one paragraph in length.
This is a role play environment - RP as a story.

If you are a new recruit, you have to pass Boot Camp before you will be able to Roleplay with everyone else. Please post here.

RP your entrance into Boot Camp in one or more paragraphs using your best English skills and aiming to express your current level of literacy. Your RP should be as real as possible, contain some detail of your surroundings, have some thoughts and speech incorporated and be well set out. Remember, you're entering a boot camp environment for this RP, not a combat one. On top of this paragraph, you must type
NEW RECRUIT [INSERT RP NAME] FIRST POST
on the top. This way, it is unlikely that your post will be overlooked.

Boot Camp Mandatory Above every Post!

Recruit "Your RP Name"
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp "Location"

Welcome to the S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp, you're first stop on the way to kicking Zombie a**!

~Provided by UGMF~

Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:02 pm

Anti-Munch Project

Anti-Munch Project developed by Gaia Member "Tanasha". Avoid performing actions that would cause you to become a "Bad RPer". Please note, you're in no way supposed to remember this list, just read it and try to make sure you don't do any of the actions.

Here's the (unfinished) list of what we're against:
-The people who never miss a single shot no matter how hard it is (Aimbotters).
-The people who can't be hit or just shrug it off (god-moders).
-The people who never are without a weapon and ammo (ID fakers).
-The people who have absurdly strong powers (twinks).
-The people who 'balance' thier characters by having a massive but irrelevant weakness and massive powers (min-maxers).
-The people who use Out Of Character knowledge to get an edge (Miss Cleos).
-The people who do things in hindsight (McFlys).
-The people who RP other people's characters for them (Puppetmasters).
-The people who RP completely irrelevant things (Daydreamers).
-The people who RP actions and time against others while the others aren't presant (Shoe elves).
-The people who ignore or alter RPs that they don't like (Revisionists).
-The people who RP an absurdly time consuming sequence occuring between other people's actions (Speedhackers).
-The people who play as characters that are completely impossible (Oxymorons).
-The people who arbitrarily declare themselves the winner with instant death attacks (Baghdad Bobbits).
-The people who've taken actions before they start RPing (Gaseous Snakes).
-The people who pull-in elements that were approved in an unrelated RP (Augustines).
-The people who use an existing persona and only RP them when it helps (Batmen).
-The people who alter thier character as needed for the situation (Zoicite).
-The people who declare thier IC threads safe, but readily attack others (NIMBYs).
-The people who gain abilities as they need them with no prior exposure (Trinities).
-The people who pick-up things that spawn from seemingly nowhere (Quakers).

In these examples, A will be our Good RPer and B will be our Nasty Filthy Munchkin.

Aimbotters: Especially annoying when using NPCs, as NPCs don't get to argue about munch...
A: Three hundred seventy of my trained assassin gymnasts crest the hill, sight you, and rush toward you.
B: Luckily, I have three hundred sixty-nine bullets in my chain gun! I quickly mow them all down, each taking a single bullet to the head, and peg the last one with a rock in the sternum.

Godmoders: Obvious.
A: Now that you're strapped to the end of a naval cannon, I fire it.
B: Whoosh! I nimbly dodge, somehow forgetting the fact that I'm restrained by three-hundred-pound chain!

IDKFA-ers: Most likely people attempting to emulate Solid Snake or some other cheesy spy-novel hero.
A: You're all out of ammo for all five of your Ingram submachine guns, 501!|). Since you're buck-naked, I know I can now safely step into the open and begin returning fire.
B: Ha! Little did you know, I have twelve shuriken hidden within my pubic hair!

Min-maxers
A: I've successfully broken into the facility which gave you your incredibly 1337 power armor. Now I pull up the file on it. What does it say about weak points?
B: The metal of my armor is... um... allergic to praying mantis urine.

Miss Cleos: Obvious.
A: ((OOC: There's a secret switch hidden in the lamp.))
B: I suddenly think to myself-- why not check the lamp for hidden switches? ((Call me now for your free reading!))

McFlys
A: Ha! Now that the force field is down, I run inside your evil lair!
B: Um... um... there's also a super-secret second force field which causes you to die instantly! I just didn't say anything about it because... um... I had to do my laundry! Not because I just thought of it now! Honestly!

