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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 1:19 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 1:20 pm
88.5//150 diino:: 6.5.6.6.5=28 needs work on color distribution Lin: 6, 6.5, 6, 6, 5 = 29.5 I like the different shades of blue/teal, but I wish they were matched a bit better. The Ritzy headpiece is especially off. theme is also pretty blah, you've used a lot of "stock" items, that are tried and tested to layer well and look decent with almost any avatar. It's not bad, definitely, but I hope you do step it up a bit in future rounds. Autio: 7.7.6.6.5 = 31 Ditto what Diino said about the color distribution. Hair is a giant chunk of black, torso is mostly light blue, and your slippers don't match anything.
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:37 pm
125.5//150 diino:: 8.9.8.7.8=40 jam can do no wrong, i love the layering on the head and the colors used, you definitely used that skin to it's peek, great job. it's always a pleasure seeing what you come up with. Lin: 8.5, 9, 8, 8, 8 = 41.5 Arrgh, Jam, for once I'd love to say that something you've made doesn't amaze me! So there, that in itself is your biggest critique. XD Honestly though, it's beautiful; I love the original and striking color scheme, and all of the lovely textures. One thing I would like to say though is that there's a lot of that light, tan-ish color on the torso, and hardly any on the head/legs. Great overall though, as usual. Autio: 9.9.9.8.9 = 44 This is beautiful. First time I've ever said that about an avi without hair. xD It's somehow simple, elegant, and complex at the same time. Gorgeous color choices too.
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:38 pm
100//150 -Le Chien Chat-  XD This is my entry so there is no confusion this time >D 5.5.7.6.5=28 this is under par from what i would expect from you, i cant even tell what your skin is, if i hadn't have remembered what i gave you i'd be completely lost. just because you were given an animal type of skin doesn't mean go and make an animal, but at the same time something like that would have fit the theme better than this does. the blocky red dress doesn't work well with layering and it makes everything else look awkward. this is definitely a bad wip not a final. Lin: 6, 7.5, 7, 7.5, 6 = 34 I actually like this more than the other judges do for whatever reason, although I do see where they're coming from. You really didn't showcase your skin, you just covered it up, which is exactly the opposite of what you should have done. But I do like the layering of all the items on the torso and the skirts, and the face. Autio: 5.6.7.7.5 = 30 This doesn't really showcase the skin at all. Neck down is gorgeous, the head really doesn't do it for me. Skin balance!!! Especially in a skin challenge
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:39 pm
74.5//150 diino:: 6.4.4.4.5=23 the layering is nonexistent, there are colors that are only in the places of their initial items, like the tiger and the feet. and it's not very good generally speaking. Lin: 5, 5.5, 7, 3, 6 = 26.5 Pretty good in theory, very lacking in execution. What annoys me the most is that there's NO layering whatsoever. When you're using in the ballpark of 10 items, you should really look at the result and ask yourself, "Is there anything else I could do with this?" Because there usually is. I actually do really like the face, but everything else - especially the feet - is lacking. Autio: 5.5.6.3.6 = 25 I've come to expect more of you :c I don't even know what to say about this. It looks unfinished and [sorry] noobish.
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:42 pm
109//150 Kikibeau  So many stripes! Lin: 6, 6.5, 8.5, 6, 6 = 33 When I first looked at this, I wasn't so sure about it, but then it kind of grew on me. It's definitely a hell of a lot of stripes, but that works with the skin you were given. I wish you'd layered on top of the hat more, and that there was more blue at the feet, but it's solid overall. I love the faux stripes you made with the layered foot items. diino: 8.7.7.8.8=38 I love it all, except that hat. I think you picked it because the color worked kind of (its far darker than the other blues) but it bring a flair of noob esque to the avi. Which is a shame for what has great potential, i would say that it would have be better with a few alterations but it's not a complete wip avi. Autio: 7.8.8.7.8 = 38 I really like this for some reason. It's visually interesting and I have to keep looking at it. Major beef = hat = hate.
