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Arcturus Highwind
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:59 am




Sato Ikari

Age
18

Height
5'08"

Weight
185 lbs

Eye Color
Green

Hair Color
Dyed black, naturally brown

Country
Born and Raised in the Land of Fire

Clan
None

Village Rank
Chuunin

Other Titles
That guy who got his hand blew off that one exam. Loser.

Appearance Description
Sato Ikari is a relatively non-descript person, and he works hard to be that way. The side effect is that other than because of his hand, most people don't remember him. The man just laughs and answers "ninjas are supposed to be stealthy" when it is brought up.

His efforts to blend in have resulted in him dying his naturally brown hair to be black, fitting in with the vast majority of the men within his village, though sadly he cannot do anything about his eyes. He works hard to keep himself at an "Average" build, despite his training trying not to bulk up too much for fear of being marked as the muscles guy. He dresses to the role as well, refusing to wear anything "Personal" to mark him out as the rest of the students in his academy did. The black flak jacket he recieved upon achieving Chuunin Rank is always with him, a treasured possession, other than that he tends to wear short sleeved shirts, usually of a single solid dark color, black, navy blues, etc, blue or black jeans, heavy leather boots, usually with the pants tucked into them, and a roll of tape over both the boot and jeans to make sure they can't come loose. His shuriken are kept in a pouch tied around his right thigh, and other tools will be stored within his jacket as necessary. Of course he will change as necessary for climate considerations but will tend to stick with similiar "Drab" clothing to keep in with the local styles and help him blend into the comfortable background. The only other oddity to stick him out is his constant wearing of black gloves over each hand. Regardless of the practicality of it he is never seen without them, due to wanting to hide his false hand.


Personality
Rage and Envy, those could be the two emotions that would best describe Ikari. He has a large chip on his shoulder built up over years at the Village Hidden in the Leaves. In that time he was ignored, belittled, and constantly felt worthless compared to the "Gifted" and "Special" ninjas around him. This resulted in him not trying to stand out, trying to make himself as much a part of the background as possible. He realized he could never actually compete with the blessed children of the clans and these child progidies. But that realization didn't make things any better. It only worsened the resentment he felt towards them. He envied these people who were so talented they never needed to practice. And as he was ignored further (Aided by his own attempts to not stand out) the envy turned to rage. Recent events have only made it worse as between exams he was completely abandoned by his leaders, and during them was continually downplayed against the Golden Children.

History
Sato Ikari was born in the Village Hidden in the Leaves. His parents were good people, but they were not ninjas. They ran a strange restaurant in town, The Black Cat, and while having a fairly good life, pushed hard for thier son to do much better than they do. Thus from a young age they pushed thier boy into the Ninja Academy.

There Ikari found a rough time of it. He was, different, and he realized it. It was not in any way that was better than the other kids, quite the contrary. He found himself lagging behind, having to work twice as hard to get half as far. He was smart enough to do well on the theory, but application, along with his lack of natural talents (Everything came hard to him) just never let him get ahead.

Thus when he graduated, he was dead middle of his class. There was nothing to mark him as needing extra attention as a slacker, and nothing marking him as someone truly special deserving of attentions. He was old a Genin, and somehow found himself slipping through the cracks, without a team, without a elder ninja team leader. He was not even given missions, merely left to his own devices. He spent a lot of time alone near the lake during that period. The despair of his fate, soemthing that was supposed to be happy, exciting, fulfilling, all the things he was promised, turned into an isolated hell for him, delving into his training and a few lost relics he found in his home.

(From this point on, RPed out History)

The only break in this state came when the Chuunin Exams were announced. Despite being a recent graduate, he was asked to participate, the first bit of life he had seen out of his supposed handlers. It brought a new life to the Genin as he met his new teammates, and a condescending woman, a Princess of the Cloud Village. This woman was everything he hated, the blessed child, an aristocrat, and she treated him like a piece of s**t, unworthy of her efforts or even treating him like he was a dangerous opponent as she merely toyed with her Bloodline Gift and refused to take him seriously.

He won that fight however. And this was the bright spot in his otherwise dim life. He took down a spoiled brat princess. The proof in his mind that hard work and will could defeat the quirks of birth. This spoiled brat became enamoured with him, for a reason he could not fashion. Even going so far as to stalk him in the hospital and swear a blood oath in his name, eventually.

The second round saw Ikari in high spirits. He took a ROYAL down a peg, there seemed to be no limits. But sadly he ran into Rikei. He went into the fight thinking Rikei was like everyone else in the village. He fell for a ploy based on that, and lost his left hand in an explosion. Of course, not done, Rikei also gave him an acid bath for good measure and unleased another explosive before the the proctors finally figured that calling the fight would be a good measure.