Puppetmasters
A: I step carefully into the room, peering around for occupants.
B: Suddenly a dragon pokes you in the eye. You run screaming from the room, whereafter you go home, make a pickle sandwich, and call your mother to cry about how she ruined your life.

Daydreamers: Not exactly munch, per se, but it does get annoying.
A: In the middle of the intense shootout, I dash across the narrow alley, ducking and weaving in hopes to avoid getting hit. I'm unsuccessful; two bullets peg me in the shoulder, throwing me back into a Dumpster.
B: The bullets make me think back to my days as a youth, when I had to melt down tin soldiers to use as musket balls against the Redcoats... or was it redskins? I can't remember. Anyway, I had to walk uphill all three ways to school and back, running from glaciers all the while. It was torture, lemme tell ya. And then there's the story of how I met my first wife...

Shoe elves: Pretty obvious.
A: ((OOC: Well, gotta go to bed. Big neurosurgery test tomorrow.))
B: Ho, ho, ho! Now that the loser's gone to bed, I can strap his character to a cross and peg him with rotten fruit!

Revisionists
A: You chose the blue pill? Ooh, tough luck.
B: Red! I said red! Don't go pulling that "I can read your previous post" mind game crap, either!

Speedhackers
A: I walk to the door and step outside.
B: Suddenly, twelve men grab you, carry you off to my secret lair in Tibet, and torture you for weeks. When you finally die from the agony, we bury you in the frozen wastes. Hundreds of years later, arhcaeologists discover your frozen body and try to determine if you're another Lucy.

Oxymorons
A: I'm a farmer with a shotgun.
B: I'm a black hole which emits blinding pulses of visible light!

Gaseous Snakes: An advanced (or is that "dumb"?) form of McFlys.
A: I walk to the door and open it.
B: Being a fellow with a bit of foresight, I hooked that doorknob to a car battery an hour ago. You're thrown across the room.

Augustines
A: Given that this RP's technology base is midieval, I happily drive my cart to the market to buy some maggot-ridden meat.
B: Too late! I already got there in my Gundam and blew up everything with my insanely overpowered weapons! And don't start whining, because my Gundam's already pre-approved in the "This Is Not a Midieval Technology Base RP" thread.

Batmen
A: In this Fantastic Four RP, I'll be Ben, the gruff rock-man with a heart of gold.
B: I'll be Reed Richards, the living sex toy who hunts down innocent women to subdue with his incredible flexibility!

~Provided by UGMF~

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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:18 pm

Boot Camp Post Example
Copy or repeating this post in any form/way will result in a Suspension!

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Recruit D. Winchester
UGMF Boot Camp
WET/COLD

Dean watched as the Sergeant began to look unhappy. Not sure on what he had done, Dean was ordered to run around a building ten times.
"Yes Sergeant," Dean replied with a unsure look. He jogged off into the swampy like field and headed toward the building. He could hear the Zurg ordering the rest of the recruits from behind him.

"Damn, ******** swamp! Who has one of these fields out here anyway? Just stupid, and what did I say? He told me to call him Zurg?" Dean continued on his way jogging through the river like field, shouting out random comments as he made his way toward the building.

Dean finally reached the building and proceeded to jog around it. Once he was out of sight from the sergeant, he quickly stopped and emptied out his boots. Which were filled with muddy water from the field. After his boots were emptied he continued on his way around and around the building. . .

Winchester came to a halt has he went around the building for the last time. He couldn't remember the last time he had ran so far, and yet he hadn't gone anywhere but in circles. He took a moment to breath in the air before proceeding through the s**t like field once again. A moment of air and he was back in the swamp heading back toward the others location. Two hours had past since he had begun his journey to the building, the rain was still coming down hard but the atrocious wind was something new. The wind proceeded to pound his face as he continued to jog through the swamp like field.

Dean limped back toward the formation as he climbed out of the swamp like field. He slowly looked up toward the sergeant once in formation.

"Anything else Sergeant," Dean blurted out exhausted like?

Mistro91 has passed Boot Camp, congratulations!

