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Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 4:08 pm

ryoku(strength) hyuuga

age
16
Gender:
male
Village:
konoha hidden leaf village
Clan:
hyuuga
Hair:
black
Eyes:
black
Rank:
genin
appearence:
an x on his forehead and shaggy black hair
personality:
often cool headed
history:
though he is cool headed he gets angry when he remembers the mark on his means,that he is part of an inferior branch of the hyuuga clan

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Primary Element
fire

Secondary Element

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jutsu and skill stats

Ninjutsu: 2/7
Genjutsu: 1/7
Taijutsu: 2/7

Total Jutsu Learned/Learnable Genin Justu-1/4:: Chuunin Jutsu-_/1:: Jounin Jutsu-0/0:: Kage Justsu0/0::

Ninjutsu

Taijutsu
(Gentle Fist)
The inner coil system that transfers chakra around the body is very close and is essentially a part of all of the human body, including crucial organs. Members of the Hyūga clan train in a special fighting style that requires the Byakugan and excellent chakra control; through the Byakugan they are able to see the opponent's inner coil system which they forcefully channel their own chakra into, causing severe damage to organs nearby. The technique earned its name because even a seemingly gentle, unimpressive hit can prove lethal.

Genjutsu

Chakra Control
chakra conservation

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)
byakugan

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Equipment, Items, Other,Weaponskunai bombs(exploding kunai that are set off by a timer or remote chakra set off )5
kunai(throwing knives)5
staff

Armor
none

Accessories
hooodie he always wears to hide his mark

Miscellaneous
bottle of sake

Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 5:32 pm

Okay now this is preaty much your same profile only now you changed Uchiha with Hyuuga.

The problem now is that none of your moves makes sence with the Hyuuga style. They are melee syle group attacking chakra points. Yours is nothing of the sort.

These same moves are not in the proper format.

Your temporary Paralysis Technique. If ANBU know you, then you most likely shouldn't.

Demonic Illusion. again a bit OP.

The only one thats acceptable is the gentle fist.

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Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 5:48 pm

And this is more of me being annoyed by it, but why is the text bigger then other profiles?

Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:59 pm

Please just use the format provided by Lady Tsunade so that it looks nice like the other profiles, then we will tackle the problem of what to do with your stuff.

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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:13 pm

Speaking of which, he's a member of a major clan. As such I'd expect a bit more spit and polish than what I see here. Yes it's an original character, but it's directly tied to canon material, and even more so major canon material.

As is this character lacks a lot of the detail I'd normally expect of any approvable character, much less someone with that connection. His personality section is pathetic, though I often hate personal. His Appearance tells us practically nothing that isn't a given. His history is really just a longer (barely) version of his personality and likewise tells us nothing at all about him.

He's set up to be a Neji Clone from what I see. And the roleplayer has shown the bare minimal effort.

Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:52 pm

Already told this guy not to come back.

Why is he back?

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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:58 pm

You forgot to give his picture to security?

Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 11:52 pm

No
Just no

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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:58 pm

So now we are straight out knocking away anybody who doesn't live up to our standards? This is why we need a Universal Academy, so that members like this can be 'taught' using dummy characters until they are ready to preform in the real villages.

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:00 pm

I concur with Dev.

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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:04 pm

Thank you Kitsune, otherwise we are acting like huge elitist.

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:20 pm

Exactly.
And to be more practical, how can we expect to adequately populate our villages if we only except people up to these standards?
Eventually the well will run dry, guys.

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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:59 pm

It's why I have Cannogakure Ninja go through the Academy first.

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:19 pm

I feel it might be prudent of us to make some 'dummy' characters up to give to those who have failed the admission process X amount of times. Will propose it later for official discussion.

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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:24 pm

Yes, we are telling illiterates they can't play here.

I gave the kid the chance to PM me with a RP sample that showed he had the capability to keep up with this community and he failed to do so. He didn't even try.

It's our responsibility here to see to allow people either to or to not roleplay in our villages with a sanctioned character. If you think for a moment that meant that everyone, even people who can't roleplay literately, were going to get to be in it, you were deluding yourself. It's not our jobs to make people literate. It's our job to make sure people that get to play with our roleplayers live up to certain standards. If you want to take pity on those who can't roleplay and take the time to teach them, by all means do so, it's an admirable thing. But don't expect it to become mandatory.

Back to this fellow- I don't suggest even looking at his profile until he's proven his literacy and ability to play and desire to play fairly in our community.

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