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 Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:56 pm
Can you write a poem? This is the place to post it.
I'll begin with one...but be prepared....it was thought up in 20 seconds and I am no poet!
There once was a girl named Lynn
She giggled a lot and did grin
A tickle made her smile
and she laughed all the while
But never punch her in the chin!
omg rofl...that was fun!
Next????
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:15 pm
00LynnZebra Can you write a poem? This is the place to post it. I'll begin with one...but be prepared....it was thought up in 20 seconds and I am no poet!
There once was a girl named Lynn
She giggled a lot and did grin
A tickle made her smile
and she laughed all the while
But never punch her in the chin!
omg rofl...that was fun! Next???? I met a girl, her name was Lynn and though she had a funny grin her soul i saw in laughter hidden in the abyss for us forbidden She was like kite in storming sky held up by thread so very high Oh, blessed line, hold o'r Lynn tight Don't let her go on free wild flight!
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:10 pm
Dark Crossover 00LynnZebra Can you write a poem? This is the place to post it. I'll begin with one...but be prepared....it was thought up in 20 seconds and I am no poet!
There once was a girl named Lynn
She giggled a lot and did grin
A tickle made her smile
and she laughed all the while
But never punch her in the chin!
omg rofl...that was fun! Next???? I met a girl, her name was Lynn and though she had a funny grin her soul i saw in laughter hidden in the abyss for us forbidden She was like kite in storming sky held up by thread so very high Oh, blessed line, hold o'r Lynn tight Don't let her go on free wild flight! omg i love that! I read The Kite Runner last summer and the feeling of your poem reminded me of it. ty Dark...lovely poem 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:54 am
It was my pleasure... Pity i never read the Kite runner!
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:08 am
Dark Crossover It was my pleasure... Pity i never read the Kite runner! You should. It really is quite the book. Sad yet a book i couldn't put down. It gives your images of kites a deeper feel.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:32 am
00LynnZebra Dark Crossover It was my pleasure... Pity i never read the Kite runner! You should. It really is quite the book. Sad yet a book i couldn't put down. It gives your images of kites a deeper feel. if you tell me the author i will find it. but wait a minute!!! isn't this thread supposed to be containing verses???? no more unrthymed words! Poetry time! Give us some Rhyme!
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:42 am
So it is....rhyming is bliss
Now i continue
with rhymes for you
The author you seek
is one that makes you think deep
His name is Khaled Hosseini
and his soul is shown to the reader in words a plenty
Read it and see
his thoughts and dreams
then tell me what you think
share with me then we will toast with a drink
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:07 am
00LynnZebra So it is....rhyming is bliss Now i continue with rhymes for you The author you seek is one that makes you think deep His name is Khaled Hosseini and his soul is shown to the reader in words a plenty Read it and see his thoughts and dreams then tell me what you think share with me then we will toast with a drink Knowledge toast And milk of emotions That's what's been mixed In that bookshaped potion Sure i have no escape in this case and breach of the word is like mud over face! So i will head to the library soon and dig into books as in bushes racoon I'll search it all over And finally find "Khaled Hosseini" one of a kind. I seak for an ending For these silly speach I wish that my English were a lil bit more rich XD
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:19 am
Your English is fine!
In fact...divine!
I'd read your words again and again.
Your prose I would seek
to the ends of gaia
and not I would complain.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:29 am
00LynnZebra Your English is fine! In fact...divine! I'd read your words again and again. Your prose I would seek to the ends of gaia and not I would complain. Swift as a squirrel and wise as an awl Two contradictions' been mix't in a bawl I am amused on the spead of your posts As if you were under help of some ghosts! But words are evasive Their meaning is vague My spelling is good, yet Pronaunciation is "plague"! I hope we will move our topic from words to love, to romance, and to twittering birds!
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:22 pm
Dark Crossover 00LynnZebra Your English is fine! In fact...divine! I'd read your words again and again. Your prose I would seek to the ends of gaia and not I would complain. Swift as a squirrel and wise as an awl Two contradictions' been mix't in a bawl I am amused on the spead of your posts As if you were under help of some ghosts! But words are evasive Their meaning is vague My spelling is good, yet Pronaunciation is "plague"! I hope we will move our topic from words to love, to romance, and to twittering birds! Again sweet perfect words how do you do this? you make things sound like bliss!
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:37 pm
00LynnZebra Dark Crossover 00LynnZebra Your English is fine! In fact...divine! I'd read your words again and again. Your prose I would seek to the ends of gaia and not I would complain. Swift as a squirrel and wise as an awl Two contradictions' been mix't in a bawl I am amused on the spead of your posts As if you were under help of some ghosts! But words are evasive Their meaning is vague My spelling is good, yet Pronaunciation is "plague"! I hope we will move our topic from words to love, to romance, and to twittering birds! Again sweet perfect words how do you do this? you make things sound like bliss! Now, just to relax- no more rhymes I got no idea how do poems appear Must be some magical chimes Muses fly by, and ring silver bells Round them dwarfs cast efficient spells Listen to them and put down all heard. That is the way to collect rhymed word. Oh, i wanted to avoid rhyme.
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:40 am
none of them know who this one's foe
seeing shapes and shadows
but no abode is more foe to him
then a simplest knife
for home holds more then just
our dearest possessions of life
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 6:42 am
I wake up in the morning
on a Saturday or Sunday
and i rush to this place
to see who has posted and what they had to say
I've had my coffee
I've had my toast
and now my friends
I come here to post!
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:35 am
dark_night_dragon none of them know who this one's foe seeing shapes and shadows but no abode is more foe to him then a simplest knife for home holds more then just our dearest possessions of life In shapeless expressions or meaningless lines i find my weak points, where my ignorance lies. But grant me forgiveness For i fell from grace... To land of my house My mind leads my pace. In couple of hours like dawn misty shadows I will disappear From zOMG fertile meadows Forget me not.
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