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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:31 pm
(P.S. Please ignore Tyche crits.)
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:33 pm
The girl! Name : Genevieve Ame Nicknames : Viv or Vivi
Age : 16
Birthday : October 15. Sign : Libra
Blood type : B
Fav. Food : Chocolate truffles and Honey ice cream Hated Food : Salty and Spicy foods.
Family : Both parents and that's it. She's a natural born citizen of Destiny City as are her parents. They are the children of immigrants from Southern France.
School : Crystal with scholarship help.
Hobbies : Window Shopping - Vivi, even with a part time job and small allowance, will never be able to afford the same things she sees the other girls at Crystal wearing. Ever. So instead she spends her free time staring through the windows and fantasizing about ways she could get those items. Stealing isn't an option as she's too "honorable" for that. IE - You don't get the same status when you steal the items. As she gets older, and different situations arise, this may be subject to change. She's open to ideas.
Baking & candy making - Vivi likes to work in the kitchen. Getting fed up with having to go out and buy the sweets she's so in love with, she worked out the math and figured that making these things herself would be more cost effective. She works as hard as she can on it in the hopes that the better she gets, the more people will pay her for her services.
Drama class - She is not, by any means, the best when it comes to acting... But she has enough awareness of her body and voice to make an impact with the characters given her. It doesn't bother her that she never gets the lead, just getting to be on stage gets her noticed and helps her release any unused creativity energy. That's good enough for her.
Gemstone : Tourmaline
Virtues : Adaptive : Using her natural flair for the dramatic and way with words to her advantage, Genevieve can spin a situation in almost any way she wants. Seeing the silver lining in everything that comes her way she will use all her wits and assets to turn a bad thing into a good thing. She's kind of the McGuyver of rainbows, unicorns, and sunshine. If there's a way to make something less sucky for herself and friends, she'll make it work. Even if she has to use bubble gum and a paper clip to do so.
Creative - It doesn't really matter the medium, Vivi sees art in everything and she likes to put her personal touch on whatever it is. Her signature. This makes working with her fun and exciting as she always has ideas and wants to share them with you(LET HER SHARE THEM). Give Genevieve one thing and tell her to turn it into another and she will do her damnedest to make it as beautiful as she is physically able.
Determined : You aren't going to get what you want if you just sit there and whine about it. Nothing annoys Viv more than people that won't work for what they want. When Genevieve has set her sights on something she wants practically nothing can get in her way. Everything and everyone is fair game in her plots to get whatever it is she wants to accomplish. She'll attempt to use puppy eyes, and should those fail(as they usually do) she will grab you and physically force you to follow her.
Flaws : "God, this b***h is bossy" : You just don't want to give Genevieve power... Even when it's unavoidable. This is one girl that will make your life miserable when placed into any kind of control over another person. Though there's that flip side that she gets s**t done- Vivi is not nice, in any conceivable way, about it. Essentially what it boils down to is that she knows she isn't as pretty or rich as most of the other girls she's around her and when she's allowed power over them something in her just -snaps-. They get to have all the fun and control. Over staff, over friends, ... Over Vivi. When it's her turn, she can and will do all she can to enjoy it while it lasts.
Self Centered : The world may not revolve around Vivi, but she certainly believes that it should. She simply cannot fathom why anyone else would think differently, and when she comes against those that feel thus she will simply not stop until they see and understand that she's simply the best person to ever exist. Ever. This particular aspect of her personality is the hardest for her to stifle- If she feels your arm is bare and needs to be doodled on by her, then poo on you. She knows better. Vivi claims that she's "better than stealing"? Well ... That is more than subject to change if it means getting something she absolutely, the world will end if she doesn't get it, needs.
"Please shut up. Please." : Yup, she's a talker. And no, she's not the type of talker where even though it takes several tries to disengage conversation it will happen- Those are bothersome but eventually go away. No no nonono. Vivi is that girl that not only follows you ALL OVER THE STORE, waits for you at the checkout, and walks you to the car just so she can keep talking. She's the girl that then meets you at your house and will attempt to invite herself in because gosh darn-it what she has to say is that important. Even when it really isn't.
Jealous : Don't. Touch. Vivi's. Things. Seriously, she's not one usually prone to physical violence but she will take a b***h out. This extends to things beyond just personal belongings. Vivi is insanely jealous and protective of her friends often times having a very hard time letting new people into her happy group. Ideas are the same thing- Taking credit for something that Vivi had a hand in is the same thing as if you'd just killed her, taken her identity, and were living her life. It usually ends in a lot of screeching and screaming, profanities, and if it really gets down to it she's not afraid to go one-on-one in a cat fight.
