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There are a few things that are wrong with this profile.

1. You mis-categorized your ninjutsu. The Grand Fireball Technique is actually a Chuunin level ninjutsu (C-Rank), and can be put down as your chuunin level ninjutsu. However, the Fire Dragon Flame Projectile is a Jounin ranked (B-Rank) ninjutsu, and will not be allowed until you graduate to the level of Chuunin, and even then it may be disallowed for training purposes.

2. Your first Kekkei Genkai is not actually a Kekkei Genkai, just another ninjutsu as you stated. It could be made to be your own technique, because its power level isn't exactly above genin level, and can be your own custom learned jutsu. You would have to get rid of the fire aura completely, as engulfing yourself in flames is more overpowered than a donkey on MONSTERSTEROIDS.

Heat vision, if you get rid of the ninjutsu classification, can become your Kekkei Genkai however. It's fair, and very useful.

What you can do, something that I've felt fine doing, is add an additional field underneath your jutsu to specify that it is a 'clan jutsu'. I think it would look better having the Heat Vision up with the rest of your Ninjutsu, just because when you get to a higher level, it's going to be difficult to keep a 'counter' on the number of Gennin/Chuunin/Jounin/Kage ranked jutsu you have if they are displaced all over the page.

@Faustina: Being able to create an element from one's mouth isn't hard in the naruto verse. It's being able to do it without injuring your internal organs is where the true skill comes from. Many element jutsu originate from the mouth, mostly the wind, water, and fire jutsu due to their fluid nature that breathing mimics. To be able to release fire from one's mouth is as simple as breathing out, with chakra control mixed in. Because the Yokoshima clan are clearly born with the fire element inside them, literally, doing this technique isn't even hard for them.

I turned the flame aura thing into an actual jutsu, that way it's more of an active skill than something passive. I mentioned in the jutsu above that a person will get mild degree burns if they touch him. That means it won't be as harsh as real flames, but it's still a defensive and offensive mechanism produced by their body. I mentioned that the aura is entirely offensive and is meant for the character to be able to exert their ability onto whatever they touch because that is what the clan is based on. This skill is hardly a perfect anything, especially considering it burns energy fast, much like you mentioned fire does anyway, and I agree. That is why Yokoshima, at least the aggressive ones like Toravisu, aim to try to take out their enemies as fast as possible before they exhaust.

I mentioned Sasuke because even though he is a prodigy, during the early parts of the exam, he wasn't as powerful as any other Genin. It was only when he learned Chidori that he began to show an exalted status. However, his level is also a good benchmark to show just how skilled the Yokoshima clan are at using fire anyway. It's a gift to them. The one thing I said was that I don't want to be anything like the uchiha clan, though I threw in a history of the clan disliking the Uchiha to add some flavor and mixture of canon and original creations. But I didn't create this clan with the Uchiha in mind. I created it to create a clan that embodies the true element that the Land of Fire represents: fire itself. Their main focus IS fire, and as a result, their weakness is naturally water. I listed this as well in the clan's description. Throw them in the rain and their powers are weakened, depending on the intensity of the rain. Use water jutsu against them, and no more fire techniques from a Yokoshima. That's why it isn't overpowered. Trust me, once people start using his weakness against him, it's actually going to feel pretty sad to see that just some water will quickly destroy his aresenal. I sometimes feel like this is too big of a weakness, but I want to show that the specialty of the Yokoshima clan is real, from both its strengths and its weaknesses.

In summary:

Pros:
-Tora is very good at using fire jutsu.
-Can use fire jutsu fast and effectively.
-High resistance to fire in general.
-Need little water to survive.

Cons:
-Uses up energy fast
-Water will stop any use of fire jutsu

Bring's a tear to my eye to see so many people who say what I feel.

Good job, guys.

Keep it up.

I don't ever plan for Tora to shoot laser beams out of his eyes. As funny as that would be...

As for the energy showing, I really wish my chakra system was implemented, that way I can use number values to show how much chakra someone has left to use their jutsu from. It would do wonders for this system, yet people are afraid of math.

So I'll just apply the system to my character so I can show how much chakra he has and how much he uses per post/depending on the jutsu level.

In addition, I'll make water mainly weaken his usage over using fire techniques and fire in general. That way, it won't cut off all his abilities, but make his fire techniques nearly suckage.

Looks fine to me. Unless others complain I'm moving this into the Konoha subforum. I apologize that processing took so long.