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 Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:13 pm
Years ago, the world ended. Only a few people survived. And from below, a new generation of people rose to the surface. The world is now known as Tentadem. Through the years, Tnetadem underwent numerous amounts of wars. As civility reached it's peak, society crumbled from beneath them. Tentadem fell into the hands of a man gone mad with power.
Out of the horror, a group of people fought for the control of Tentadem. People known only as Civil-Hunters.
Donna watched her mother die. Determined to kill the man responsible for everything, she sets out to find him, and she spares no mercy. To anyone.
Jack watched his father die. Determined to kill the man responsible for his fathers death, he sets out to find him, and he spares no mercy. With the exception of one person. Donna.
The two join together to find and destroy the man responsible. The only thing standing in their way is his army and the labyrinth knwon as Tentadem.
Tell me what you think!
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Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 6:29 pm
Sounds like a very interesting plot. Susceptible to many complications and twist;but then,to me,that's what makes a story worth reading.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:34 am
Lilithmae Sounds like a very interesting plot. Susceptible to many complications and twist;but then,to me,that's what makes a story worth reading. Thanks. It has a ton of twists and many things you wouldn't see coming.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:46 am
Lilithmae Sounds like a very interesting plot. Susceptible to many complications and twist;but then,to me,that's what makes a story worth reading. I Agree and um..I mis read the poll lol...I thought it said did you read it? I thought it was some book already out..heh
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:16 am
CYBizR0llin--KissMySass Lilithmae Sounds like a very interesting plot. Susceptible to many complications and twist;but then,to me,that's what makes a story worth reading. I Agree and um..I mis read the poll lol...I thought it said did you read it? I thought it was some book already out..heh Okay. Thanks.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:42 am
It definitely sounds interesting. Is this a story you are working on?
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:45 am
Awen Dana It definitely sounds interesting. Is this a story you are working on? Yes.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:50 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:54 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:41 pm
Todd186 Lilithmae Sounds like a very interesting plot. Susceptible to many complications and twist;but then,to me,that's what makes a story worth reading. Thanks. It has a ton of twists and many things you wouldn't see coming.
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