Physical Description :
Hair : Naturally honey colored, she dyes the ends a dramatic deep pink color. Semi-long(two inches above the small of her back when down) and straight, she pulls it up into two untidy buns on either side of her head.
Eyes : Perpetually in a wide-eyed innocent, shock-like, state. Deep plum in color.
Face : Cherub cheeked and heart shaped. All her head is missing is a halo.
Body : Short, just about 5'1", and curvacious. She's got hips and boobs and she knows it. She weighs about 145 lbs.
Fashion : Vivi works part time at a bakery & cafe to be able to afford the same designer bags and clothing the other girls at Crystal wear when not at school. Otherwise if it is pink, lacy, and candy or heart related it is all good. She always has gold hoops in her ears and a lollipop shaped pendant about her neck(she likes to chew on this).
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:21 pm
The Negaverse soldier!Negaverse : Lieutenant ChromiteChallenge : Long - Life only gets to be lollipops and sprinkles for me, Cupcake. Get used to it. Short - The cake is a lie. Weapon : Guns + candy = awesome. Level 1 - Marshmallow Shooter. (Air pumped marshmallow gun.) Level 2 - Bubble Gum Shotgun. (This puppy spits out wads of bubblegum, dealing fairly minimal damage and gumming up those pesky Sailor Scouts and their stupid skirts.) Level 3 - Bod-breaker Tommygun. (Just what it sounds. The firing of the gun would create a high enough heat as to melt the sugary insides of the jawbreakers it would shoot. Upon impact the JBs would shatter, spattering the enemy with hot napalm-like sugar.) Thanks Shini!Level 4 - Sweet, Sweet, RPG. (Rocket Propelled Grenade launcher that shoots very large candy balls handmade by Lt. Chromium. Inside are candy scraps that upon impact explode out, creating sugary shrapnel.) Uniform :Primary color - Pinkish/purple heather gray in a tweed or herringbone pattern/fabric. Secondary color(trim) - Bright, but not neon, pink. Lace - Black or pink. Gloves - Dark pink. Uniform style : Jacket -- Large lapel style military jacket cropped under the bust. 3/4 sleeves with exaggerated cuffs. Buttoned up by double buttons in the front. Dress -- Pencil-style sheath dress with asymmetric criss-cross trim on one side. Black or pink lace trims the bottom. Accessories -- Just dark pink gloves covering all skin on her arms and hands not covered by the jacket. Shoes -- Shiny patent leather ballet flats. No stockings.
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:54 pm
Le gasp! I havent crited this yet? For shame! You need a little Plz Crit sign in your title -nods-
First of all, omg her name is win! -glees over genevieve- I would love it if you'd toss out an ethnicity -is she french, german, russian, brittish, american etc..- Her hobbies are..well..creative! -squees- HURRAY! I'm so glad you didnt put cooking as a hobbie -would have died- Thats some pretty unique stuff there, plus the making candy, lovely!
Virtueesss..- Sociable is good, obviously she would enjoy parties and people, etc. But it seems a bit deeper then sociable. Someone who's sociable socializes well, has lotsa friends, gets along well with others, but they don't necessarily need people. Your girl sounds like she absolutely needs companions and friends or else she falls into the depressed/lonely/sadish zone.. That fact almost turns her sociableness into a flaw instead of making it a virtue.
With diplomatic and being a brown noser..You should just combine the two, take brown noser out of the flaws and use it to add onto the diplomatically. Because being a brown noser certainly helps one with being diplomatic -since she seems to be able to spin the situation any way she wants.-
Self centered and domineering, epic, as is the jealousy! Weapons..Omg she needs candy weapons! Alrighty then! First of all if shes going that rout...Instead of trying to take the candy and turn it into a weapon..dagger..hammer..etc..Use the candies natural candidness to cause evil! Her first weapon could be a giant marshmallow hammer! -naturally not deadly..its a marshmallow- Her next weapon could be a giant candy cane -candy canes are hard and heavvyyy- Equiped with a mini chocolate chip shield -I havent seen any sword and shield weilding Lt.s yet so that'd be unique- The posibilitys are infinite..licorice whip..a lolli pop shooter -imagine those old type tommy guns, with chains of bullets etc- Except hers would have a chain of lollipops and shot them rapid fire woot! Bubble gum traps of doom...a whole candy aresenal!
Otherwise I think you've done a gret job with her! I love the concept you have going right now -nods- Its epic!
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:05 pm
Aha! The Senshi quest is up! Hooray!
