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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:17 am


~Information~
Name: Yuki Hiwatari
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Yuki is a very nice, friendly, strong, confident girl.She loves to have fun and hang out with her friends but if you make her mad, you pay for it. She opens up to people real quick but doesn't necesarily trust all of them. It's not easy to win her loyalty and devotion but those who manage to get it, will never be betrayed by her.

Yuki has great leadership skills & can keep her team or squad united & working well together. She is very helpful & loves animals. She is very dedicated towards her work & loves a good fight. She does not like to lose & works hard to keep her position & herself maintained. She is a great fighter.

Yuki likes playful & fun environments. She doesn't like to be too uptight & She can deal with flirts as well as long as it doesn't get too over board.

Bio: Yuki came from a prosperous family. Her dad was a shinigami and her mother was a florist, she has always wanted to become a shinigami due to her dad and this determination became even stronger when one day she met this cute and handsome shinigami, who she developed a crush on. He was wounded and Yuki helped him recover. She gave him a place to stay and took responsibility for him. In gratitude he gave her a necklace she still wears today.

Squad: 10
Rank: 4th seat

~Appearance~
Picture/Description: Yuki Hiwatari
Height: 5 ft
Weight: 45 kg
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Red
Usual Clothing: Shinigami clothing
Zanpakuto Position: Tied to the left side

~Zanpakuto~
Sealed Form Appearance: it looks like a normal katana.
Name: Kōri no tenshi
Element: Ice
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Kōri no tenshi

Shikai Appearance: looks like a normal katana with the blade turning light blue and a long red ribbon tied to its hilt.
Shikai Command: Shatter
Shikai Abilities:
1. Creates an ice shield around the wielder and shoots lots of ice needles towards the opponent.

2. After 2 strikes, the opponent gets an illusion of their blade breaking confusing them for a while, giving the wielder a chance to attack.

3. Upon Yuki's command, a huge wave of ice comes towards the opponent and completely freezes them.

4. Yuki's blade shatters & turns into two elegant blue gloves, with them she can bend water & turn that water into ice.

5. Touching the ground by the tip of her sword, Yuki can freeze some ground and freeze anyone standing on it.
Obtained?: yes

Bankai Appearance:
Extended Name: n/a
Bankai Abilities: n/a
Obtained?: No

~Skills, Techniques, and Kido~

~Hado~
Hadō #1: Shō (衝, Thrust)
Hadō #4: Byakurai (白雷, White Lightning)
Hadō #11: Tsuzuri Raiden (縛られた電光, Bound Lightning)
Hadō #30: Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
Hadō #31: Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire)
Hadō #33: Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Hadō #54: Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)
Hadō #58: Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)
Hadō #63: Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon)

~Bakudo~

Bakudō #1: Sai (塞, Restrain)
Bakudō #4: Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
Bakudō #8: Seki (斥, Repulse)
Bakudō #9: Geki (撃, Strike)
Bakudō #12: Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)
Bakudō #21: Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape)
Bakudō #26: Kyokko (曲光, Curved Light)
Bakudō #30: Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam)
Bakudō #37: Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
Bakudō #39: Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield)
Bakudō #58: Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows)
Bakudō #61: Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light)
Bakudō #62: Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence)
Bakudō #63: Sajō Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes)
Bakudō #73: Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)
Bakudō #75: Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars)

~Skills~
martial arts
dashing
air walk

Standard Point System
Zanjutsu - 6/10
Kido - 7/10
Agility - 4/10
Hakuda - 6/10
Reiatsu - 6/10
Pysical Strength - 6/10
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:06 am


The squad and rank is supposed to be left blank until you're accepted to a squad... unless the Captain of that squad has already reserved a place for you in his/her squad. 3nodding

The profile's pretty good, but the first Shi Kai ability could use some toning down.

Quote:
On the first strike the opponent's blade turns into ice and breaks.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:18 am


She was already in the 10th Division, and failed to put her profile here first.

