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Proportions, details. [ RED LINES PLEASE D:]

PixeI Dust

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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:11 am

I have some old drawings that I would like red lines and tips for please.

I know it looks horrible, this was before it was cleaned up... I tend to smudge big drawings a lot D: ( any tips on that as well? )
Old Gaia Freebie

These are a mix between cartoon, realistic, anime-ish (my own style I guess)

Sad Clown

Salsa Dancer?

Just A Girl

This one is just two hands.
Still Hold On

(Newest) Pixel Doll. I did not make the base.
Chowder Cosplay

Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 10:08 am

Sorry the writing's sloppy, I tend to tilt my tablet while writing. Hope it still helps though biggrin

Oh, and here's the redline alone if you want to see.
redline alone

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PixeI Dust

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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:46 pm

Thank you.

The face is actually a mask... maybe I should have said that sweatdrop

This is a really old drawing and I though the proportions were odd too o.o

Most of the things you mentioned are things I noticed as well but wasn't really sure about^^

You have any tips on drawing hands and feet? I have been trying but I suck at it D:

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