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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:47 pm


Yoshimitsu

Yoshimitsu Shihoin

Age
17

Height
7'0"

Weight
250 lbs

Eye Color
Topaz

Hair Color
Crimson

Village
Iwagakure

Clan
Shihoin

Village Rank
Genin

Other Titles
Ninja monk of Genbu temple

Appearance Description
Yoshimitsu is a tall and lean boy, who is slightly muscular due to years of training. His hair is worn in a ponytail at waist-length and always secured with a metal clasp. He wears a short-sleeved Chinese Kung Fu uniform, and wraps his arms with bandages to protect his skin.

Personality
To strangers, Yoshimitsu appears to be the silent, cold type. He is always very serious and collected, and may sometimes seem a tad morbid because of it. When he's exposed to a person for a long time and he's gotten to know them, he becomes more friendly, although reserved. He seems to have uncanny luck with women.

History
Yoshimitsu is the son of the local monk, who leads a shrine dedicated to Genbu, the divine tortoise god of the North. Over the years, Yoshimitsu has trained to learn the practice of worship to his guardian god, as well as the jutsu unique to his clan-- the Kekkei Genkai of the Shihoin clan. He was also trained in the art of Japanese swordplay, and was trained with his family's legendary weapon, the Zatoichi. However, he often chooses to fight with his monk spade, and is very skilled with it.



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Primary Element
Earth

Secondary Element
None



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Jutsu and Skills
Stats
Ninjutsu: 1/7
Genjutsu: 1/7
Taijutsu: 1/7

Total Jutsu Learned/Learnable
Genin Jutsu-0/0:: Chuunin Jutsu-0/0:: Jounin Jutsu-0/0:: Kage Justsu-0/0::

Ninjutsu
None

Taijutsu
None

Genjutsu
None

Chakra Control
None

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)
Jade style: Know as one of the purest stone know to man and the strongest. His ancestors learned how to manipulate Jade, like the ability to coat their weapons or even make them. able to make various weapons by pulling jade from the ground.


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Equipment, Items, Other

Weapons
Monk spade: It is as long as Yoshimitsu's body as the spade is large and wide. the symbol of the tortoise in the middle of the blade and the pole itself and the spade have a dark jade green tint to it. Meaning that the blade itself with the various other compounds with in it has jade.
Prayer beads: Yoshimitsu's are special, they are made of a pearl green jade that was made for and by his father, made with blessed minerals of various kinds and that special type jade. three large bead with the Kanjis inscribed on it, kindness, strength and gentleness in that order.
Vajra:a short metal weapon that has the symbolic nature of a diamond (it can cut any substance but not be cut itself) and that of the thunderbolt (irresistible force). The vajra is believed to represent firmness of spirit and spiritual power. reference:Wiki and is made of a rare white jade and he carries for of them in the ways of the four buddas
Basic Ninja tools: Wire x5
shuriken x5
Armor
None
Accessories
Bag of purifying salt: only found deep down in the cave under the temple of Hiei, the name of the mountain of Iwa.
Orb of Jade: has a very huge Jade mine hidden behind the walls of the temple, t6he only why to get to it is a secret way to get to it
thought the head abbot's room.
Miscellaneous
Under his shirt is a turtle birthmark, located directly over his heart. birthmark
and the reason that he doesn't use his zatoichi is because of his failure during the chuunin exams.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:58 pm


Please re-read how to write up jutsu. These are done incorrectly. Not to mention you have more than one, which you cannot have.

But, for fair warning, Negation Salt will not be allowed. Nor will Targe and Wall of Genbu, seeing as they represent harnessing raw chakra into a physical form made of chakra, which is comparable to raikiri, but probably harder, which is at LEAST a chuunin rank skill.

Please remember, your character is a Genin. See the Genin section for example jutsu of the appropriate power level.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 7:23 pm


Would a religious practice qualify as a Genkai?
PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 10:09 pm


Below is an example of a proper profile, but it still requires some minimal modifications.

Genin may only have ONE jutsu to start out with. We want you to train ICly to gain more jutsu, and learn new jutsu from teachers. When you graduate to Chuunin, you'll have plenty of spaces available to create more jutsu that are your own.

Only one of the two Genin jutsu you wrote down is acceptable, so that's the one I left. Since your primary element is EARTH, all the jutsu you create should pertain to that earth element.

I've re-written your profile to an acceptable standard. If you have any problems with it or if it requires further modifications, alter the one you wrote earlier in this thread.




