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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:08 pm

Since everybody has been liking the recent stories from the members I decided to post the first chapter of one of mine.This is suppose to be one of my manga's I'm making called ' Pioneer' but it's always good to start with a story.So here it is and sorry for the bad grammar I'm not exactly good at it.

Chapter One.

The year 2100 it's a peaceful and different earth.We no longer thrived for the future instead we slightly returned to the past.Our cities began to fill with smoke as factories of brick were built and small apartment buildings made of stone were built.Trains were the only transportation [besides walking] and all schools had uniforms.But within these cities and towns they're are still forests and jungles.And believe it or not they're people who live in them.And they are called Pioneers.The people of the world who believe in living with nothing but what the earth gives them.But what a lot of people don't know is that the Pioneers are actually people with power........

Pioneer O Pioneer are you a Pioneer?!?

I woke up that morning with a pounding headache and cold feet and when I sat up on that September morning all I could see was the smoke from the factories and the trains that ran through my city.A rising sun? No, I haven't seen one of those in the longest time.My name ,well I'm Alison Alice for short of course."Alice darling <3 break fest is ready." my aunt had screamed, from downstairs and I realized" I could use some Tylenol".

Alice stretched her arms into the air and sighed ,but soon smiled " Alright!" she screamed, jumping to her feet on her bed." Let the day begin!".Suddenly the house rattled a bit and the smoke from the train blew into her room.Coughing she quickly closed her window and from the window she watched the train go down her street." Alright.....Now the day begins!" she screamed, and jumped from her bed and got to her closet.Opening it up she picked out her boring unifrom and slipped it on." I hate school." she said, and grinning she turned her head to the vanity that sit on the corner of her room and ran over.After closing her closet she walked over to the vanity and looked down at the picture of her parents." Hi mom hows it going Pa.." she whispered, and then took a seat at the vanity chair.Putting big and flashy accessories on she hoped to make a statement.After she was done she stared at herself in the mirror and smiled.But soon sighed " If only I was a pioneer I wouldn't need to wear this uniform and I could actually wear what I wanted." she moaned, and shrugged " One day.".She know said turning her head toward the picture of her mom and dad.Closing her eyes she pictured herself as a little girl and her parents taking her to this city.It was still young and back then you could still see a sunset and sun rise.Looking down at their little daughter the Beautiful natural looking mother smiled sweetly and the strong handsome father smiled like a child." Will you be a pioneer Allison?" her mother asked her and the little daughter grinned and nodded." ALLISON!!!." a scream came from out of nowhere and Alice jumped from her chair and her eyes were wide open " I'll be right down!!" she screamed, and with that Alice ran down stairs her bedroom door slamming behind her.........

Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:54 pm

Oh my god! *flails arms* I absolutely love it! And I'm not just saying that. I know I say I absolutely love everything you do but that's just because I absolutely do love everything you do. This really is good. If this was an actual manga I'd be like "HMM I AM INTRIGUED." And continue reading. And I love your choice for the title. The word "Pioneer" is so unused; it's very unique and creative. You, my friendy friend, has some seriously scary serious talent.

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Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:07 pm

RIGHT?!? xDD I wuv you Kyoko more then evar and I also enjoy your work I mean hello....your asian. xDDDDDD Oh! and I came up with this story from watching that Levi's commercial they kept saying Pioneer and I was like " HOLY s**t what a beautiful jeans commercial ".And the story just came to me.

Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 5:42 pm

Chapter Two.

After Alice finished her break fest it was time to return to the cubicles of hell.And by that I mean school.What else would I be talking about? The only cubical that could be considered amazing was the T.V. .Oh! and thats right her aunt and uncle don't have one of those either." Life sucks." she grumbled, putting her empty plate in the sink.After she looked at herself one last time in the foyer's mirror she smiled,grabbed her bag, and told her aunt and uncle goodbye.Slamming the door behind her she was happy to see that her besty Emily was there waiting for her." Hey Emily!" Alice screamed, and waved.Emily sighed and just stared at the over obsessive accessories that Alice had added to her uniform.Because unlike Alice ,Emily was actually a well mannered and neat person.But even so the two were paired together.Go figure. Emily placed her right hand on her cheek and made a look that you could read quickly.Alice grinned " Your face totally reads that you think I'm crazy." Alice added, her tone of voice sounding like robin who just had a bowl of cherries.Emily lowered her arm and sighed once more " Of course I am! Alice your wearing such eccentric clothing!" Emily said,gripping her hands into fists. Alice just laughed and threw her arm over her shoulder." Good morning Emily." she continued, as she began to walk and make Emily walk as well.Emily was blinking quicker and looked super confused." Wait! don't get off-...good morning" she continued, " Your one of kind Alice." and with that last comment both made their way to the Train station.The station wasn't to far since they put another one every so and so kilometers.
After they got onto the congested train they finally got themselves a seat.And of course since they were sitting everybody could get a clear look at them.Alice had her uniform on ,but with four hair clips in her hair , a few neck-classes, a lot of bracelets, and of course the heart shaped earrings.While Emily wore her school uniform neatly no hair in sight with her hair freshly combed, and her glasses neatly placed on her face.Both sat there and everybody in the train seemed to put their eyes right on the two.Alice being Alice continued to smile and folded her hands on her lap " O! Everybody is staring." she said, referring to Emily.Emily had her head down in shame and had a nervous look that just read " Why Alice WHY!".Emily Slightly eyed Alice and gripped her hands on her bag that laid on her lap " Of course they are look what your wearing!" she whispered.Alice shrugged and turned her head down to Emily " You can go sit over there " Alice offered, eying the other empty seat on the other side.Emily shook her head and raised her head " No, I'm stay....." she said, and Alice patted her on the back " Good!".The train soon came to a stop and Alice ,Emily, and some other student got off at the school"s train station.Emily told Alice that she had to do something at the student council room and that she would see her later.Alice waved goodbye to her friend and made her way toward a soda machine.Alice had about ten minutes before she should start heading up so she took this time as relaxation .Nobody bothers her either [Maybe that because your a freak] .Taking a seat on a bench beside the soda machine she opened her soda and took a few sips." Ah....It's always refreshing." she thought.Blinking out of nowhere when she opened her eyes a little girl and a girl around her age was in front of her." Oh my gosh!!" she screamed, and threw her soda into the air.But suddenly before the gravity could take the soda can to the ground the can magically floated in the air and moved ever so slowly back into Alice's grip........But why at that moment could all she think about was her Mother and Father?