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 Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:30 am
 Love is a war, it’s an everlasting battle of lust and emotions. Those that fight it feel like it’s worth it, those that come out victorious are those that shall be happy. Though they might have won the battle they can never win the war, the war itself is everlasting…
..the darkness is always luring, dragging people who think they are happy, who feel that they are loved back into it’s embrace, those are the ones that feel victorious but get shot down the hardest, the losers of an everlasting war, a war which we in the end are all bound to lose…
..all that one can do is fight and keep on fighting to find just that bit of happiness which we call love, that bit of happiness which connects two people, which binds two people together, leading them on as one, leading them on to find either happiness or despair…
..the darkness trying to take their light, trying to take away their love, all they can do is combine their strength and face that which comes in their path, it will strengthen their relation or break it apart. True love, a rarity to be found, everlasting, nothing is everlasting…
..those fortunate enough to find a real lover, someone they can truly love with their entire being, those are the ones who can call themselves rich and happy. Most of us just have to deal with a small bit of their luck, a small bit of their fortune. Love, a small amount of it is enough to keep someone alive…
..those who lose the war are the ones that are unloved, miserable and dark, the ones who feel like ending their lives at any time, the darkness dragging them in, luring them closer to their end, an end which eventually everyone will fade away in, total darkness, death…
..every one has it’s heroes, every war has it’s criminals. All are bound to lose, heroes can fall where darkness prevails, fight for the right to be loved, enjoy every moment of it. Before you realize it, the darkness has taken you in and you lose… ..you’ll lose all of it…
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:31 am
any comments of this random piece of writing which my twisted dark mind kicked out?
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:01 am
The Amazing... I liked it lot :3
its very dark and i love things like this biggrin
And i think you did really well since english isnt your first language, but there is one thign that isnt flowing right to me, but im also not to great at english (and its my native language sweatdrop ) Brain Akazariua the darkness is always luring to drag people who think they are happy Maybe it should beBrain Akazariua the darkness is always luring, dragging people who think they are happy ...Zombie Mobster
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:04 am
thanks for the comment and you're right.
I fixed it ^_^
guess that's what you get for writing with a dizzy mind while being at work xd
and ofcourse I'm glad you like it
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:37 am
Brain Akazariua thanks for the comment and you're right.
I fixed it ^_^
guess that's what you get for writing with a dizzy mind while being at work xd
and ofcourse I'm glad you like it im glad that i could help heart
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:55 am
looks like only IrishZombie has an opinion on it.
such a shame, I was hoping for more feedback.
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:21 pm
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hm...you're the only one I've seen so far who actually wrote something GOOD when trying to write something deep. ...Were you even trying, though? =============================== 
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:23 pm
Noa Qep -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hm...you're the only one I've seen so far who actually wrote something GOOD when trying to write something deep. ...Were you even trying, though? ===============================
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Queeny of Hearts Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:54 am
awwwww
i has 2 go 2 sleep but i stopped 2 read what u wrote
me loooooooooooooooooooooooved it
all of it
i feel like some connection with stuffy that had happend 2 me
and what u wrote
awwww
its nice what u wrote mr brain =)
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:02 am
Queeny of Hearts awwwww
i has 2 go 2 sleep but i stopped 2 read what u wrote
me loooooooooooooooooooooooved it
all of it
i feel like some connection with stuffy that had happend 2 me
and what u wrote
awwww
its nice what u wrote mr brain =)
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Queeny of Hearts Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 1:29 am
Brain Akazariua Queeny of Hearts awwwww
i has 2 go 2 sleep but i stopped 2 read what u wrote
me loooooooooooooooooooooooved it
all of it
i feel like some connection with stuffy that had happend 2 me
and what u wrote
awwww
its nice what u wrote mr brain =)
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:11 am
If a story has a happy ending...
what's with the Mr Brain stuff? it makes me feel old rofl
..then it simply hasn't ended yet
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Queeny of Hearts Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 2:58 pm
its somehow a respect stuff?
i always say Mr even if people r younger than me
if i dont know em well, but i respect em
xP
but ur not old, and sorry for making u feel like that xD
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:15 pm
Queeny of Hearts its somehow a respect stuff?
i always say Mr even if people r younger than me
if i dont know em well, but i respect em
xP
but ur not old, and sorry for making u feel like that xD If a story has a happy ending...
no need to be respecfull to me.
I'm just a simple goth not worthy of your respect xd
and don't worry, I feel old most of the time, people of my own age hardly understand me sweatdrop
..then it simply hasn't ended yet
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Queeny of Hearts Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:43 pm
Brain Akazariua Queeny of Hearts its somehow a respect stuff?
i always say Mr even if people r younger than me
if i dont know em well, but i respect em
xP
but ur not old, and sorry for making u feel like that xD If a story has a happy ending...
no need to be respecfull to me.
I'm just a simple goth not worthy of your respect xd
and don't worry, I feel old most of the time, people of my own age hardly understand me sweatdrop
..then it simply hasn't ended yet
jajajajajaja
and i do think ur worthy =O
and me no cares if ur goth or whatevers
i understand everyone cuz all we need is love!
*hippie mood* xD
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