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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:16 am
People tell me this reminds them of Edward and Bella. I can asure you this is not about them, I wrote this before I read the books.
Why did love touch us? I don't understand..... Why would a thing so beautiful... Touch something like us? When we became what we are... That feeling should have disappeared.... Why didn't it? My Darling.... You promised you wouldn't leave me.... Along in the dark..... I shouldn't be afraid.... Our kind shouldn't be afraid of the one thing that was there for us... Yet Why am I? My Darling My Dark Darling My Fallen Angel I miss you so.... I look out the window waiting for you to return… Waiting to see your beautiful face…. My Darling… I promised you I would wait until your return… Now, many years later I still wait…. Why am I crying for the first time? After Many years……Alone My Darling…. When will the day come? When will the day you return to me… I remember the last words you told me…. Never give up…. I will return to you…. My Angel of the Night…. My Light in the Dark…. My Vampire Queen… My Bella…
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:50 pm
that was great! (sorry , but it is)
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:40 pm
thanks It may sould like them but it's not TRUST ME! lol
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:41 pm
i loved it i only think the part that sounds like them is the BELLA there at the end, but it could sound like twilight but other wise i absolutly loved it
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:35 am
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:19 pm
good good so you heard this before you read the books?
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:51 pm
no I wrote this before I heard of or read the books
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