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Romulus

PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:41 pm


Kinda like a folkish/storyish song. Lemme know what you think..

She was at the bar all on her own
He asked who she was with, but she'd come alone
And he wondered if he could sit by her a while
And she gave him a yes with a nod & a smile

And they spoke like two lonely people would do
Both looking for love from somebody new
They'd both had loved and both had seen
What the heart does without a paddle stuck upstream

Then he said
Would it be alright if I saw you again?
I'm a lonely guy, I could use sure use a friend
Cause I like spending time with you
And you might find you like me too
Would it be alright?

Time flew by and they were so much older
With a dog, two kids, and in debt up to their shoulders
They had two little jobs, and a warm little house
And a whole lot of love to go around

She was the mom in charge of the PTA
And she was happy in her day to day
For though they were not rich or movie stars
She was happy from the words singing in her heart

He said
Would it be alright if I saw you again?
I'm a lonely guy, I could use sure use a friend
Cause I like spending time with you
And you might find you like me too
Would it be alright?

They were just a couple in an ordinary world
And old given him and her.
But the world needs passionate people like that..

All things must get old and die
And when it happened to her, he'd started to cry
Let loose 80 years of fighting back tears
Of a man's foolish failures and some leftover boyhood fears

And he was weak at the knees, had to fight to go on
Because his reason for living was gone
And he wrote her a letter, put it down by her grave
And it was just a few words that he'd been saving

Someday soon, I'll see you again
I was never lonely after you were my friend
And I loved spending my life with you
And I sure as hell will miss you too.
So angel goodnight.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:23 pm


Record that s**t. Lyrics have no context without the music behind them.

But really, it looks like a cheesy country song at first glance.

Hect


Peek Aw Chu

PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:58 pm


I picked three chords and played this all the way through. Definitely do it in the key of C.
It sounded amazing. Hah.
I like it. Very cheesy, but very good.
Hect is right. Record, my child.
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