Thus he spent several weeks in bed, getting treated by the Lady Hokage herself, among others, and recieving an artifical hand made by a Suna Puppet Master (Due to drugging and some misunderstandings he believed the man did it only to pay a debt, a debt which he assumed and would have to pay off to the Lady Hokage).

But soon it was all over. His hand was working, and he was forgotten once more. Yesterday's trash he went back to his isolationist hell and was worse off than before. He was VERY ashamed of the loss of his hand, the only thing that anyone he met afterwards ever remembered him for. It was a dark time, and he could have really used a good friend in this fragile period.

Sadly all he had was the Devil Child Ikihana. Some mutant 10 year old who wasn't even aware of basic chakra usage, or even what chakra was, who was on the fast track, watched over by the Lady Hokage herself and trained personally by the head of the Hyuuga Clan. It was the last straw as he met her, and he decided then to do something about it.

He brought the young Ikihana under his wing, or at least tried to. And taught her what little he knew and could figure out for himself in the absence of any tutors or mentors himself. She became his friend, or at least as close as he ever had to one, and his test subject. A vague idea was forming in his mind, something he was grooming himself and her for that was never to be as Ikihana disappeared from the village.

Alone again unti lthe next Chuunin Exams. Held in a faraway land he had not even heard of before. Regardless Ikari made the trip, without orders and without asking permission. They had forgotten about him for so long, he doubted they cared anyway. Once there he found a place to hole up in the town and await the exams.

It was, in many ways, worse than the first. He could hear the proctors stating who was going to win before the fights even started. Everyone there was a golden boy, though it was obvioius some were given advantages over others. He fought a strange woman who was tougher than 5 men, and who had a weapon that could cripple him without ever even having to touch him. Despite brilliant work on his part, and the inability of his enemies to do any real harm, the proctors still failed his team.

It was in that "Loser's Bracket" he met the Rapist. A strange shapeshifting creature which locked him in a Genjutsu and tried to violate him right there in the exams. She became his nemesis for a long time to come. He managed to paralyze her and detonate a bomb on her, but she came back at him, at full strength, mere minutes later. He brawled with her, delivering solid strikes, locks, and throws that seemed unable to phase her. He would have died there, if not for the intervention of some creature which brought a halt to the exams.

There the Rapist and Ikari were forced to team up, for the time being, to go after an escaped criminal. One that apparently everyone else BUT him had been told about. It was here he met Ikihana again, and watched as turned her back on him, despite him putting his neck on the line to save her. A final betrayal as he went into this last battle confused, demoralized, and empty.

Somehow, he survived. Even when the S Ranked Criminal Roen Jaeger came to pick a fight with him. But through it all, the rigging, the death, the betrayals, the surprise guests, he was given his chuunin's jacket.

And right afterwards, on his way home, ran into a deranged woman whom he refers to only as "Fishboobs" as she seems to be some part human, part fish female from the Land of Water. She was looking for a strange man, which he had agreed to help find (As if the Village was going to give him a mission after all). But before that quest could begin, they were ambushed by two thugs.

Next thing he knew, it all went dark. He awoke in another hospital, a sexy glasses nurse hovering over him.



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Primary Element
Earth

Secondary Element
Fire (When I unlock it)

Sub Element
Metal (Provided Sub Elements are actually used again when I finally get to that point)



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Jutsu and Skills

Attributes:
Ninjutsu: 2/7
Taijutsu: 5/7
Genjutsu: 2/7

Jutsus Learned:

Genin: 4/5 Chuunin: 1/2 Jounin: 0/1

Ninjutsu

Basic Academy training jutsus as standard.


Shackles Jutsu
Level: Chuunin (Was suggested by Shikamaru as such when I created it)
Type: Physical Chakra Activation/Non Elemental.
A jutsu invented and developed by Ikari between exams. It creates a single thick strand of physical chakra upon Ikari's wrist which wraps around a touched target bodypart, forming a bond between the two that cannot be broken unless the jutsu is interrupted or his ability to maintain enough chakra and concentration to keep it going. There is no "Chain" between the connection, his wrist and the target bodypart are locked together touching. Developed from a cross theory between Puppet Control Jutsus and the physical activations needed for water and wall walking.



Taijutsu

Silver Mountain Blade Catch Jutsu
Level: Genin
Type: Taijutsu
Allows the user, with palm spikes to "Catch" a bladed slash coming in at him. He does so by "Clapping" on the blade mid strike, using the palm spikes to stop the momentum of the strike (Seemingly catching it with his hands), and wrapping his fingers over the back of the blade, effetively trapping it in his hand. This is often combined into a disarm and counterattack.


Genjutsu

None learned.

Chakra Control

Water Walking, Wall Walking, and augmented jumping.