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Yoshimitsu

Yoshimitsu Shihoin

Age
17

Height
7'0"

Weight
106 lbs

Eye Color
Topaz

Hair Color
Crimson

Village
Iwagakure

Clan
Shihoin

Village Rank
Genin

Other Titles
Ninja monk of Genbu temple

Appearance Description
Yoshimitsu is a tall and lean boy, who is slightly muscular due to years of training. His hair is worn in a ponytail at waist-length and always secured with a metal clasp. He wears a short-sleeved Chinese Kung Fu uniform, and wraps his arms with bandages to protect his skin.

Personality
To strangers, Yoshimitsu appears to be the silent, cold type. He is always very serious and collected, and may sometimes seem a tad morbid because of it. When he's exposed to a person for a long time and he's gotten to know them, he becomes more friendly, although reserved. He seems to have uncanny luck with women.

History
Yoshimitsu is the son of the local monk, who leads a shrine dedicated to Genbu, the divine tortoise god of the North. Over the years, Yoshimitsu has trained to learn the practice of worship to his guardian god, as well as the jutsu unique to his clan-- the Kekkei Genkai of the Shihoin clan. He was also trained in the art of Japanese swordplay, and was trained with his family's legendary weapon, the Zatoichi. However, he often chooses to fight with his monk spade, and is very skilled with it.



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Primary Element
Earth

Secondary Element
None



_________________________________




Jutsu and Skills
Stats
Ninjutsu: 2/7
Genjutsu: 1/7
Taijutsu: 2/7

Total Jutsu Learned/Learnable
Genin Jutsu-1/3:: Chuunin Jutsu-0/1:: Jounin Jutsu-0/0:: Kage Justsu-0/0::

Ninjutsu
Genbu's tail
Level: Genin
Type: ninjutsu
summons a large stone coil of prayer beads to bind the enemy.


Taijutsu
None

Genjutsu
None

Chakra Control
Tree Climbing-- In training.

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)
Will of Genbu: it is known as the ultimate shield-type Kekkei Genkai, the Shihouin family has developed this from years training their chakra control to being able to enhance weapons and Monk tools with their chakra. The Shihouin also use this specialty to make chakra shields by focusing their chakra into their prayer beads. Genin can create small shields, and as their mastery over the technique improve, they can create large shields that may even protect large areas.


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Equipment, Items, Other

Weapons
Monk spade
Prayer beads
Vajra
Basic Ninja tools (Kunai, Shuriken, Wire, ect.)
Armor
None
Accessories
Bag of purifying salt
Miscellaneous
Under his shirt is a turtle birthmark, located directly over his heart. birthmark


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:13 pm


Okay.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:57 pm


Hey I know this was approved and all, but could you maybe edit on the jutus description. I figured it would involve your new KG.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 12:42 pm


You have been demoted to Academy Student.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 2:09 pm


I brought this back to the front for a mod look over. He had changed it form before.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 6:59 pm


I could probably look it up, but I'm lazy. And thus would like an actual description of what a vajra is.

I find it odd that you mention in your history being trained to use a particular weapon... then don't actually HAVE that weapon.

Also I'd like to see quantities for your "Basic Ninja Tools". As well just how many uses your "Bag of purifying salt" may have, as well as how you'd replace such a rare commodity that just doesn't seem to be all that readily replaceable within the villages.

Also: Less links, more description. Use your WORDS.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:30 am


If I may put in my two cents, I've noticed a lot of Academy Students and Genin being at very high/advanced ages for such a low rank. It either means, in my mind, that they are kookoo in the head, or are just too damn lazy to do anything about their rank.

I apologize, it just doesn't seem to fit the overall character layout, from what I've seen.

Ex. Naruto and the gang are between 11 and 13 at genin level, and 14-16 for Chuunin levels.

By technicality, this guy should have enough training to begin Jounin exams. However, since this isn't an official rule or anything, it isn't exactly something that can be changed, rather a peeve of mine.


Also: Your KG seems to really limit yourself. "Jade" isn't exactly found everywhere my friend. Maybe if you kept some with you, it'd make your KG a little more useful or something.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:10 pm


Well, the age to rank is more or less appropriate to our group since we are not the wonder children depicted in naruto, were the guy with the mustache that was at the genin exam.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:14 pm


I edited it

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:01 pm


Let it be noted that your character, still an Academy Student, does not know how to use his Kekkei Genkai. He may possess it, but usage should still be beyond his grasp.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:00 pm


noted

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:37 pm


I would ilke you to attach that note to your profile under the Kekkei Genkai field.
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