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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:28 pm


Character's name: Itazuki (E-TA-ZU-KEY)

Aliases/Nicknames: Pain (his life or birth can help put this name in to use and Itazuki means pain in Japanese)

Age: 18

Occupation: Student

Reiatsu color: Reddish black.

Appearance: His hair is of medium length. Hanging below his eyes. His hair is black with red strands. His eyes are a dark brown but with a tint of of green. Itazuki stands at six feet tall with broad shoulders. He has muscle. He is very toned, defined to unbelief. So he is not embarrassed to fight topless. He does not have many scars for obvious reasons.

Accesories: Itazuki does not where any amplifiers for his Reiatsu or any thing. He wears nothing special.

Personality: Itazuki is a a calm and collected person. He might seem rash and just bold, like man. But he does not actually care for it that much. He might even seem soft at times but only when with a single close person he is comfortable with. He is not really one emotion all the time. He is hyper, childish and at times very ignorant. But when got a midst a battle he starts to love it. He can also just adapt to his environment. He also acts like a little child , but only to past the time.

Bio/History:Every thing Itazuki remembered is more of dream, in how it feels to him. He was born in a simple hospital actually squad Four. The reason is because he was tearing through his mother and this was the only way to save her. But with all the skill of of Squad Eleven they had no avail and she died. Thinking that his son was the bringer of death, he named him Itazuki and would not stand to be his father. He put him in the trash and left him there. He ended up being sent to an orphanage, which was more like a shinigami camp. So Itazuki was trained at a young age. but growing up he was beat for doing a small thing wrong. The squad Eleven of years past thought of him as a weakling. But with all the pain it made him into what he is now. He joined the shinigami school to test himself even further.


Kidou:

Abilities:

Skills: Hand to hand- talented. Swordsmanship-average. Kidou- below average.

Accomplished classes:

Pending classes:

Favorite Subject: Combat
Disliked Subject: Kidou
Favorite teacher: N/A
Disliked teacher: N/A
Expectations: Just wants to get what he can from it.

optional:
Likes: Women.
Dislikes: Squad Eleven
Theme song: N/A
Hobbies: Fighting any thing, like trees, people.
Quirks: He can't sit still for long which is his only realistic drawback.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:17 pm


History copied from Süskind's The Perfume. If you really want to keep it, at least change some things so it's not completely the same.
Skills should be written like this: Hand to hand - talented, Swordsmanship - average, Kidou - below average. You can't be superb at something you don't even know yet. Keep in mind that you only have the inner ability to manipulate reiatsu, everything else will be taught here.
And well, to be honest, I know you could write most of it far better^^

ezzelinn
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ezzelinn
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:55 am


Let's say accepted. But it would be very nice if you added a few sentences here and there, to make it more clear.
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