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First of all, you can't already excel at hand-to-hand, and you're not in the place to say that she always remained on low level with kidou. Your character must not know any of the subject she will be taught. So please pu the skills in the required form as well, for you should describe how talented you are for a certain subject, not how skilled already.
Otherwise it's good, just edit these things and it's accepted.

Edit: what colour exactly is "crystal"?

You cannot suck at something you haven't learned yet!
This is a shinigami academy, and you will be taught all the skills needed. You may have your "special technique", for some others have also been allowed to have them, but you may not master it perfectly yet. And you may not know any other hand-to-hand, swordsmanship or kidou. If it states so in the bio, then change the bio.
And yes, thank you, I know how a crystal looks like, but that's not exactly a colour. You said yourself that it "reflects colour", it is not of a certain colour itself. And if you want to say that your reiatsu in transparent and sparkly, then write it so.

Firstly, I suggest you don't argue with Ezz, cause you'll never win.
Secondly, the reason why she's not supposed to have training prior to attending the SA is that we want to ensure for all the students to start at the same level: all have the same possibilities of learning what they desire and no exceptions shall be made.

Also, we do not wish for detailed descriptions of hand to hand, swordsmanship and kidou, you just need to rate them with outstanding, average and below average. Please delete any additional information. Look at some other already accepted profiles for reference.

Please make these corrections as soon as you can and don't object any longer. If you are however unable to do so, we will not be able to let you rp in the guild. If everyone else is able to subject to our rules, I don't see a reason why you couldn't either.

Don't take it personal, but thats the way it is.

You are arguing against the guild rules.
The rules in this guild state that you cannot have any prior training and if you want to rp here then you will abide to these rules. It's as simple as that. Only your talent will determine in which subjects you will later suck or excel.
And, I understand perfectly well what you mean by "crystal", but it still isn't a colour.

For the sucking part, you can suck at something you haven't learned yet while trying to use it. Sorta like how a student from gradeschool tries to do things he saw others use.

Now on to the other problems since maybe a third party (or in this case fourth) may be usefull.

Okay the main issue that i can find is your history.
If she was taught to use the sword then she should have carried it with her when being outside on a chore since it was supposedly learned to her for protection but there is no mention of it other then that she trained in it...
Then the hand to hand combat (wich is the biggest problem).
Mixing acrobatic with pure strength as if she is relying on brute strength... is probably one of the worst things one can do with it. You could probably compare it with a sumo-wrestler, he has to relie on pure strength instead of acrobatics wich is actually a good thing. if he had to use those 2 together he would most likely kill himself instead of the other...
A different example is a ballet-dancer, who doesnt need strength since her movements need to be simple and gracefull.
When you'd actually use that pure strength then you'd lose all grace, essentially taking you away from the basics.
Furthermore, the thugs you had problems with first where weaker then the latter ones while you took the latter ones down more easily then the weaker ones wich would kinda switch the correct part about you being overpowered and killed as well wich means no profile in the first place.

So looking at all the points i already gave it would be the best option to rewrite the bio, change her own style to something that makes more sense and remove the training your role supposedly already had.

Lets try this one more time before one of the 2 leaders can delete this one if it is still not good enough.

Don't argue or debate with a crew member when they ask to change something in your profile, you just do it UNLESS the crewmember doubts and wants more information of some things, or you actually already did it while it was not noticed. (those 2 are the only exceptions for as far as i know)

So unless you have a valid reason for not changing what is requested (reasons like you had to do something or that it would be obvious or something along those lines are NOT valid reasons) you have to change the requested things.