The thing is I can't cretique My sister's writing.
No matter what I say it's goign to be wrong,.
if I say it to herface, I'l lsay it the wrong way If I respond on the thread, I'll mention it again and she'll get upset.
IT's a very well written piece, but the thing is, when you write a piece to make a point about a genre, or even if that's one of the themes, it SOUNDS like that.
The charactrization was good, the character concpts wer good, the writing was good, verythign about it was good
except it sounded like somebody trying to make a point.
I dunno. Can somone else read it, and see if it's just me being over exposed to my sister's writing themes?
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And it got a bit heavy-handed as I tried and failed to keep it short. 