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:09 pm

Recruits Who Have Passed Boot Camp

Mistro 91
Darc Knight
Dreamweaver87
Frederic Downing
CLAIRE REDFlELD
Battosai Matt
xD4rk Fl4m3sX
Fortune-Hunter
iChrisRedfieldRE5
HUNK USS
JKCR626
Joanna Beth Harvelle85
x_x Valentines Day x_x
IamRichardAiken
Hunter Quesada

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BOOT CAMP
Open

Alright Boot Camp is Officially Open. Anyone who hasn't recieved a Pm stating that there an Instructor will have to go through Camp. It will be a breeze for some and difficult for others. Some may get passed with one post others will need to stay until they are fairly decent at posting.

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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:42 pm

New Recruit Matt Popek First Post

Recruit M. Popek
S.T.A.R.S boot camp
Entarnce/Inside

After what seem like hours Matt had arrived at the S.T.A.R.S boot camp. Matt had only brought a backpack with nothing but a tooth brush, 2 bags of tooth paste,3 energy bars, his knife,and his handgun loaded along with 10 extra rounds for it. The backpack is going to be mainly used to carry items he might be told to carry by his instructor. He got off the bus to see the camp like he thought it would be an almost prision like place and the way he has seen types of boot camps in the movies. "Well this might be fun." Matt walks through the front gate to see what were probably houses look like the type soilders in the army would sleep in. When he saw this he thought "Well just like the movies it seems like." Matt pulls out the notice he recived about a week ago who his instructor was. "Colonel Dean Winchester is my instructor huh well I suppose theres an information office around here somewhere to tell me where he is or where he can be found or something of the sort." Matt begains to look around all ready lost. "It said that this could be difficult for some people and look at me already lost man my sense of direction sucks oh well all I can do is give it my all and hope for the best."

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:05 pm

battosai matt

New Recruit Matt Popek First Post

Recruit M. Popek
S.T.A.R.S boot camp
Entarnce/Inside

After what seem[seemed] like hours Matt had arrived at the S.T.A.R.S boot camp. Matt had only brought a backpack with nothing[I guess it's right but saying there's nothing doesn't make much sense] but a tooth brush, 2 bags of tooth paste,3 energy bars, his knife,and his handgun loaded along with 10 extra rounds for it. The backpack is going to be mainly used to carry items he might be told to carry by his instructor.[No need for this I don't need to know what it's for] He got off the bus to see the camp like he thought it would be an almost prision like place and the way he has seen types of boot camps in the movies. "Well this might be fun." Matt walks through the front gate to see what were probably houses. Look like the type soldiers in the army would sleep in. When he saw this he thought "Well just like the movies it seems like." Matt pulls out the notice he received about a week ago {to see who} his instructor was. "Colonel Dean Winchester is my instructor huh well I suppose there's an information office around here somewhere to tell me where he is, or where he can be found or something of the sort." Matt begains [begins] to look around all ready lost. "It said that this could be difficult for some people and look at me already lost man my sense of direction sucks oh well all I can do is give it my all and hope for the best."

Errors in Red,
It would help if when you were talking, that you made it bold. Also when you are thinking about something make it Italicized. Don't forget to bold your header, also you were suppose to make Your new Recruit first post red. Also don't tell us what things are for, like: "This backpack is so he can carry alot of items" We don't need to know this.

Colonel Dean Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Coffee Break

Dean leaned back in his chair as he continued reading his daily Newspaper. He just began to read the weather when his phone began to ring. "Hello what is the situation? I see don't worry I'm on my way" He glanced up to see the broken clock on the wall. "Damn, I really need to replace those batteries" Dean quickly threw his paper aside and rushed out the lunch hall doors. He was about halfway to the main office when he spotted a strange looking kid, that seemed to be looking off into space. Dean stood beside the young man as he cleared his throat. "Can I help you son?"

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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:40 pm

New Recruit Claire Redfield First Post

Recruit C. Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp 101

Claire looked out the window to find the sun's blistering rays stretching down across the fields as they whipped by her. "Where the hell am I going?" she thought to herself as the bus bumped along down the gravel road. Her mind drifted back to how she got in this mess. She was doing the dishes and cleaning her apartment when her cell started ringing. To her surprise it was her brother, Chris, who she hadn't spoken with in quite some time. "Hey Chris! Why haven't you spoken with me? You had me worried!" she blurted out, desperation rearing in her voice. "Whoa, whoa! Slow down Claire, Jesus! Won't you give me time to explain myself?" Claire was astonished to hear the fear in her brother's voice. "What is going on Chris?" she asked as she paced her kitchen waiting for his reply. Just then she heard shots in the background. "Chris!!" she screamed into the phone. There was a scuffle and then silence as the phone cut out. "Oh my God! Chris! I need to find Chris!" she thought as her heart was pounding loudly in her chest.

