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 Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:20 pm
This is the poets subforum, im trying to raise money to get a subfrum for every genre but im not very rich right now, PLEASE DONATE
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:10 pm
is a subforum were we can post our poetry????
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:13 pm
uhhhh this is a poem i wrote and stuff ive actually wrote a few poems but idk how many we can post at a time and stuff
so this one is called Good Night Life
I wrote this poem to express the love of the night and stuff kind of
The darkest of days
The brightest of nights
The starless night full of terrible fright
the pools of blood forming rivers streaming oh so freely
the pain filled screams echo throw the night
All the love in the world lose all hope at a inconsiderable lose
The sounds of screams well the people enter the firey gates of hell their screams will last all eternity
Never a end in sight
What can we do to ease their suffering? NOTHING
There pain is complete so long it lasts for all eternity echoing throwout the night throw out the world throw out the sky
Make it stop! Make it cease!
So all our pain is complete.
A world coming to its final end
All the screams stop.
Finally eternal rest and eternal peace.
Perfect lustful peace
All the suffering ceased
all the screams stopped the world falls into utter silence
not even the sound of the wind rustling leaves
not the sound of laughter
no sign of joy
all life ceased
all life stopped
time is at a stand still
the world falls into utter silence forever still.
No life to be seen all the light gone the world has been put to eternal rest,
good bye world sleep tight.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:43 pm
Drops of Rain
Watching the puddles,
While the rain is dropping,
Nothing to do,
But to think of you.
But it rips my life away,
When i can't escape the thought of you,
From the tears in my eyes,
To the tears to my cheeks,
Life's just not the same.
Just want someone to save me,
I will always be there when you're down,
Someone to keep my cheeks dry for today,
And we will have it made.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:44 pm
jadeyman Drops of Rain Watching the puddles, While the rain is dropping, Nothing to do, But to think of you. But it rips my life away, When i can't escape the thought of you, From the tears in my eyes, To the tears to my cheeks, Life's just not the same. Just want someone to save me, I will always be there when you're down, Someone to keep my cheeks dry for today, And we will have it made. thats rlly cool dude!
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:46 pm
Yes, this subforum is strictly for poets. Meaning this is where competitions for just poetry will be held and stuff like that.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:48 pm
Colors of Life Colors spinning filling the night. Filling the world to it's brim with colors oh so bright Seeing the world through so many colors! What a sight! Spinning, twirling filling our sight filling us to our height in sweet beautiful magical colors. Missing out on this sight would be such a terrible fright The night full of light. The night sky dancing with dark black skys and shining bright stars flaring in the sky. Watching the black of the night walts with the sweet shy stars dancing to a song only they can hear letting the world catch such a sight. Following each step watching as their eyes meet, lips getting closer and closer till their lips finally meet. They dance all night it's such a sight, don't allow it to give you a fright. The sea crashing agenst the shore in the first morning light. The sea roaring smashing into the shore spraying a soft sweet mist shining in the light like a fresh cut gem in first suns light. Blue, red, purple, all the colors of the rainbow and many more fill the sky and fill our life with such lovely sights. The sweet lights help protect us from great fright. Like the first rays of morn blinding out the night filling us with life. Don't see in just black and white Let yourself experience all the colors and see the full sight Let the colors in, not the fright. Now say sleep tight then good night and welcome the embrace of the night without fright.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:49 pm
The Old Times
from the times we were kids,
to the times we are adults,
to the times of now.
we ran along,
the sides of the roads,
as we were singing.
but we are not kids forever,
as i get a phone call,
the call of cold.
from the times we were kids,
you got on the bus,
packed your things and went off.
i sat there,
i sat there for days,
awaiting for your return.
instead of seeing your light face,
i saw a flag covering a box,
as my feelings began to sorrow.
i opened the box,
only to see,
a pail face.
my heart stopped,
as tears rolled down my eye,
and down to my cheeks.
i sat there in the rain,
while i put you in the ground,
trying to swallow my heart.
as the bagpipes played,
i began to sorrow,
for my loss.
when i was picked on when i was little,
and you were there,
there to stand up and fight for me.
when i cried,
you gave me treats,
just to see me smile.
i miss your blond hair,
your brown eyes,
your warmth.
when you passed away,
a piece of me went away,
a piece that died.
and now all i do is cry,
cry for you,
i miss you big brother.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:49 pm
XxPiRaTe_PaNdaZxX Yes, this subforum is strictly for poets. Meaning this is where competitions for just poetry will be held and stuff like that. okay great to no! thanks!
