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PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 4:14 am


PROLOGUE

There was lots of commotion at the main branch of the Aekea Public Library and Information Center. Lots of children were running around, adults were pushing strollers filled with little crying babies, and trucks full of precious cargo. The parking lot was full of cars and tents with different events going on at each of them. It was a pretty warm autumn day but the wind was quite chilly when the gusts came through. It was mid-afternoon at the annual literacy fair. Books were pouring in from everywhere as generous Gaians donated their used books. Mr. Gambino, who is not even from Aekea, donated truckloads of books with his own liftbots to unload his generosity.
When Neon, Aekea’s best-known reporter, asked Mr. Gambino how he found it in his heart to donate so much Gambino replied, “I recently purchased a bookstore. But instead of paying the employees, I decided to close it, sell the building, and get rid of all of these books. Who needs books when you have money? MWAHAHAHA!”
“So you aren’t here to celebrate literacy and education, you just wanted a free place to drop off your old stock?” Neon asked incredulously. Even though Gambino is not from Aekea, having such an uncaring man within the city limits did not sit well with Neon. Even Xenon, Neon's pet grunny, was displeased at Mr. Gambino's words.

“MWAHAHA small boy. Of course I care about reading. It’s important for kids to learn and have books to read. But it is also important for us rich people to have more money. If I wasn’t so rich, could I have donated all of these books?” More annoyed than defeated, Neon decided to interview someone else. Anyone else.

“Hey Neon! Have you found any celebrities for me to invite to my show?” It was the beautiful Ellen, Aekea’s favorite sweetheart. She has her own talk show. “Gambino is here, but I don‘t know if you want to talk to him.”

“Oh. Him. I think I’ll pass. Thanks anyway, pookie!” said Ellen as she pecked Neon on the cheek and danced away in that mood she’s always in. That mood that says “My godchild could be kidnapped and I still wouldn’t be distraught.”

Also outside, Phoenix, Liam, and Christian were unloading boxes of books from people’s cars and taking them inside so Rezia could inventory and count the donations. The library's one liftbot was also helping. Phoenix was playing wingman for Liam as the two of them relentlessly hunted their prey. Sam was there and she couldn’t seem to get away.
“Aww, babe you can’t leave yet. We have so much to talk about…” Liam was being his usual self with Phoenix taking notes the whole way.

“I would love to leave, but my car broke down. Can you help me fix it?" whimpered Sam in her sultry but forceful voice. "I know what I need to do, I just need to go get a part from the store and I’ll need help installing it. Oh and I’ll need the engine hot to check something with the oil so keep it running.”

“Right. So you want us to stay here and get warmed up while you get ready to go underneath and get messy. I like where this is going.” Phoenix delivered the line with the kind of style that could only be rivaled by Liam himself. Sam was not amused by this at all so she just left and went to the auto parts store.

Also at the event was the unveiling of the newest service bot at the library: litbots. These TV-sized robots have every children's book in the library's inventory stored electronically. They were programmed with a soothing, maternal voice. Kids just have to push a button and voila! Their favorite story can be read to them as the picture of the pages scroll across the screen. They were painted in cute vibrant colors and positioned so that many kids could sit and listen to each one simultaneously. Unfortunately, the library could only afford two of them so Reiley was reading out loud to the children who did not enjoy the huge crowds around the litbots. As she began to read The Story of Little Servo, a small child approached her group. Unlike the other kids, this one was not surrounded by parents and she seemed a bit... outdated. Her clothes were in good condition but they were of a very old style. She seemed very aloof. Reiley acknowledged her and invited her to have a seat in her lap. The girl moved, although reluctantly, over to stand beside Reiley as she listened to the story:

Once upon a time in a small quiet neighborhood in Aekea lived a small family. There was a big mother Serva, an even bigger father Servito, and little Servo. He was the cutest 'bot ever but he wasn't very good at anything. Big papa Servito was not very happy with his son's constant failure and mother Serva was tired of not having any stories to share about her precious child. No one loved or cared for little Servo until one day...


EEEEEEEEEKKKKKK!!
PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:47 pm


"I would love to leave... so keep it running" Sam is saying that part right? Just that part is a bit ambiguous to me with the dialogue and such. Just a small note.

Anyways, I like it. =] I wonder who the young girl is, and I wonder if she offers some world shattering prophecy that turns this light hearted event into an epic tragedy... >.> Or just smiling and being adorable is fine too. xD

OH HEY. WHERE DA ROBOTS?? D:< Just want to mention that. Keep it up! I wish I could offer some ideas, but I'm not especially imaginative with writing.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:39 am


yay feedback! This is my first time writing a story. I've written essays of course for school but it's not quite the same thing lol. I'm going to keep editing this until it's perfect before we continue.