"Everyone off!" the voice made Claire snap back to reality. Looking about she noticed as the dust settled that there was a large building in the distance. Trudging off of the bus she approached the building, tension building within her. She needed to find who ever was in charge. Claire Redfield was about to join S.T.A.R.S.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:51 pm

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New Recruit Claire Redfield First Post

Recruit C. Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp 101

Claire looked out the window to find the sun's blistering rays stretching down across the fields as they whipped by her. "Where the hell am I going?" she thought to herself as the bus bumped along down the gravel road. Her mind drifted back to how she got in this mess. She was doing the dishes and cleaning her apartment when her cell started ringing. To her surprise it was her brother, Chris, who she hadn't spoken with in quite some time. "Hey Chris! Why haven't you spoken with me? You had me worried!" she blurted out, desperation rearing in her voice. "Whoa, whoa! Slow down Claire, Jesus! Won't you give me time to explain myself?" Claire was astonished to hear the fear in her brother's voice. "What is going on Chris?" she asked as she paced her kitchen waiting for his reply. Just then she heard shots in the background. "Chris!!" she screamed into the phone. There was a scuffle and then silence as the phone cut out. "Oh my God! Chris! I need to find Chris!" she thought as her heart was pounding loudly in her chest.

"Everyone off!" the voice made Claire snap back to reality. Looking about she noticed as the dust settled that there was a large building in the distance. Trudging off of the bus she approached the building, tension building within her. She needed to find who ever was in charge. Claire Redfield was about to join S.T.A.R.S.

No errors, but I said not to speak for anyone but yourself.

Colonel Dean Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Manning The Shitgun

Dean stood above all the new recruits, looking down to all of them with his dark green eyes. He was about twenty feet up and was starting to sweat profusely. <******** heat is killing me up here" he thought to himself. He then turned his attention to all the fresh meat. "Welcome to Hell Ladies! The Names Colonel Winchester I will be your new daddy from here forth." With that said Dean turned to his right hand man, signaling the attack! As Dean stepped down from the podium, he could hear the recruits beginning to scream "Ah the Shitgun gets them everytime."

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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:53 pm

Recruit F. Downing
S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp
Bus Drop Zone

The bus had arrived after an uneventful trip to it's destination, where now men in uniforms quickly emptied the contents of the bus into rows of recruits. Without any control over the situation, Frederic found himself in the second row to the left that had been quickly organized. He looked left and right, observing the faces around him as a man, whom he asumed was in charge for the moment talked. He fwas snapped back into attention when the lines began moving, as the recruits were guided to their dormatories. Rather than walking however, the lead uniformed man decided to turn it into a jog...a very hasty jog. It's like prison all over again! Downing thought as his line was led to the barracks.

The group of men arrived briefly and each was assigned a bunk, which had on top of it a set of equipment. Frederic gave the items on the bunk a quick eye inspection and found a combat knife, binoculars, a headset radio and a belt with pouches. Other instructions were given to the men, indicating that uniform fightings would take place later in the day, then the recruits were left alone to adjust to their new surroundings. Downing sat on the edge of his bed and took in a deep breath. "What'll happen next?" he asked himself outloud as he made himself comfortable and waited for time to pass.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:13 pm

Frederic Downing

[Missing Header Stating 1st Post]

Recruit F. Downing
S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp
Bus Drop Zone
[Info. Section Needs to be in Bold]

The bus had arrived after an uneventful trip to it's destination, where now men in uniforms quickly emptied the contents of the bus into rows of recruits. Without any control over the situation, Frederic found himself in the second row to the left that had been quickly organized. He looked left and right, observing the faces around him as a man, whom he asumed [assumed] was in charge for the moment talked. He fwas [was] snapped back into attention when the lines began moving, as the recruits were guided to their dormatories [dormitories]. Rather than walking however, the lead uniformed man decided to turn it into a jog...a very hasty jog. It's like prison all over again! Downing thought as his line was led to the barracks.