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:43 pm
91//150 the only shark goth people say to revise it, but i dont know how, i'm just gonna turn it in now.  Lin: 5.5, 6, 7, 6.5, 5.5 = 30.5 You've definitely improved, so congratulations. I actually hope that you get to stick around for some time, so we can see you progress even more. I think you could have taken more risks with color, even just by adding some items that matched the green of the skin. I also don't like the hair, but the layering on the torso is pretty well done. Keep at it, you've proven that you have potential for growth! diino: 5,6,6,5.5,6=28.5 The hair is a distraction, it doesnt fit anywear on the avi. I think you used to to avoid being bottom heavy but it does NOT work to your advantage. You did a great job with the skin, in the places that you can see it. and i admit you've improved, so keep improving round by round and you may just go from the bottom two loser, of round one, to becoming a winner. Autio: 5.6.6.7.8 = 32 The torso layering on this is actually very nice. I wish you'd' have done without the white, I think it'd have been amazing without the mask & hair. Don't think I've ever seen that skin look so good!
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:44 pm
84//150 Ice Cold Faerie Here you go  Lin: 6, 5.5, 6.5, 5, 5.5 = 28.5 You've also improved, so good job there, but I'd say you still have a ways to go. I like the detail on the head and face, but from the neck down it looks lazy. I agree with Autio that the fan covering the legs is a cop-out, and it doesn't seem that much attention was paid to the torso. Autio: 7.5.6.5.5. = 28 I don't get it. Looks unfinished and that fan seems like a cop-out on the legs. I spy a bare foot peeking out, and none of your blues match. Diino: 6,5,5,5,6.5,5=27.5 Last round you and one other were declared the worst, your counterpart managed to improve greatly beyond our exceptions. You on the other hand. Well it doesnt look like you've improved at all. This is an unflattering avatar, the layering is minimal, it looks as if you used that fan to avoid making a bottom, half. OR that you were drawing inspiration from the fan. in any case it's the focal point of the entire avi and that was not only not the task, but it doesnt work to your advantage. if your not eliminated this round i advise trying harder.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 2:18 pm
120.5/150 Shawana_Chou ☺☻☺☻☺ Here's my 'Skin' use entry. I tried to show off the skin as well I could, while still create a decent avatar.
 ☻☺☻☺☻ Lin: 7.5, 8, 8.5, 6.5, 8 = 38.5 Oooh, nice. I like it a lot. I love love love that you matched that creamy tan color so well, and that you did so much with texture. That really makes up for the simple layering. The colors chosen to complement the skin are great too, especially that creamy tan. Ugh, I just love that color! I do wish that you'd re-thought the shoe layering, and perhaps layered something under the shorts, but those aren't huge issues. Autio: 8.8.9.7.8 = 40 I lovelovelove this. Texturegasms! It reminds me of a character from something. Great discovery with the ears. Diino: 8.9.8.9.8=42 is this the smell of yet a second winner? I've never seen this avi done in such unique fashion. Congrats for thinking outside the box and not going with that wretched purple. the colors you chose were hiding in that skin and you extracted it like some sort of mad scientist. anyway this is great no real feedback though. sorry.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 2:20 pm
72.5/150 Mr Meow Meows  I made this SUPER quick because I wasn't sure when the due date was exactly. I've been on and off lately, so I apologize if this is late. Diino: 4,4.5,4,4.5,3.5=20.5 simpsons killer? is that it? i dont get it. i would expect so much over this. it's s**t to be frank. you obviously didint try. first color: though a killer avi is boring, you and i both know that you could have incorperated that red throughout the avatar which would have added to the layering as well. The dead guy makes the avatar unmatching (skin tone) and bottom heavy, That sword matches nothing but the shine on his face and the shirt on the dead guy. which is TERRIBLE. Lin: 5, 5.5, 4.5, 4, 5 = 24 I understand that you didn't have much time to make this, but....huh? I thought you would know better than to make an avatar that looks like a cheap cosplay. I guess the dead guy is there for theme's sake, but he's so distracting in many ways. So is the pool of blood. Without those items, this might have been kind of okay, although still lacking in major areas. Try harder, you can do it! Autio: 5.5.6.4.4. = 28 Ah, kitty, you've been nothing but a disappointment so far :c I'm used to your awesomeness. This looks like a noob's idea of awesome. Plz to be making awesome next round? x3