No such thing as 4rth.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:39 am


Dante_Shadowolf
The squad and rank is supposed to be left blank until you're accepted to a squad... unless the Captain of that squad has already reserved a place for you in his/her squad. 3nodding

The profile's pretty good, but the first Shi Kai ability could use some toning down.

Quote:
On the first strike the opponent's blade turns into ice and breaks.


Thankyou.......ok

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:54 am


Kitsune-tono
She was already in the 10th Division, and failed to put her profile here first.

No such thing as 4rth.


Oh... okay.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:53 am


Kitsune-tono
She was already in the 10th Division, and failed to put her profile here first.

No such thing as 4rth.


I asked the captain about every step, he didn't mention posting the profile here, thats why i didn't, as soon as he told me I did post it.

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XziqueX

PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:26 am


THAT ANIMI. scream

By the way, only captains and lieutenants can execute Shunpo. Unless what you meant by "knows shunpo" is that she knows what it is but can't do it. Though that wouldn't make sense. :

For your Agility skills, you can only have dashing and air walk.
For more info, read the Kido and Agility System.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:08 am


XziqueX
THAT ANIMI. scream

By the way, only captains and lieutenants can execute Shunpo. Unless what you meant by "knows shunpo" is that she knows what it is but can't do it. Though that wouldn't make sense. :

For your Agility skills, you can only have dashing and air walk.
For more info, read the Kido and Agility System.


ok.. edited

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Darius Draconian

PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:53 am


Shikai Abilities:
1. On the first strike the opponent's blade turns into ice and breaks
.


Still need to rethink this bit...Once this is done it looks good to go.

Being able to shatter a blade on first strike is like Kenpachi style, which is a no-no unless your captain commander perhaps. I suggest after a series of hits, yes, this may happen. Something like Soifons, two hits and you die. Bear in mind she's a captain, so as your a seated shinigami give it 3 or 4...

Or you could think up a new attack if you don't like that.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:33 pm


@Zique: smile It was an accident.

@Yuki: Expand a bit more on your biography(Add how you died, how your life alive was, and describe more about your lover), zanpukto, and other areas. Include more detail, and sentences instead of short sentence. This in my opinion will allow others, and myself to get to know you better, and a feel for who you are. Then like Ryota said change your shikai into a more fair attack. Instead of the blade shattering, state that it is temporally engulfed by ice, and rendered useless to your opponent during that time period, dunno? Then change your rank to 4th smile , and I approve biggrin

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:52 pm


I claim copyright infringement!

MY NAME! scream
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:54 pm


Ryota Maru
Shikai Abilities:
1. On the first strike the opponent's blade turns into ice and breaks
.


Still need to rethink this bit...Once this is done it looks good to go.

Being able to shatter a blade on first strike is like Kenpachi style, which is a no-no unless your captain commander perhaps. I suggest after a series of hits, yes, this may happen. Something like Soifons, two hits and you die. Bear in mind she's a captain, so as your a seated shinigami give it 3 or 4...

Or you could think up a new attack if you don't like that.


got it..

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DarkDisaster S

PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:54 pm


Animi_luver
@Zique: smile It was an accident.

@Yuki: Expand a bit more on your biography(Add how you died, how your life alive was, and describe more about your lover), zanpukto, and other areas. Include more detail, and sentences instead of short sentence. This in my opinion will allow others, and myself to get to know you better, and a feel for who you are. Then like Ryota said change your shikai into a more fair attack. Instead of the blade shattering, state that it is temporally engulfed by ice, and rendered useless to your opponent during that time period, dunno? Then change your rank to 4th smile , and I approve biggrin


understood..
PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:55 pm


Hayashi Yuki
I claim copyright infringement!

MY NAME! scream


Wasn't intended..

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Animi_luver

PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:45 am


DarkDisaster S
Hayashi Yuki
I claim copyright infringement!

MY NAME! scream


Wasn't intended..


How funny smile
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