The group of men arrived briefly and each was assigned a bunk, which had on top of it a set of equipment. Frederic gave the items on the bunk a quick eye inspection and found a combat knife, binoculars, a headset radio and a belt with pouches. Other instructions were given to the men, indicating that uniform fightings [Not wrong, but fight would sound better] would take place later in the day, then the recruits were left alone to adjust to their new surroundings. Downing sat on the edge of his bed and took in a deep breath. "What'll happen next?" he asked himself outloud as he made himself comfortable and waited for time to pass.

A few minor errors and mistakes. Just make sure to bold headings and watch your spelling errors.

*F. Downing Has Passed Boot Camp! Congratulations!!*

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New Recruit C. Redfield Second Post

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New Recruit Claire Redfield First Post

Recruit C. Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp 101

Claire looked out the window to find the sun's blistering rays stretching down across the fields as they whipped by her. "Where the hell am I going?" she thought to herself as the bus bumped along down the gravel road. Her mind drifted back to how she got in this mess. She was doing the dishes and cleaning her apartment when her cell started ringing. To her surprise it was her brother, Chris, who she hadn't spoken with in quite some time. "Hey Chris! Why haven't you spoken with me? You had me worried!" she blurted out, desperation rearing in her voice. "Whoa, whoa! Slow down Claire, Jesus! Won't you give me time to explain myself?" Claire was astonished to hear the fear in her brother's voice. "What is going on Chris?" she asked as she paced her kitchen waiting for his reply. Just then she heard shots in the background. "Chris!!" she screamed into the phone. There was a scuffle and then silence as the phone cut out. "Oh my God! Chris! I need to find Chris!" she thought as her heart was pounding loudly in her chest.

"Everyone off!" the voice made Claire snap back to reality. Looking about she noticed as the dust settled that there was a large building in the distance. Trudging off of the bus she approached the building, tension building within her. She needed to find who ever was in charge. Claire Redfield was about to join S.T.A.R.S.

No errors, but I said not to speak for anyone but yourself.

Colonel Dean Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Manning The Shitgun

Dean stood above all the new recruits, looking down to all of them with his dark green eyes. He was about twenty feet up and was starting to sweat profusely. <******** heat is killing me up here" he thought to himself. He then turned his attention to all the fresh meat. "Welcome to Hell Ladies! The Names Colonel Winchester I will be your new daddy from here forth." With that said Dean turned to his right hand man, signaling the attack! As Dean stepped down from the podium, he could hear the recruits beginning to scream "Ah the Shitgun gets them everytime."

Recruit C. Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp 101

The screams were ear splitting. Claire wiped the s**t concotion from her face and looked about, there had to be some way out of here. Already she loathed this place, especially the colonel, he was the worst. She wanted to give him a beat down he wouldn't ever forget. However Claire told herself no. "That would not accomplish anything. Tell yourself you are here for Chris." she chanted silently as she got down on her knees and crawled through the maze of other women. Finally seeing the light at the end of the tunnel, Claire stood and walked straight ahead to the man she needed to see. While tapping him on the shoulder and making sure to smear s**t on his shirt Claire introduced herself, "Hello Colonel Winchester, my name is Claire Redfield." A smile spread along her s**t covered face.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:45 pm

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New Recruit C. Redfield Second Post

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New Recruit Claire Redfield First Post

Recruit C. Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp 101

Claire looked out the window to find the sun's blistering rays stretching down across the fields as they whipped by her. "Where the hell am I going?" she thought to herself as the bus bumped along down the gravel road. Her mind drifted back to how she got in this mess. She was doing the dishes and cleaning her apartment when her cell started ringing. To her surprise it was her brother, Chris, who she hadn't spoken with in quite some time. "Hey Chris! Why haven't you spoken with me? You had me worried!" she blurted out, desperation rearing in her voice. "Whoa, whoa! Slow down Claire, Jesus! Won't you give me time to explain myself?" Claire was astonished to hear the fear in her brother's voice. "What is going on Chris?" she asked as she paced her kitchen waiting for his reply. Just then she heard shots in the background. "Chris!!" she screamed into the phone. There was a scuffle and then silence as the phone cut out. "Oh my God! Chris! I need to find Chris!" she thought as her heart was pounding loudly in her chest.

