It's hard to fully critique some of your artwork since you've used bases/traces as your art pieces. I also don't know if bases are acceptable to use in Gaia shops? I'm fairly new to the Gaia community so I don't know many of the rules or communal ways
ninja I'll just roughly critique or comment on a few of the pieces.
In your first piece, the girl's left leg is angled at an awkward position, and her thigh makes it look like her leg would be facing backward; not forward. I love the shading in her skirt, but I find the shading in her hair and her black vest to be too flat and 2-dimensional. I suggest more shading and highlights
3nodding I love the background you created in the 2nd one, but the water looks A LOT more like blue fire since you made the ripples flow upward, and the splashes look pointed like flames. I don't know the Bleach characters well, but the pale white (with green eyes) has thighs which look more like pants because they get wider at the knees.
In your art piece,
Shukketsu Reikon (first one), The pale girl on the left has a stiff spine, and appears as though her body is facing the audience rather than backing to it. It's because a curve or arch is missing from the spine near her neck. If you notice in
this tutorial, spines are in an "S" shape, and the body of the girl on the left side looks as though she has a "J" shape spine (since you cannot see the arch near the back of her neck).
In the second
Shukketsu Reikon, the face of the female looks elongated since her eye is too low and far from her nose. The glowing effect from her arm is interesting, but I also noticed her right leg to have a lower knee than her left.
And in
Random Roliana request, I enjoy the choice of purples in the picture and you seem to have the anatomy correct; but I wanted to comment on the highlights in her hair. The lighting doesn't make too much sense to me and you need to fully define where lights and shadows disperse.
3nodding Once again as I said in the intro, it's hard to fully rate your art since some of the drawings you've created used bases... but if I were to set a price in your art shoppe, I would suggest around the 4000 - 6000 range.
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