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Eternal Remembrance Captain
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 Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:37 pm
This is a forum for any mistakes you find in the book so far, so please catch them. I'm hoping to get this perfect, so i need some effort put into this =3
Thanks guys!
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:25 am
hmmm im looking for mistakes i MIGHT have found a few but im double checking to make sure
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:36 pm
In the first few chapters, you don't have to keep writing "Master Smith"
You really only need to keep Smith. If its his name then you write Smith, but this is a title, so that works too
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:32 am
Yue Akuma: Keep looking for those mistakes, so i can fix em =3
silverwolf: Master Smith IS his title, so i need to keep writing Master Smith. He's not just a blacksmith, hes a MASTER smith =3
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Eternal Remembrance Captain
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