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 Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:40 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:39 pm
I'd like to think I'm not a noob at RPing, but that fight with leo has me guessing. Can anyone teach me to RP fight more effectively? I want to learn how to fight so that movements are done without a shadow of a doubt as to what just happened. I want to learn to fight so that I can fight without people going "No! You can't do that!", and hopefully anyone else could read this at some point down the road and save someone else the trouble of saying that.
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:45 pm
Your best way of learning how is through experience, but I know a guy who has been doing this for years and still does impossible things in his posts. Fighting in Colosseum is probably the best way to learn. I would not mind sparring with your character there if you want.
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:49 pm
Yeah thats what I figured. I'm fighting someone in the arena right now... I just always end up with people pulling something crazy on me and leaving me like,"Wait... that physically impossible!" And to make sure I don't do that I always seem to play my characters under powered so as not to seem a god modder. I'm love to fight you in the arena, and if you would be so kind as to throw pointers my way or throw a WTF if you think I'm full of it. I'll try not to fail!
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:28 am
I'd like to so I'm not a noob! This defined told me to come here because "My Rp skills is too engilsh" i just want to get this over with so i can Rp in the guild stare
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:33 am
This is not Chatroom, take it at the Chatroom.
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:31 am
Yes ALL of you, except Leo, post elsewhere.
And Jessica, I can teach you how to RP like a top RPer.
Leo, all I wanted to say is that you need to start capitalizing, and using commas appropriate between subordinate dependent clauses, and independent clauses.
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:36 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:51 pm
A example of a roleplay of english status is quite easy Leo. Even I can speak and type/write[Ok maybe not write yet...] in a roleplay and make long posts. @_@ Why not show us a small sample of your roleplay skill?
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:59 pm
Leo walks in front of a dummy. He balls up both of his fists concentrating chakra in both fists appearing them glow flaming with chakra increasing his strength. He then brings his left fist back then throws his fist at the dummies chest with amazing strength focusing the dummy 7 feet across the room with a hole in its chest causing sand to come out of its chest
(how about that?)
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:11 pm
Sona nodded obeying what he said and caught the scroll, looking at the first justu. "A underground traveling justu? Might be useful in battle to escape or set traps underground!Perfect!" She said.[1/18] She looked at the seals below the written down justu and practiced each one, some were similar to the last justu she learned.[2/18] She saw a seals he haden't seen before and started to form it.[3/18] She put her hand up like a praying then split two fingers toward herself and away from herself then took her hands apart and turned one facing her palm down then twisted her right wrist facing towards her left hand then put them together in the hole between the four finger or eight fingers.[4/18] Then she put her left thumb down and her right thumb up the same with her pinkies only left up, right down.[5/18] She smiled and kept practicing the seal. "Ok pretty easy. Next is to..focus my chakra over my body." She said, never the less talking to herself int he empty world between human and whatever else.[6/18] She put her hands together doing the seals as fast as she could, which wasen't that fast yet.[7/18] She slowely focused her chakra to cover her body, cause in order to go underground in solid rock you would need a solid chakra line around you.[8/18] She got the chakra to cover her toes up to her ankles as she kept 'meditating' or focusing on her charka controls.[9/18] She finally got a good coat of chakra up to her knees and would now try for her waist.[10/18] After going to her knees she took a big breath and kept meditating, not really liing how silent it was in this void of empty space Zero has or found atleast. She opened her eyes and looked around seeing he has not come back she closed her eyes again practicing to go to her waist.[11/18] She bit her bottom lip with one of her canine teeth to draw a hint of blood as she kept focusing knowing she wouldn't have the patient to stand such silence in the air![12/18] She steadied her hands as she coated half her body in a good line of earth chakra.[13/18] She kept her heart rate a steady beat, with slow breaths as she bit harder on her bottom lip. She opened her eyes for a bit. "Wonder why Zerod id not just use another clone? Is he busy?" She said.[14/18] Sona growled a bit, now going over possiblities of how to use the justu. "Escape is one, set traps underground is two, false escape, two team justu and...hmmm it's pretty useful for a doton and clay user to work together with." [15/18] She finally got up to her shoulders coated with chakra and smiled, almost done.....[16/18] Sona let her lip loose from her canine bite and got her whole body coated with a good coat of chakra. Now it was time to go under and swim.[17/18] She jumped up then down into the cube thingy[?] going under it then swam frog style to the other side and comming up. "Phew gotta practice that later for holding breath." She says sitting down and looking at the next justu.[18/18]
x) *hint hint*
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:23 pm
So you just put alot of details into what you do? Is that the better way to rp?
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:26 pm
Leo, what your goal is - learn how to RP to more then just the basics.
Your RPing: Leo ran to the office.
Ideal RPing: Beginning to breathe, Leo scanned the area, he would then begin to rush forward heading in the direction of the office.
You need to start using commas, and periods in the appropriate locations. All clauses have a subject and a verb.
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:26 pm
When you type or roleplay, you make some mistakes as I do too.
First off, you NEVER use he,she,it,when,what,where,why and a name twice! Like a example is below since I hate explaining stuff....
Sona walked up to her sensei with excitment and enthusiasum, it was her time to hear; would she be the akatsui apprentience? Or be thrown back out into the cold forest of the rain country? Sona watched carefully still exhausted from her fight with the eight tails and defeating the weak demon, she could only hope her efforts were not in vain.
Ya, putting in more details of learning or in a white to describe your movements, justu, and your opponent's movements. See just about alot of people use the same word[Thier name] twice in two sentences mostly in the beginning, not very good...try to use it like this
Sona walked up to her sensei with excitment and Enthusiasum, it was her time to hear; would she bet he akatsuki apprentience? Or be thrown back out into the cold forest of the rain country? She watched carefully....ect ect
kinda like that x)
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:27 pm
xD Minty, you need to be here too. You capitalize things that aren't pronouns, and you have an overabundance of run-ons, you don't space between series in commas...
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