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 5:57 pm
96/150 Crescent the grumpy bunny Lin: 6.5, 7, 6.5, 6, 6 = 32 Pretty cute, but not particularly stunning. The only thing that I REALLY love is the layering of that dress with the Fremere's Guard gold bodysuit thing. The black of the eye really stands out to me - maybe a better choice would have been Dandy's Reprise eyes, since that would have also added some more of the lighter yellow that's introduced by the dress. Also, the little star-looking guy is totally random. Diino:6.7.6.6.7=32 The layering is cute, and the avi is simple but still has a flair to it, the colors could have been thought out distribution wise a little but, you've made a cute avi that is generally constructed well. Autio: 6.7.6.6.7 = 32 This is really cute, but the background items don't seem necessary at all and the blue doesn't quite make it to the feet. Blank face is blaank.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 5:58 pm
89/150 Twilightbreathe I personally love this tektek, so even if none of the judges do...I still will! :3  diino:5.6.7.7.5=30 Lin: 5.5, 6, 7, 6.5, 4 = 29 Theme is really suffering here, because I can't even tell what your skin was. I too had to go to the list to check. Also it's a REALLY safe color scheme, with messy textures and a lot of pretty random items. Reds could also be matched better. It's not bad, I'm not saying that, but's it's just...safe, and overdone. Autio: 5.6.7.7.5 = 30 Can't really see the skin at all, had to go look at the list to see what it was. Some of your reds are off, and all the sticky-outy bits bother me.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:04 pm
108/150 Cyan Azzura Ri Sorry about the title, but I couldn't find the round name.. ._.diino: 6.6.7.7.6=32 you didint show of the skin as much as it was intended that you do. The bra as impre said really sticks out and doesnt look good, there are certain colors you should have distributed more like the purple. Lin: 7.5, 8.5, 8, 7, 6 = 37 Nice, I like it quite a lot. Surprisingly refreshing for an avatar that basically has a red/black/white color scheme. I love the details, and how well it flows. (With the exeption of the sword, which kinda cuts off the feet - I swear, no pun intended) Overall shape is also really nice. Autio: 8.8.8.7.8 = 39 This is lovely. Fallen wish boob covers stick out annoyingly. Loving the small details.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:05 pm
83.5/150 ~Emo_Cottonball~ Here's My Round 2 Entry.  diino::6.6.6.5.4=27 the theme is very week, i agree with the other judges you made an avatar around the skin and not with it. Lin: 5, 6.5, 6.5, 5.5, 5 = 28.5 I kind of giggled when I saw this. You can't really not giggle. It's not a bad thing to be funny, but when you're not trying to be - well, it's not great. You didn't integrate the skin into your theme, you just layered a bunch of "stock" items in safe colors on top of it. If you removed the snout thing and really tried to work with the skin instead of around it, this could work. But right now it's definitely more of a WIP quality avatar. Autio: 6.7.6.5.4 = 28 Lolwut? Looks like you completely ignored the skin and just made a semi-decent avatar as if it wasn't there. This confuses me.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:45 pm
109.5/150 Lin: 6.5, 7, 8, 6, 8 = 35.5 Now you see Riyo, you did a fine job with that skin! It's definitely difficult to work with, and you utilized it well. It does seem pretty bottom heavy, and I agree that the halo seems off. But I love that you used subtly different shades of blue and white and matched them nicely. Good job. Autio: 7.7.8.7.7 = 36 This is gorgeous. Even though you covered most of the skin, I love how you kept the ethereal feel of it. Halo is the only thing that feels off to me. diino: 8.8.7.7.8=38 this is a complete unique and gorgeous avatar, im glad you didint try to make a weather or ghost avatar like most do with this avi (if it is a ghost it's not the stereotypical ghost) it's beautiful and looks like you've really embraced the theme.
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