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 Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:28 am
A Bad Luck concert had hit Japan on earth finally, but, earth was not as it was when Bad Luck first started. For the moment the two began, some guys in white lab coats both hauled Hiro and Shuichi off.
Shuichi shouted, "Yuki!!!!! Help me!!!!!!!"
But, it was too late. Hiro and Shuichi were in a mental ward. When the guards were gone the first time, Hiro asked Shuichi, "What's happened to the Earth? Was our concert just a trap?"
Shuichi's lower lip was quivering, for Shuichi missed Yuki terribly. Hiro saw the pain in his best friend's eyes and therefore gave Shuichi a loving hug.
It was then that Shuichi really let out the tears. He whined to his friend, "Oh, Hiro, what did we do wrong?! Is singing such a crime these days?"
Hiro replied, "I don't think anything's wrong with us."
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:36 am
Seeing his friend cry like this was hurting Hiro big time. He was holding Shuichi like Yuki would or should have held Shu in a situation like this.
As Shuichi cried, he said, "I miss Yuki, Hiro. I want to get out of here."
Hiro nodded and said, "Tonight, when the guards are gone, we'll both think of an escape plan, how's that?"
Shuichi looked to Hiro's face and nodded. The pain of being away from Yuki was hurting Shuichi greatly, but Shuichi knew that Hiro was with him at least and if anything, they would escape.
That night, more prisoners had been captured. A tv screen appeared and there was some government official talking to everyone. This made Hiro angry.
Hiro was more serious than ever to escape now.
When the guards were gone, Hiro made his way to Shuichi's cell. He saw a drawing that Shuichi had made, but Shuichi had fallen asleep. Hiro smiled and whispered, "Good night, Shuichi. Tomorrow, we will see how your plan is in action."
Hiro took the plans with him and then when morning came, and the guards had allowed their prisoners to do whatever in their ward, he made his way to Shuichi's cell.
It was clear to Hiro now, that Shuichi had been sick moments before Hiro had seen the plans.
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:52 am
When Shuichi was up and they worked on building the devices needed for their escape, Hiro asked Shuichi, "Shuichi, did the guards drug you last night? You had vomit on the floor of your cell."
Shuichi weakly nodded. Hiro had to contact Yuki somehow about this. When the ship was done, and the coast was clear, the first escape attempt was made. Hiro, Shuichi and 2 cellmates were on for this journey.
That night, the guards learned of the escape and were trying to track down Shuichi and Hiro. The four were now hiding in Shuichi's favorite spot in the park.
Hiro had phoned Yuki and told Yuki what happened. Yuki was mad now!
He assured Hiro that everything would work out and even if Shuichi and Hiro were caught, Yuki told Hiro to keep working at escape plans.
Five more attempts were made for this escape and each time they were caught eventually.
Then the guards increased security and the dosages of the drugs.
On the sixth night, when Hiro got his first dosage of the poison, Shuichi had heard the sickness that Hiro was getting. Shuichi could no longer take it!
It was bad enough them guards hurt him, but now Hiro too? It was when Shuichi was on his way to Hiro's cell that he realized his true feelings for Hiro.
Now as Hiro was trying to get some sleep, Shuichi whispered, "Hiro, are you okay?"
Hiro said to Shuichi, "Go back to your cell, I am trying to sleep!"
Shuichi knew then that those were the drugs infecting his friend. He then grabbed Hiro by the hairs on Hiro's head and kissed Hiro on the mouth and made sure it was deep enough to wear off the poison. It was then that Hiro started crying and he embraced Shuichi tightly.
He cried, "Shu...you...you love me? But, what about Yuki?"
Shuichi kissed Hiro again, then replied, "I do love you Hiro, but I love Yuki too. Remember when I said that I always ran to you or to Yuki when I was always lost? Maybe that was because all of this time, I loved the both of you equally and just realized that now."
The two men kissed again and it was definitely passionate. Hiro and Shuichi knew their feelings for one another. It was then that they heard the slamming of the ward doors and some heavy cursing.
Hiro gasped and said, "The guards are back! Shuichi, hurry get back to your cell before they find out you broke curfew. Somehow, I will get a hold of Yuki tonight and he will fix things in the morning."
Looking to Hiro, Shuichi replied, "Okay, and Hiro... I love you."
"I love you too, Shuichi."
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:01 am
Dashing to his cell, Shuichi fell asleep faster than usual once in it. The next morning, the guards woke up Shuichi and told him that he had a visitor. Yuki had arrived!
Shuichi made his way towards Yuki when Shuichi collapsed at Yuki's feet. Yuki raised an eyebrow at his lover, then he saw Hiro running towards Yuki. The guards all were growing scared.
Hiro said, "Yuki! These guards drugged Shuichi and I! Shuichi's been ill for an entire week!"
Eiri frowned when he heard this. He asked, "Hiro would you mind showing me proof of this? I'd like to take in some evidence to the police if that is indeed true."
Hiro led Yuki to Shuichi's cell and Yuki saw all the vomit in a trash can nearly overflowing! Hiro then added, "Yesterday and only yesterday because I was on to the guards, they drugged me too! Shuichi was a real hero in here. He was trying to save everybody! He saved my life last night he did."
"Shuichi did that, did he? Well then..."
Shuichi came to momentarily and said, "Yuki, I kissed Hiro." The Shuichi fell into a coma like state.
Hiro's eyes began to water again for he knew what was going on with Shuichi. He looked to Yuki and said, "It's true he kissed me. But I want to let you know right now that Shuichi wants you and me in his life, Mr. Yuki."
Yuki then asked, "Would you like to live with me too, Hiro?"
Hiro nodded, "Okay. I promise not to be a burden to you and your work."
Yuki then said, "I am going to take Shuichi to empress dee. She'll heal both you and him. And then I am going to make sure that this horrible place is shut down for good."
Hiro bowed, "I am grateful to you, Yuki."
Yuki then confessed, "It is I who am grateful. And for the record, I've always loved you."
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:02 am
Comment below on the story!
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Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:29 pm
awsome story. I have a bad history with gravatation tho.
This girl that sits in front of me on the bus to school and is always reading gravitation, i wanted to know what it was so i read some of the book. when i saw the too guys making out i thot that it was a guy and a girl so i said it was nice but then she told me it was a guy and i droped the book coverd my eyes and when i got home i took a shower and keep throwing water in my eyes. and from that day i promsed myself that i would never fall victum to a yaoi vid/book agin. crying
PS: i dont hate gays.
PSS: what does PS mean.
PSSS: i like pie.
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Andy Bartholemew Bogard Crew
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:46 pm
PS is exactly how it sounds. Its another word for by the way.
I love any story dealing with Eiri Yuki and Shuichi Shindou. What I want to know is, Gotenks, how could you not know it was two guys? Don't tell me you weren't trying to look if both had dicks did you?
I mean, sure, Shuichi acts all girly most of the time, but he sure knows how to sing.
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