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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 9:32 am

These are my two newest photos. Lemme know what you think please. And yes, I know the horizon is crooked on the sunset. I couldn't fix it.

http://ladyphotographer492.deviantart.com/art/Ferris-Wheel-137502080

http://ladyphotographer492.deviantart.com/art/River-Sunset-137398811

Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 6:15 pm

Wasn't able to see the first link, but the second one is okay. The colors are pretty but it's not much to look at. But hey, I'm no professional. sweatdrop

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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:42 am

First link not working.. Love the colours in the sunset biggrin

Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:27 pm

The sunset would be better in 'langscape' (horizontal) orientation. At my opinoin.

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Bituminous Sky
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 8:25 pm

Please don't post links. Use flickr or photobucket to host your photos and post the actual images in the thread. It makes it easier for us to critique them. Also your first link isn't working.

The second one is alright. The colours are really nice but your horizon is crooked and the composition is boring and flat. Try shooting from a different angle, like lay down on the ground, or aim your camera down or up by a more extreme angle instead of shooting straight ahead.

Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 8:33 pm

I love the reflection, but the image lacks quality.

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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:40 am

The first thing I notice when I see this picture is the beautiful colors. It seems like it is in a dream-like state and makes me smile. I think the reason why I don't frown and say, "Oh, it's another sunset photo..." is because you have something in the foreground. It gives the picture a lot more in-depth feeling.

The only thing that really bothers me is the grain in the water in front of you. D: Grain is like my #1 serious pet peeve of photography. XD Although, you had no way of preventing this by your own accord since it is mainly the cameras fault. smile

Ok, and here is MY personal preference in photography critic. We all have different color preferences! I would've made the dark colors even darker, and brightened up the sky a bit. I love contrast in my photos! I also like it better when sky photos have a bit of a heavenly look, haha.

Keep snapping! <3 You only go up from here!

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:19 am

Flavren

you had no way of preventing this by your own accord since it is mainly the cameras fault. smile

Nothing is the camera's fault. If you know how to use your equipment properly, you wouldn't run into those kinds of issues. Grain control is entirely possible with proper light settings. Blaming it on the camera is super lazy and implies that you as a photographer have no control over your gear, which is completely untrue.

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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:07 am

Bituminous Sky

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you had no way of preventing this by your own accord since it is mainly the cameras fault. smile

Nothing is the camera's fault. If you know how to use your equipment properly, you wouldn't run into those kinds of issues. Grain control is entirely possible with proper light settings. Blaming it on the camera is super lazy and implies that you as a photographer have no control over your gear, which is completely untrue.

But if the camera was without proper light and you had no way of obtaining light, and the camera had no settings to get light. ? XD I know you can set most cameras to a larger f-stop, but I didn't think the person was using a DSLR camera. Most digitals don't have that kind of settings. o_o
I am familiar enough with my own camera to prevent grain, but I am very unfamiliar with the camera this person is wielding.
Sorry if I offended you. ^_^

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