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 Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:35 pm
Here it is.
Please, tell me what you think of it :] Read the description too! Critique it as well, if you'd like.
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 12:21 pm
I don't know what to say about it. It was good but not my cup of tea.
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 7:35 am
Simple Answer: It's pretty good
Long Answer: I can hear what you were intending, though you might have had more sucsess for what you were aiming for with a little more contrast. The variation is very good though, and the piano at the end is always a nice touch, though personally I find it can be too heavy of a full stop to this sort of piece without having the motif introduced at some other point. i.e had the piano enter somewhere in the middle. Not nessercerally playing the same part as it was but something to say 'we have a piano', instead of 'and to end the song, a piano, because were classy pirate '
Grade: B-. Alot of effort, a few compositional flaws which effect the dynamics of the piece. Good work.
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 4:13 pm
Thank you for the good answer and crit :]
Though, this is probably the last piece in this realm for awhile. I'm glad you like it though ^^
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 7:05 pm
Sounds really good. It has a sort of Nightwish feel to it.
I agree with the above post, though. The piano should "grow out" of the music, if that makes sense. Maybe make the rest of the music fade out while the piano fades in, a la "Epic" by Faith No More. Also, some of the MIDI stuff sounded a bit corny, but I suppose you can't help that unless you have a few grand to blow.
In all, though, really cool.
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:12 pm
hmmmm there are a few flaws but over all AWESOME job!! n.n
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:02 pm
It was very good for what it was
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:06 am
I have to say you hit your goal of trying to sound like RPG music. GJ smile
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 1:11 am
Very good, I quite enjoyed the dynamics. It'd be nice to hear a real recorded version though.
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 7:22 pm
Its okii.....But u did an awsome job biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:58 pm
your talented but i dont get into that type of music. nice work
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:52 pm
Thank you for all the comments :]
If anyone would like me to critique a song, be sure to tell me.
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