EDIT: k it's better now. Feedback?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 4:32 am


where am i? crying

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:34 am


I likes. Flows well. Content is good. Who's writing the next part?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:13 am


Loard_Travis
where am i? crying

xD aw. Yeh I was wondering why travis didn't at least have a lil cameo appearance involving an incident with sugar...

Anyways, much better! Umm... i dunno who should write next...

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:24 am


Loard_Travis
where am i? crying


I didn't forget you. You'll see where you fit in I promise.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:25 am


aww you said i'm beautiful <3

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:04 pm


Can we lay out a general concept of what we want to happen next? Or even an outline to the story? If I knew kinda what was going to/supposed to happen next, I'd be much more inclined to write the next part.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:38 am


That's what the storyline thread is for in the crew room.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:50 pm


Ok. I just read over what we had decided to do with the story (I forgot it was posted over there, thanks, Eli). I think I'd be willing to go ahead and work on Chapter 1. It'll take me a day or two to get it out, but I can do it.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:02 am


Yayness! More story goodness.^^

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:09 pm


Chapter 1

The large doors that opened the Library to the outside world slammed shut with a loud boom, forcing a large gust of wind to sweep inside. At the same time, the electricity went out. It was black for one minute and 26 seconds. The emergency power generator took 1 minute and 24 seconds longer than it should have to activate. Cries of “Are you okay?” and “What was that?” filled the library as parents wandered around in search of their children and workers attempted to calm the crowd.

“Does anyone know where that scream came from?” Neon shouted, his voice cutting above the ruckus.

“Security: status update!” Rezia kept her calm, even though she had a strong feeling that something horrible might have happened. Power outages were no big deal, but there was no reason for it to stay out this long. Something was definitely amiss. The lights suddenly came back on, only slightly dimmer than before.

“Power from both the standard grid and the emergency generator were at 0% for 86 seconds from 15:41:10 to 15:42:36. Emergency generator is at 100% charge. Standard power grid online. Security cameras online. All systems nominal.” Both the regular power and the backup were out. What was going on?! Rezia made sure to keep all of her anxiety on the inside.

Reiley was sitting still in her chair in front of the kids, not moving around to avoid stepping on any of the children. She heard the sounds of someone approaching her from behind and turned around to see if she could see them. Before she could turn more than a quarter of the way, the person hit her on the shoulder, causing her to fly sideways out of the chair and into a table that was a very close. She let out a small shriek, but it was nothing compared to the scream from before. She grabbed her head where the table hit it as she sat up.

As soon as the lights came back on, Reiley got up from the floor and checked to see how the group of kids around her was dealing with the situation. She made sure they all stayed calm and did not start running loose in the Library. The strange, outdated girl was not standing anywhere near Reiley anymore and Reiley wondered where she had wondered off to.

Her next instinct was to find Phoenix and make sure he was ok. She saw him with Liam, safe and sound. Or at least as safe as he could be with Liam when there was prowling to be done. They were talking quietly and looked semi-serious about something other than females for once. She has had a bit of a thing for Phoenix for a long time and wished she had the guts to let him know how she felt about him. But she could not. Every time she tried, something got in the way. She pulled her hand away from her head to see it had some blood on it. ‘Just great,’ she thought to herself.

Rezia called out, “Everything is back to normal now, Neon.”

“I wish I could say the same, Rezia. We’ve got a bit of a problem. I’ll tell you after I tell Aekea.” Neon turned on his wireless mic and started giving a live news story. “This is Neon, reporting from the Aekea Public Library and Information Center. A few moments ago, the Library lost electricity for about a minute and a half. The doors slammed shut and cannot be opened. A child has also been kidnapped. We cannot identify the child. We can only say that we are doing everything in our power to find her. At this time, we do not know why this has happened or who has done it. We will keep investigating and bring more news to you as we get it.”

Neon then turned off his mic and turned back to Rezia who had walked closer to him while he gave his news report.

“Neon, please explain to me what’s going on,” she asked, hiding her worry well.

“I’m not exactly sure. The doors slammed shut and the power went off. We can’t get the doors open. And a little girl has gone missing. I don’t know who’s behind this or how we’re going to fix this, but we will. I promise.”
PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:22 am


gahh!! Who got kidnapped?! I was sure it was going to be that little girl with the ragged clothes but now I have no idea. YAY suspense!

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:23 am


Awesome! A nice thanksgiving treat to read this. =]
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