"Everyone off!" the voice made Claire snap back to reality. Looking about she noticed as the dust settled that there was a large building in the distance. Trudging off of the bus she approached the building, tension building within her. She needed to find who ever was in charge. Claire Redfield was about to join S.T.A.R.S.

No errors, but I said not to speak for anyone but yourself.

Colonel Dean Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Manning The Shitgun

Dean stood above all the new recruits, looking down to all of them with his dark green eyes. He was about twenty feet up and was starting to sweat profusely. <******** heat is killing me up here" he thought to himself. He then turned his attention to all the fresh meat. "Welcome to Hell Ladies! The Names Colonel Winchester I will be your new daddy from here forth." With that said Dean turned to his right hand man, signaling the attack! As Dean stepped down from the podium, he could hear the recruits beginning to scream "Ah the Shitgun gets them everytime."

Recruit C. Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp 101

The screams were ear splitting. Claire wiped the s**t concotion from her face and looked about, there had to be some way out of here. Already she loathed this place, especially the colonel, he was the worst. She wanted to give him a beat down he wouldn't ever forget. However Claire told herself no. "That would not accomplish anything. Tell yourself you are here for Chris." she chanted silently as she got down on her knees and crawled through the maze of other women. Finally seeing the light at the end of the tunnel, Claire stood and walked straight ahead to the man she needed to see. While tapping him on the shoulder and making sure to smear s**t on his shirt Claire introduced herself, "Hello Colonel Winchester, my name is Claire Redfield." A smile spread along her s**t covered face.

No Errors that I could see really. But the maze of women, I didn't mean women when I said ladies it was a figure of speach. Also you puppeted the DI with saying I was standing there. But I've seen worse posts.

CLAIRE REDFIELD Has Passed s**t Camp!!!!

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New Recruit Matt Popek First Post

Recruit M. Popek
S.T.A.R.S boot camp
Entarnce/Inside

After what seem[seemed] like hours Matt had arrived at the S.T.A.R.S boot camp. Matt had only brought a backpack with nothing[I guess it's right but saying there's nothing doesn't make much sense] but a tooth brush, 2 bags of tooth paste,3 energy bars, his knife,and his handgun loaded along with 10 extra rounds for it. The backpack is going to be mainly used to carry items he might be told to carry by his instructor.[No need for this I don't need to know what it's for] He got off the bus to see the camp like he thought it would be an almost prision like place and the way he has seen types of boot camps in the movies. "Well this might be fun." Matt walks through the front gate to see what were probably houses. Look like the type soldiers in the army would sleep in. When he saw this he thought "Well just like the movies it seems like." Matt pulls out the notice he received about a week ago {to see who} his instructor was. "Colonel Dean Winchester is my instructor huh well I suppose there's an information office around here somewhere to tell me where he is, or where he can be found or something of the sort." Matt begains [begins] to look around all ready lost. "It said that this could be difficult for some people and look at me already lost man my sense of direction sucks oh well all I can do is give it my all and hope for the best."

Errors in Red,
It would help if when you were talking, that you made it bold. Also when you are thinking about something make it Italicized. Don't forget to bold your header, also you were suppose to make Your new Recruit first post red. Also don't tell us what things are for, like: "This backpack is so he can carry alot of items" We don't need to know this.

Colonel Dean Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Coffee Break

Dean leaned back in his chair as he continued reading his daily Newspaper. He just began to read the weather when his phone began to ring. "Hello what is the situation? I see don't worry I'm on my way" He glanced up to see the broken clock on the wall. "Damn, I really need to replace those batteries" Dean quickly threw his paper aside and rushed out the lunch hall doors. He was about halfway to the main office when he spotted a strange looking kid, that seemed to be looking off into space. Dean stood beside the young man as he cleared his throat. "Can I help you son?"

Recruit M. Popek
S.T.A.R.S boot camp
near the main office

Matt notices the man"huh oh hello I'm looking for my instructor his name is Colonel Dean Winchester do you know him or know where I might be able to find him?" Matt notices a tag that says Colonel Dean Winchester on the man."Oh! Uh Sir! Matt Popek Reporting For Duty Sir!"Matt quickly saluted Colonel Dean Winchester"Great I already screwed up and I haven't been here very long."

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