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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 6:59 pm

I don't normally draw lolanime or in MSPaint, so I'd love some critique. c: Go ahead and be brutal, I don't mind.

-One sleeve IS suppose to be shorter than the other.
-Half of her head is gone because I tried hair and failed
-I did NOT use a base. This is from scratch.
-I just want critique on the sweater and skin for now.

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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 4:40 pm

hot damn <3. i love the folds in the clothes just awesomeee.

but yah this is a drawing i can't really say much about. what you did is pretty much perfect. the only thing i could say is maybe blend the green color into the skin alittle .. .. but thats about it smile

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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:12 pm

Goshujin Sama

hot damn <3. i love the folds in the clothes just awesomeee.

but yah this is a drawing i can't really say much about. what you did is pretty much perfect. the only thing i could say is maybe blend the green color into the skin alittle .. .. but thats about it smile

Thank you very much! c: Blend the green color into the skin a little? Iunno if I'm sure what you mean.

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:27 pm

color is build up of light reflecting and bouncing around .. and there is always a little reflective soft light in the shadows of things. so in the shadow of the skin that's closest to the sweater .. its not weird if the green of the sweater reflect a little on the skin smile

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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 8:47 pm

As mentioned before the folds are awesome! xD I think it looks good so far. Maybe consider leaving the hair white? It looks nice like that.. well at least i think so.

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Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 1:59 pm

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color is build up of light reflecting and bouncing around .. and there is always a little reflective soft light in the shadows of things. so in the shadow of the skin that's closest to the sweater .. its not weird if the green of the sweater reflect a little on the skin smile

Oh, I see what you mean~ Thanks for the advice! It may be a tad difficult for me to try that though. This guild is about improvement though, right? c:

Shoko: Hair is very very difficult on pixel art. x3 I think leaving it white would be a good idea, thanks!

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