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What do you think of this comic I drew up?

AKA Michiyo-Nakashima

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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 2:20 pm

This is a little comic I finished in one day, and its about my artists block I had almost ALL summer....
Its a two parter but this is pg 1 since I havent finished pg2. What do you think?
by the way, its read manga style, right to left
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:26 pm

it's alryt but you need to clean it up...like erase the wrong ones neatly and use ruler for the margin

azureLAfrizan

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AKA Michiyo-Nakashima

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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:31 pm

I did use a ruler, but I accidenally pressed a bit hard with my pencil....
What about the art?

Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:22 pm

The art isn't bad, but like Innocent said cleaner boarders would make a bigger impact to the quality of the picture than anything else.

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Whammeh

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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:34 pm

Your chibis are adorablllle.
You anatomy in the 'Later' slide needs a little work, perhaps you could look at some anatomy books and whatnot and practice doodles in a sketch pad?

Other than that though, I actually like it. Though I agree about the lines.

Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:32 am

So cute! ^^

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