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:52 pm
jadeyman The Old Times from the times we were kids, to the times we are adults, to the times of now. we ran along, the sides of the roads, as we were singing. but we are not kids forever, as i get a phone call, the call of cold. from the times we were kids, you got on the bus, packed your things and went off. i sat there, i sat there for days, awaiting for your return. instead of seeing your light face, i saw a flag covering a box, as my feelings began to sorrow. i opened the box, only to see, a pail face. my heart stopped, as tears rolled down my eye, and down to my cheeks. i sat there in the rain, while i put you in the ground, trying to swallow my heart. as the bagpipes played, i began to sorrow, for my loss. when i was picked on when i was little, and you were there, there to stand up and fight for me. when i cried, you gave me treats, just to see me smile. i miss your blond hair, your brown eyes, your warmth. when you passed away, a piece of me went away, a piece that died. and now all i do is cry, cry for you, i miss you big brother. that is very deep i think it rlly is a excellent way to express yourself ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:54 pm
Quote: that is very deep i think it rlly is a excellent way to express yourself ^^ well things that happen in my life i write about u know?
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:54 pm
Terrible Fear How dare you act big when i am such a easy target? How can you treat me so small when I seem so big? How can you treat me like that when I have so much to be insecure about? What are you a monster? Where you raised in a cave? How can you be so cruel? So heartless I sit home at night trembling in fright I fear the next time I may have to witness the god awful sight Your taughnting words echo throw my ears, your threats echo throw my mind Your words bring tears to my eyes they roll over my eye lids wetting my cheeks where is my comfort? Where is my shoulder to cry on? who cares for me? What experiences can I can get from such terrible sights? Fill me with life try to make me bright, but there will always be great fright Like someone is taking away all my might and replacing it with uncontrollable fright All my hope gone stolen away Like my soul is being pulled into the night Resist the fright they say? How? How when all around me is fright? how can I find light? where can I be safe? Where am I normal? where do I fit in? how do I fit into this wild world called life? How HOW! how do I make it through? SOMEONE TELL ME HOW!!!!!! show me the way. Someone PLEASE guide my way!
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:56 pm
you may laugh when you read this poem
I wrote this poem about one of my favorite book characters who is a pirate and stuff it may help the poem make more sense to you
The Final Dance
Tears run down my cheeks as I hear the metal clinging agents metal as the locks fall and the door opens with a squeal of old hinges.
The tears burn my eyes and glisten down my cheeks
The hot sum batters my face
What a last glance at the world.
Lead onto the deck sweet sorrow filled music fills the air
One last attempt at freedom solemnly failed
Step by step the dance of life is played around me
Sadly my dance is coming to its stand still.
One partner lost no one else to dance those hard to learn steps.
I walked the steps my head held high
My tears shine on my cheeks as they fall on the floor as the sun shines so very high in the sky.
My dance coming slowly to a halt before my very eyes. Such sorrow filled eyes.
May the lord accept me into his arms, the final words I whisper as I am brought forward to my end.
Sobs and cries of pure sorrow and hatred fill the air.
Clouds blot out the sun as I walk closer to my doom.
Closer and Closer our dance comes to its final steps
One last look at my loyal friends, a nod of the head
I heave a heart flit sigh and take one last look at the sky
Over the edge I fling myself body and soul. My dance has finally come to a end.
The cold sea embraces me with welcome loving arms.
One last breath, no point to struggle, I allow the cold dark nothingness to swallow me pushing me farther and farther under
At least my final dance comes to it's end, but may my song play on. Now farewell
May your dances play on.
Be sure and be well.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:57 pm
this poem is about the moon and how much it means to me and kind of how i see it
Moon Shine
A sweet glowing sphere shinning bright in the sky.
Giving a glow of pure warmth and affection.
The moon so full looks ready to burst.
So we lay in the rays of the moon and let it slowly regenerate us by night filling us full of life
The rays fill us with tender love and devotion
Making us all feel like children of the moon.
All the pain and sorrow of the world gone with the moon
The moon may seem gone but do not fear it shall be back again another day
Good night moon till we meet again
Sleep tight
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:01 pm
Missing You
Theirs not point to breath,
And no point for my heart to pound,
If your not with me.
Looking at the ground,
Only to see I'm worthless,
And nothing more.
Wishing our times will never end,
But everything became a halt,
When your where with him.
When i dream,
Only nothing but black,
Like being in a endless pit.
But i sit here,
And i wait for somebody,
To bring this night to an end.
Wanting warmth,
From the cold,
You left behind.
From the times you whispered,
Into my ear,
The wind blows in that paces.
What did i do?
From the times we used to have?
But when i see you,
It only brings tears,
And pain.
I wish it was me and you again,
But i realized,
All my wishes are gone....
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