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i am taking a novel writing class and need some helpful hints on my story ideas.
and once i start writing it (i cant start till noveber) i will post and you can tell me what you think.
so at the moment I have three story ideas and i need to decide which one I want to write. problem is i love all of them. so if you could help it would be nice.


story idea #1
a girl named Karsmen lives on a foating island called Tera' uhn. like the rest of her race she has be taught how to fight. at the moment she is the strongest female and can beat most of the boys. she ends ups falling off tera' uhn and lands in modern day life. she is taken in by Jessica who is a falling medical student. they have a clash of culture but become friends. while this is happening Karsmen's mother Azera jumps down with a boy named Ren, and begin searching for her. although Ren dosn't know it yet. he is in love with Karsmen (he dosn't know what to call his feelings) they begin trying to find Karsmen and Ren find himself along the way. the evil Alizar came down from tera' uhn some time ago. (he wasn't good enough up there so he came down to make an empire) and has become a successful bussiness man. when Karsmen fall he desides to use her to expain his empire. when she refuses he desides that she must be eliminated. it is up to Jessica to keep Karsmen safe. when Azera left Tera' uhn she left the half dragon/half human delmos in charge (Azera is part of the ruling houses) will he be able to keep the ruling houses in order before Azera cames back. will Ren and Azera be able to find Karsmen, and will Jessica find it in herself to save Karsmen. or will they all fall.
idea #2
Katie is a normal girl. until she meets Ken. he means the world to her, but he is a vampire that is trying to kill her. Kayta(is a girl) is a ferurn (another type of vampire) who is hunting ken.after Kayta kills Ken katie then learns that there has been a war going on between the vampries and the Ferurns for ages. she learns that unlike vampires Kayta is alive and need to eat normal food as well as blood. she people repoduce like humans and can turn into anly animal they bite. she also learns that the war is heavly tiped in favor of the Vampries. and for some reason they seemed to be after her.
katie also learns that she is a seer. she see the world difforent then even the vampires. all seerers have two other abillitys other then their sight (the abillity to solve any problem, read coded text, see invisablethigs, ect). hers are furture sight and can walk though walls. together with kayta she fights to keep her life and find out the truth about the war between vampire and the ferurn.

idea #3
Kadja is a Darken, a race of people with animal like ears and tails. the take care of the earth. longago when humans where begining to expand they tare up the earth. this started a war between human and the Darkens.( who have taken it apon them selves to protect the earth)
in modern day the war is forrgottten by most humans. but the darkens still harber a deep hatered to humans. Kadja(who is the youngest prince) is off in is favorite spot when he finds a human sleeping next to a tree. Darkens have a gift of knowing their true love once they see them. so one look and he fell in love with her. at first he tries to forget her but after a year he desides that he can't and starts to think of a way to meet her.( by the way members of the royal familycan read eachothers minds)reita is an normal girl who just graduated from high school. she has never had a boy friend but is looking for one. although she enjoy nature she would rather stay in doors and watch tv.but after she learns about him she too falls in love. she keeps him a secrtet from the human and he keeps he a secret from the darkens. they begin a difficult relationship as they try to get past their difforentces and keep the love a secret.

Inama nushif, al asir hiy ayish
Lia-anni. Zaratha zarati.
Kali bakka a tishuf ahatt
Al hudad alman dali

ninja i actually liked the third one, though i thought th eother two were crap... but that may have just been me trying to find something to like in the options...

ok thanks for your inputs
i've made adjustment on both the frist and second stories so
i will start working on them

sweet
they is some one else doing it too.
i can't believe it is almost november

to answer some of your questions with the frist one. the fallen is slowly taking the world over. he is smart but very weak. he is hoping to buy the world over. he also has a small army working for him. (he's kinda like a mob boss) and to Karsmen he is fairly strong becouse she is very young but comparied to an adult he would be no problem.

but i did really like the thrid one. i think it has more info then the other,

yea i think my vampire story is going to have to wait til twilight dies down.

thanks for you imput

i am sure it has
i ended up going with tera' uhn. and am almost done with the frist chapter

Your grammer and spelling suck, so does your punctuation...

The way i see it is the first one just really really sucks and makes no sence

Number two is twilight with a few new creatures... and lose the name of the seer, seers are people who see the future, not walk thru walls or see invisable things or even coded messages... They might be able to look into the future to learn about the code but that would only work if she had solved the code in the future, which would be impossible...

Number 3, you take the neko and re-name it... I know you also have other animal ears and such but it's just getting really old... also you take the forbidden/hidden love storyline, which is over used as it is

I personally feel that you don't have what it takes to be a write at the present time, work on it... i still don't think you'll make it but what the heck may as well try right?