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Wich one should i focus on?
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 7:21 pm


okay i have 2 story ideas ive been playing around with lately and i need to know wich to focus on so im going to do a vote

Story number 1

its a futuristic society after a devastating war with an alien entity the way we won the war was by experimenting with human/animal hybrids the only sucess project angel created hum,an avain hybrids was able to turn the tide of the war....skip ahead by about 150 years the avain warriors have alienated themselves from humanity and now the goverment has been getting concered so they order the avain settelemnt (the reach) to allow one group of school children in to study the tower all the while using them to look for signs of rebellion the story has 2 veiw points it focuses on one of the warriors Devon and one of the students amanda

Story 2

this takes place in the late 1800's in england as the industrial age moves along a man by the name of Lancelot d'Angouleme a gentleman inventor with some "unseemly intests"(cant mention on gaia) well one of these ventureses ended up in him being turned into a vampire and he has no memory of the night he was turned now a young blind woman he had feelings for family was murdered that night and he has spent the last few years watching over her and trying to figure if he was the one to murder her family until one day a group of thugs tries to mug her and lance is forced to protect her directly (he tried to keep his distance since he is gulit ridden and a vampire)

now story line 2 is more devolped than storyline 1 but i had storyline 1 written down at one point
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:47 pm


dot_hack_ver2
okay i have 2 story ideas ive been playing around with lately and i need to know wich to focus on so im going to do a vote

Story number 1

its a futuristic society after a devastating war with an alien entity the way we won the war was by experimenting with human/animal hybrids the only sucess project angel created hum,an avain hybrids was able to turn the tide of the war....skip ahead by about 150 years the avain warriors have alienated themselves from humanity and now the goverment has been getting concered so they order the avain settelemnt (the reach) to allow one group of school children in to study the tower all the while using them to look for signs of rebellion the story has 2 veiw points it focuses on one of the warriors Devon and one of the students amanda

Story 2

this takes place in the late 1800's in england as the industrial age moves along a man by the name of Lancelot d'Angouleme a gentleman inventor with some "unseemly intests"(cant mention on gaia) well one of these ventureses ended up in him being turned into a vampire and he has no memory of the night he was turned now a young blind woman he had feelings for family was murdered that night and he has spent the last few years watching over her and trying to figure if he was the one to murder her family until one day a group of thugs tries to mug her and lance is forced to protect her directly (he tried to keep his distance since he is gulit ridden and a vampire)

now story line 2 is more devolped than storyline 1 but i had storyline 1 written down at one point


I like story 1, but im not feeling the 'group of children'. It would be amazing if the hybrids and the humans went to war with each other, and a group of children from each species joined together became friends or something. Idk, do what ever you want, these are just suggestions, but I like the general idea!

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:05 pm


hmmm makes sense the first one honestly was a dream i had and i have had trouble remembering the exact plotline i had in it but there is a war in it somewhere
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 4:03 pm


dot_hack_ver2
hmmm makes sense the first one honestly was a dream i had and i have had trouble remembering the exact plotline i had in it but there is a war in it somewhere


well, if you ever write it, make sure you send me a copy because I'm really interested!

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