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In the Shadow of a Child

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Astral Danse

PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:30 am


I just posted this in the Poetry forum and thought I might as well post it here for my guildies as well. It's my first time sharing here on Gaia and so I've chosen a poem that I wrote many years ago when I was only 14 because it's something very personal that's always meant a great deal to me. I hope you enjoy it if you read it.

In the Shadow of a Child

Patrick is a child, all wide eyes and dimples
Reminiscent of a time that seemed oh so simple.
In the shadow of a child I stand
Helpless as youth slips from my hands.
I remember; I think of times long past
Watching myself grow...growing too fast.
We do not take our time, do not savor innocence
And suddenly, a shadow is all we have left and nothing makes sense.
In that shadow I weep, I cry, I sob
For my childhood lost, my innocence robbed.
And Emily is a child, all ribbons and roses
How lucky she is, though she does not know it.
In her shadow I pray for days gone by
When I should have been a child, I was living a lie.
Instead I was caring for those who cared not
When laughing and playing should have been my lot.
In the shadow of a child
In the shade of the past
It lasted a while
It faded too fast.
We seem to take for granted
Those fleeting childhood years
And as we grow the seeds are planted
For all these many tears.
Tears we shed for things we did not notice
When, of course, we knew we should
Now who is left to cry for us
When no one said they would?
PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:31 am


Very Nice!

StartingOver43


Astral Danse

PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:39 am


Thank you~ biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 11:26 pm


It's a really nice poem.

chocolate s k y --- xo

Liberal Shopper


The Real Mandaleigh96

PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:42 pm


*speechless* WOW
PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 5:01 pm


Oh my god.....this is far beyond fridge worthy.....I'm just speechless, this is seriously, completely amazing. Have you ever considered publishing this? ....like, wow. I wish I had a 'Like' button to press or something! sweatdrop

BroHanSein

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