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runeshi

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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 1:21 pm

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Its not quite finished but I'm just wondering what you guys think so far

The original photo: http://mehmeturgut.deviantart.com/art/my-mouse-and-me-59749526

Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:38 am

how that is awesome if I do say so myself

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runeshi

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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:00 pm

Killer_in_Mind

how that is awesome if I do say so myself

thanks!

Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 8:15 pm

From comparing your (beautiful) work with the original photo, I've found some places that are a bit off...
-The part under the eye seems to be too light.
-There seems to be too much of an 'edge' to the highlight on the nose; it might do well to blend it in a tiny bit. It also looks like the dark part of the end of the nose is a bit too bright.
-This may be only my opinion, but I feel that the mouse should be casting a bit more of a shadow on the face.

Keep up the good work. C:
(I hope this helps, it was hard to find anything wrong in your work!)

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runeshi

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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:04 pm

effervescentstripes

From comparing your (beautiful) work with the original photo, I've found some places that are a bit off...
-The part under the eye seems to be too light.
-There seems to be too much of an 'edge' to the highlight on the nose; it might do well to blend it in a tiny bit. It also looks like the dark part of the end of the nose is a bit too bright.
-This may be only my opinion, but I feel that the mouse should be casting a bit more of a shadow on the face.

Keep up the good work. C:
(I hope this helps, it was hard to find anything wrong in your work!)

Thank you so much! It definitely helps! smile

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