Thanks Shini! <3 I really like that Giant Marshmallow hammer idea, and am definitely going to use the licorice whip. So thanks for that!
I have brown noser and diplomacy set as different things, because she doesn't use diplomacy or words to brown nose. With her brown-nosing is more about giving people special treats or fawning all over them to get what she wants. Where as diplomacy is more about diffusing a situation she sees as bad, and using it by negotiating and being civil. Do those distinctions make sense?
I do need to explain sociable better, yeah. She won't fall into a trap of depression, she just feeds off of other's energy and would prefer to have that extra boost of fun around at all times.
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:21 pm
Ahh I see -nods- Yes that does make more sense when you explain it like that -giggles- Glad ya like the weapons idea -Weapons rock go bad guys!!-
Oooh more for shini to chew on..ah...crit...You can crit me back if you want its somewhere on the first page here..sumwhere..
Ooooh LUCK SENSHI! -tingles inside- Again I love the names you make up for these guys! -shot-
Her second attack should totally be titled Gambling Act:, or something to do with gambling, since you mentioned how the goddess had a ball to represent the unsteadiness of chance etc... I've gotta say I adore her a wholee lot for just what you have on her even if it isnt very much! Though you might want to have a hobbie/flaw/virtue that ties her more thoroughly into her senshi theme.
Like your Lt girl has her making candy/working in a cafe that makes her weapons and Lt Title make sense.
Your milena, she sounds like shes a total grey area when it comes to being a senshi, all blind to good and evil etc a total middle ground -LOVE IT- Your girl should maybe have a hobbie that involves enjoying gaining money, cheating people out of money in a fair way possibly? Would she ever do those neat shuffle shell games ya know..Find the ball under the cup and win a nickle! Either way from what I'm seeing you've got the ideas you want and all you have to do is put em down and it'll be good! -love love loveee..- As for her fuku..hmmnn..Wheat gold and turquoise..good colors, possibly would she have the whole gypsy thing theme going on? Lots of little sashes or scarves on her outfit with those little jingly coin things attatched to them. I love the idea of the blindfold. Or would her outfit maybe be more representative of poker cards and chips! -that could also be cool- Either way I'm loving it and I cant wait to see it fleshed out.
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:25 pm
I was hoping with Milena that her die-hard love of Bingo was a good representation of that, but I could definitely see her having poker nights and using that to her own monetary advantage. Especially against poker newbies.
I was talking in the thread earlier how I would really love for her fuku to be a good modern twist on the costumes of Fortuna and Tyche, the Roman and Greek goddesses of Luck. I just don't know how I'm going to go about doing that yet.
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:46 pm
Ahh I see! -nods- Tyche and fortuna...-dashes to research- Greek goddesss Tyche holds a ball in one hand and a basket of coins in another..lotsa gold scattered at her feet. Roman goddess of luck fortuna... She also carries a basket of coins in her left hand, and usually has wings/surrounded by flowers butterflys etc.. She's got a crown, and the blindfold! -ahh I see- And! In the statue a necklace mmmn.. Possible Fuku design gone modern! - See the medalion? First of all I'd take that necklace of hers, turn it into your senshis choker gem/her symbol -like how some senshi have suns and moons on their bows yours could have that medal- Coins seem a big theme in both goddess's but we no longer rely on gold coins as a standard, we use paper money! Your senshi, -crazy right?- Could somehow have some form of paper money incorporated into her design? -maybe foreign paper money design cause its pretty- Definitely leave the blind fold over one eye -hee hee love- Maybe the orb, instead of just an orb could be a magic 8 ball? -random but that's one of those luck/chance/ items that people seem to love- Since your senshi is also the senshi of luck! Maybe..other lucky items? -I dont know why lucky rabbits feet come to mind but they do- As far as the outfit might go, maybe a mini senshi cape? She could have the whole sandals thing going on..etc..-actually isnt tooo amazing with senshi designs blech-
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:52 pm
I love that medallion! It'd be much better on the bow than a cornucopia design/charm like I was just thinking.
I think I want the top and skirt to be a mix of traditional Senshi and the goddesses dresses, but I'll have to sketch all that out and decide from there. I want long-ish sleeves and a card band on one arm as well, but I think I may reserve that for Star or Eternal. A later stage at any rate.
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Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 10:58 am
Added a concept costume to Tyche's post, but I'm working on a different one. I think the one I have up I may save for her Super fuku.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:01 am
I messed around with Chromium's weapons. Any thoughts?
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 8:36 pm
HEY GUIS. I would REALLY like crits on Sailor Tyche.
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 9:00 pm
I like Tyche.
She sounds interesting...in the way she's fickle and all.
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