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)



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Equipment, Items, Other

Weapons

Shuko: A pair of Palm Spike weapons, concealable, used for palm strikes, aided climbing, and the Blade Catch Jutsu. Almost always has several shuriken on him and the occasional exploding tag if he can get his hands on it, no more than 10 shuriken and 2 tags at any time though unless mission specs provide him with more tools.

Armor

Chuunin Flak Jacket: Hardly considered "armor" in the sense most people think of it. It provides minor protection against strikes and light weapons.

Accessories

Miscellaneous
PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:39 am


Approved.

Orochimaru of the Sannin
Vice Captain


o0Temari0o
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:21 pm


This profile is conditionally held until the profile guidelines have been completed and has been further reviewed.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 8:56 am


Attributes:
Ninjutsu: 2/7
Taijutsu: 5/7
Genjutsu: 2/7

Your character has 3 more points he can spend. If you don't want to, you can just "stock" them until you feel you want to use them, since attributes contend to a person's storyline as well: i.e. Rock Lee would never put points into anything else after maxing Taijutsu.

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Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)

Bayushi the Deciever: Note, he does not know he has this, and has only recieved his first hint that it might be there in the last exams.

This bloodline trait results in a chakra network which exists as much outside his body as within. Someone who uses a gift that can see chakra networks, such as the Byakyugan or Particle Manipulation (?) can see this effect clearly around the user, though a gift that doesn't show such a thing specifically (Such as the Sharingan), would not reveal it.

This network extends from his body in loops extending no farther than 1 foot from him. When someone with the Bayushi trait learns of thier gift and trains it, they can cause these exterior chakra lines to move at thier command, having a disrupting effect on jutsus activated near or at the user. Examples would include a Wave Pattern to the lines, which distorts chakra and jutsus, resulting in a greater difficulty to hit the target, as well as a Spike Pattern, which could be used to disrupt a forming jutsu, and the Lance Pattern, which can not only counter a jutsu but can cause a wave of feedback through the target, disrupting his chakra flow temporarily (Very, like 2 minutes). Such abilities are very draining on the stamina of the user of course, and require a high level of control that the average genin would not be able to use.


I can see that the Kekkei Genkai concentrates on being a jutsu counter rather him being a jutsu user, which goes with what the character is about. Sounds alright to me. Just know that he won't be able to use his secondary element or sub element until much later, which I'm sure you know.

This character is approved.

Ying - Yang
Crew


]-Kakashi-[
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 4:04 pm


This character is once again unapproved.

Firstly, because he can do something like

Quote:
disrupting his chakra flow temporarily (Very, like 2 minutes).


Which isn't "very" at all, being as a turn constitutes about 6-10 seconds. That's a whole fight and then some.

Also, there seems to be only a cursory explanation of what this kekkai genkai actually does. And going by what is written here, I'd have to say this Kekkai Genkai doesn't quite make sense.

Here's why:

The chakra circulatory system exists in the body. That's obvious, but it has tenketsu, or chakra holes, that can release chakra from the body. We see this in Hyuuga strikes, which plug those holes up, making it impossible to use jutsu.

Hey? Did we just stumble on the Hyuuga? What a coincidence.

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the Lance Pattern, which can not only counter a jutsu but can cause a wave of feedback through the target, disrupting his chakra flow temporarily (Very, like 2 minutes).


Funny, could have sworn I heard something like this somewhere before...

Quote:
Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand

Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.


Or, perhaps we can look at...

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a Wave Pattern to the lines, which distorts chakra and jutsus, resulting in a greater difficulty to hit the target


Hm. Sounds like a worse version of...

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Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin

Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.

If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.


Ok. So you've invented a whole second chakra circulatory system to do less than a Hyuuga can do with one. That's fine. It's your Kekkai Genkai to work with, after all. But, even if you maintain that you'd rather be this than a Hyuuga, I still need way more understanding of how this works, and limitations.

As it stands, someone with the fully developed version of this technique can just stand close to someone and tell them "No, you can't" to everything they try. It's this sort of overpowered idea that make original character's Kekkai Genkai consistently so bad. In Cannon Naruto, where characters are almost always stronger than their counterparts in this RP (Under this new system, at least) an impressive Kekkai Genkai is being able to use more elements than usual, or being able to see really, REALLY well.

Rather than just going "My Kekkai Genkai has all these ubersweet powerz!", try "My Kekkai Genkai lets me do this one pretty interesting thing (Like being able to see 360 degrees and spot chakra pathways) and I've, because of this, made a bunch of techniques that capitalize on my ability to do so."

Much cooler.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 5:37 pm


... whatever, it won't survive resembling anything at all like what it was originally designed as so I'm just going without. No bloodline, so am I in yet?

Arcturus Highwind
Crew


]-Kakashi-[
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:04 pm


Approved. For good this time.

Or maybe not.
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