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This is the begiining from a short story in my miscellany "Tales of The Truth"
and the story is called "Bloodstained Revenge"
okay, first I normally speak german so PLEASE ignore my spelling and my grammar! I know it isn't that good but I want to know something about the content and no the form
okay here it is:

It was a rainy Thursday evening when Samantha Clarkson left the big Victorian house, which was her prison for five years. She held her little baby daughter in her arms and her five years old son followed her by the side. “Come back, silly b***h and bring those bastards with you!” This was her husband, Mr Mark Clarkson. Since he lost his job in a research institute, he became addicted to alcohol. Now after two years, he had nothing but beating and insults for his wife and his little children. It was time to leave. She didn’t feel guilty about it. She did not marry him because of love and she wanted a better life for her children. “William, come on!” she shouted at the little boy. Even if he was her own son, Samantha was often scared of him. It was not because of this appearance. William had thick and curly black hair, grey eyes and was thinner than other children in his age; there was nothing really special about him. But he had a special manner that made people feel scared and queasy. “We are going to visit Aunt Emily, do you remember her?” He looked straight up to her. “No”, he said quietly, “we are going to left him, aren’t we?” William pointed at the house and at the little, dark figure walking through the grass. “Just for a while. Sometimes mommies and daddies have some problems together and then one of them leaves, so that they can solve their problems. He’s still your dad.” “I hate him.” Samantha was surprised. “You should not say things like that, Will.” “But you hate him, too!” Maybe this was some kind of children’s honesty, but maybe something more. She pushed him into the car. One Look back at their home and then they were off. They never came back again. Mr Mark Clarkson died three months later. He felt drunk down the stairs and broke his neck. The big Victorian house was unoccupied and after some years it has been demolished. Now there is a modern office building with elevators and a lot of glass. Only the huge, Iron Gate still stands there, where many years earlier a desperate mother with her children had left for a better future.

okay tell me what you are thinking ^^

I just want to know why its called blood stained revenge? I see no vengeance. other wise it was really good, have to say that it will move peoples emotions. any one with fighting parents can relate to it, and thats good. over all good.

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uhuhuhuu yalayalayala this is sure kind of thing! (Don't worry if you don't get it ^^) So because of the nice comment and because I was having my wisdom teeth extracted and nothing else to to I decided to post the second part. Please enjoy as much as you can. True to my motto "bad, worse, worst" it won't be a better pink and bunny-eared life for my charas. But hey they're not us so we shouldn't care biggrin Oh and one thing I have a favour to ask all the native english speakers: Can you use thing like don't or stuff in writing or must you use do not?...oki here I go again ^^


In a city many miles away from their former home Samantha and her children lived with their Aunt Emily in her apartment. Time passed by and William grew up. First he was at home with his sister Silence and then he went to primary school. He was nearly ten years old when the problems began. One day a child of his class was attacked by a big dog. The child fainted immediately and the dog ran away, but William, who found this child, sat near him and started crying and whimpering that the boy should “stop screaming”. Will was taken home. There wasn’t anything like that again until Silence became a little bit older. Will played with her in their room but Silence didn’t understand the game and became angry. She threw the toys around. Will grabbed her arms. When their mother came in Silence sat at the bed and Will told her to stop screaming even if she did not say a word. “Will, why did you tell your sister to stop screaming?” asked their mother. “She screams in my head. Please, end it, mommy!” Samantha thought he has some kind of headache and send him to bed. In the next months William’s fits became worse. They went to many different doctors but no one knew what to do. And sadly, Aunt Emily died. She left her flat to them but without her help Samantha had to work again. She had to look for a secondary school for William and finally found the St. Hood Boarding School for highly talented children.
“So you want a scholarship for your son…” Principal Taylor looked at the paper in front of him. “…William, right? William Clarkson.” The woman at the other side of the desk nodded. “You see, Sir, he passed all the tests. He so intelligent, he…” “I know, I read your letter.” He sighed. The results of the tests were brilliant; this boy must be really smart. But there have been more smart little boys and girls. And Daniel Taylor was not in this nice big office with the mahogany desk and the huge oil painting of the first principal because he let every smart child, whose mother knocked at his door, in his school. “Well, his intelligence quotient is really high and his school work is excellent but this thing with his problem, can you tell me exactly what it is?” The woman started to knee her hands. She was quiet young, he thought, and her long blonde hair fell into her face. “He says that he hears people scream in his head when they feel bad things like pain or sorrow. But it could be a special kind of headache, the doctors said.” she added quickly. She began to breath faster. Principal Taylor cleaned his glasses with his shirt, and then he put them on again and looked seriously at her. “Have you ever thought of taking him to a school for children…with special needs?” “Will is not mad!” Samantha stood up and bent over the desk to him. “He’s very intelligent and has no mental illness!” She sunk back to the chair. “He’s really emotional and since we left my husband and their father, life was not easy for us. And now our last relative died and I have to get a job, I must leave my children alone. The only thing I ever wanted was a better life for my children including a good education.” It was a heart-warming story but of course there have been many heart-warming stories and even some more heart-warming then this. It was late at night and Principal Taylor wasn’t at the mood to discuss a lot. This woman has such an attractive manner. He came round the table to her. “Samantha, I understand you. You are a really beautiful woman and I’m sure if you do me some favours, I can give a scholarship to your son. Of course, just because he is so talented. And now, call me Daniel…” The next morning a tramp found a body drifting in the river. It was a young woman. And that’s how Will and Silence became orphans and Will get a scholarship for St. Hood Boarding School for highly talented children. Principal Taylor disappeared in the same night and was not ever seen again. A new teacher became principal.


hey hey hey bad people everywere, right? Ah, it's kind of sad inventing characters just for dying but it's neccessary. And I don't get why some other people were kind of shocked about that passage. stare Well....hell no, there's no reason. Silly people xp