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 Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 3:26 pm
^^; Ah yes... so like I said, I'm working on this story, but I'm really not sure if it's good or not. I feel like the people here would probably not laugh at me quite as hard as posting it else where... ^^; So opinions, please?
*story in next post*
(o.o; If I shouldn't post this here, I'm sorry. There isn't any un-PG-13-ness)
Also, it's very TWT. ^^; It starts where Naruto returns, minus the Gaara-kidnapped-ness.
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 3:27 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 3:29 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 9:28 pm
Ne, Ne! Please continue this fanfic! I like it!Would you read mine? It's on Fanfiction.net and it's called Right Here Waiting. Please read it! I love this one though, I can't think of anything you would need to fix.
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 8:14 am
Can't wait to see the plot develop. whee I truthfully thought that the beginning was really sudden... like it starts in the middle of a battle. I dunno. You should rewind a little before then, like what happened before because I sorta got confused in the beginning. Did the first paragraph happen in the anime? I'm afraid I'm not that far yet... ;.; |on chap 256|
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 10:07 am
Celestial-Dragon-Demon Ne, Ne! Please continue this fanfic! I like it!Would you read mine? It's on Fanfiction.net and it's called Right Here Waiting. Please read it! I love this one though, I can't think of anything you would need to fix. ^^ I'll look for it then. 3nodding If you get a review from Shadows_Call, that's me.
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 10:15 am
x.Wing.x Can't wait to see the plot develop. whee I truthfully thought that the beginning was really sudden... like it starts in the middle of a battle. I dunno. You should rewind a little before then, like what happened before because I sorta got confused in the beginning. Did the first paragraph happen in the anime? I'm afraid I'm not that far yet... ;.; |on chap 256| Hmm... Well I was thinking of doing more of what happened before the fight in the next chapter, would that be good? o.o ^^; Naw, it hasn't happened. It's completely a twt (timeline, what timeline?), and starts when Naruto comes back to Konoha, after they pass Kakashi's test (LOVED that part). >.> <.< I wish it had happened though, because I could totally see Itachi harnessing Sasuke's hate like that.
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 11:48 am
That was really good! Keep it!^__^
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 3:25 pm
Still excellent. u.u I've already seen this part, though~ *pokes* Must... have... more... *gnaws on your neck until you comply* domokun
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 3:34 pm
EpsilonZero That was really good! Keep it!^__^ Eee, thanks. ^^ Should I post a link to the story, or the second chapter here... o.o;
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 3:36 pm
Chieira Still excellent. u.u I've already seen this part, though~ *pokes* Must... have... more... *gnaws on your neck until you comply* domokun heart *melts into a puddle of goo* I have a lot of the first chapter done. ^^; I've been writing between this one, the Jutsu of Surrender, and Partners by Moonlight. *raises fist* Uchihacest has re-gnawed my brain.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:12 pm
Rosekoneko Chieira Still excellent. u.u I've already seen this part, though~ *pokes* Must... have... more... *gnaws on your neck until you comply* domokun heart *melts into a puddle of goo* I have a lot of the first chapter done. ^^; I've been writing between this one, the Jutsu of Surrender, and Partners by Moonlight. *raises fist* Uchihacest has re-gnawed my brain. o.o If you have more of this one, post it, woman~
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:51 pm
Chieira Rosekoneko Chieira Still excellent. u.u I've already seen this part, though~ *pokes* Must... have... more... *gnaws on your neck until you comply* domokun heart *melts into a puddle of goo* I have a lot of the first chapter done. ^^; I've been writing between this one, the Jutsu of Surrender, and Partners by Moonlight. *raises fist* Uchihacest has re-gnawed my brain. o.o If you have more of this one, post it, woman~ ^^; I have some of the next chapter...
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 12:41 pm
Rosekoneko Chieira Rosekoneko Chieira Still excellent. u.u I've already seen this part, though~ *pokes* Must... have... more... *gnaws on your neck until you comply* domokun heart *melts into a puddle of goo* I have a lot of the first chapter done. ^^; I've been writing between this one, the Jutsu of Surrender, and Partners by Moonlight. *raises fist* Uchihacest has re-gnawed my brain. o.o If you have more of this one, post it, woman~ ^^; I have some of the next chapter... o.o Then post it. Rawr. heart
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:18 pm
post more or i will gather a angry mob to stalk you.
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