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 Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 5:43 am
As I sit here captured and entranced by you.
Watching you awaken your guitar.
Teasing the strings making it sing
Flirting with them, watching them bend in your demands.
Controlling its speech and emotions.
Creating hot passion with every single strum.
Making it speak in sweet mysterious tongues.
Creating life that only you and your guitar can bring.
Capturing my heart with every vibration and note.
Speaking to me with your guitars mysterious language.
Just sitting in awe, watching you play your passions and pain.
Reaching out with the cries of your sweet guitar.
Speak to me all night and all day you sweet guitar.
Show me his hidden emotions and teach me to understand.
(so many more in my blog)
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 5:31 pm
surprised
Kinky!
I'm sure my messed up brain could give you more of a critical analysis than that one word and expression.
><"
But at the moment, the poem stands as 'kinky'.
xD
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:12 pm
Miyaz surprised
Kinky!
I'm sure my messed up brain could give you more of a critical analysis than that one word and expression.
><"
But at the moment, the poem stands as 'kinky'.
xD haha KINKY what made ur mind choose such a word as KINKY.
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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 10:50 pm
.~DarkPoisonKisses~. As I sit here captured and entranced by you.
Watching you awaken your guitar.
Teasing the strings making it sing
Flirting with them, watching them bend in your demands.
Controlling its speech and emotions.
Creating hot passion with every single strum.
Making it speak in sweet mysterious tongues.
Creating life that only you and your guitar can bring.
Capturing my heart with every vibration and note.
Speaking to me with your guitars mysterious language.
Just sitting in awe, watching you play your passions and pain.
Reaching out with the cries of your sweet guitar.
Speak to me all night and all day you sweet guitar.
Show me his hidden emotions and teach me to understand.(so many more in my blog) Oh the bolded kinkyness! whee
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 12:54 am
Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. As I sit here captured and entranced by you.
Watching you awaken your guitar.
Teasing the strings making it sing
Flirting with them, watching them bend in your demands.
Controlling its speech and emotions.
Creating hot passion with every single strum.
Making it speak in sweet mysterious tongues.
Creating life that only you and your guitar can bring.
Capturing my heart with every vibration and note.
Speaking to me with your guitars mysterious language.
Just sitting in awe, watching you play your passions and pain.
Reaching out with the cries of your sweet guitar.
Speak to me all night and all day you sweet guitar.
Show me his hidden emotions and teach me to understand.(so many more in my blog) Oh the bolded kinkyness! whee haha oh wow. haha that kinda cool. is it a bad thing?
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 7:55 pm
.~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. As I sit here captured and entranced by you.
Watching you awaken your guitar.
Teasing the strings making it sing
Flirting with them, watching them bend in your demands.
Controlling its speech and emotions.
Creating hot passion with every single strum.
Making it speak in sweet mysterious tongues.
Creating life that only you and your guitar can bring.
Capturing my heart with every vibration and note.
Speaking to me with your guitars mysterious language.
Just sitting in awe, watching you play your passions and pain.
Reaching out with the cries of your sweet guitar.
Speak to me all night and all day you sweet guitar.
Show me his hidden emotions and teach me to understand.(so many more in my blog) Oh the bolded kinkyness! whee haha oh wow. haha that kinda cool. is it a bad thing? xP I like it.
The metaphors are nice and blend well with the texture of the poem 3nodding
Some parts are a little confusing, but no poems are perfect.
Overall, sweet poem cool
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 1:44 am
Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. As I sit here captured and entranced by you.
Watching you awaken your guitar.
Teasing the strings making it sing
Flirting with them, watching them bend in your demands.
Controlling its speech and emotions.
Creating hot passion with every single strum.
Making it speak in sweet mysterious tongues.
Creating life that only you and your guitar can bring.
Capturing my heart with every vibration and note.
Speaking to me with your guitars mysterious language.
Just sitting in awe, watching you play your passions and pain.
Reaching out with the cries of your sweet guitar.
Speak to me all night and all day you sweet guitar.
Show me his hidden emotions and teach me to understand.(so many more in my blog) Oh the bolded kinkyness! whee haha oh wow. haha that kinda cool. is it a bad thing? xP I like it.
The metaphors are nice and blend well with the texture of the poem 3nodding
Some parts are a little confusing, but no poems are perfect.
Overall, sweet poem cool thanx so much
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Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 10:18 pm
.~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. As I sit here captured and entranced by you.
Watching you awaken your guitar.
Teasing the strings making it sing
Flirting with them, watching them bend in your demands.
Controlling its speech and emotions.
Creating hot passion with every single strum.
Making it speak in sweet mysterious tongues.
Creating life that only you and your guitar can bring.
Capturing my heart with every vibration and note.
Speaking to me with your guitars mysterious language.
Just sitting in awe, watching you play your passions and pain.
Reaching out with the cries of your sweet guitar.
Speak to me all night and all day you sweet guitar.
Show me his hidden emotions and teach me to understand.(so many more in my blog) Oh the bolded kinkyness! whee haha oh wow. haha that kinda cool. is it a bad thing? xP I like it.
The metaphors are nice and blend well with the texture of the poem 3nodding
Some parts are a little confusing, but no poems are perfect.
Overall, sweet poem cool thanx so much ^^ You're welcome! Keep up the good work! ^0^
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