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 Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:28 am
Greetingz Duremites,
Br@!n here, co-capo of Caporegime #4.
I have this nasty habit of writing books, however I get hardly any feedback on it and ofcourse my friends always say that it's good.
because of that I have no real hard feedback on what I need to improve and that's where you people come in.
I'd like to ask for your feedback so those of who feel like it can click on the links below to read my stories/books and leave feedback in the forum I made for that.
Book1: Children with a Shared Soul: link
Book 2: Burning Generation: link (this is still a W.I.P. and the follow up of book 1)
and I know my book titles suck but whatever, I didn't know anything better for them.
I'd like to thank those who will put their time into reading it and leaving their feedback in advance so I don't have to reply to every feedback form I get.
feel free to make your feedback as hard as you can, it's better then lying to me.
regards,
~Br@!n
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 5:47 am
Course I'll read it! 3nodding
I've just started the first chapter. So far so good, but there are a few minor grammatical errors.
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:26 am
Youko Kasumi Course I'll read it! 3nodding I've just started the first chapter. So far so good, but there are a few minor grammatical errors.
I might check for all of them someday but it's tough since English isn't my native language (I'm dutch)
thanks for taking the time to read it ^_^
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 10:29 pm
me likes reading
but i doesnt have the time ._.
but probably i will read em anyways on weekends xP
even tho i dont understand english so well
jajajajajaja
but i`ll do my best ;D
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Queeny of Hearts Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:44 pm
Queeny of Hearts me likes reading
but i doesnt have the time ._.
but probably i will read em anyways on weekends xP
even tho i dont understand english so well
jajajajajaja
but i`ll do my best ;D
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:36 pm
I said it in the feedback, but wow! That was great! Couldn't stop reading it!
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:12 pm
dflame90 I said it in the feedback, but wow! That was great! Couldn't stop reading it!
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:39 am
Brain Akazariua dflame90 I said it in the feedback, but wow! That was great! Couldn't stop reading it! Gave me a LOT to think about. Parents were angry that I wouldn't get off the computer too!
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:44 am
dflame90 Brain Akazariua dflame90 I said it in the feedback, but wow! That was great! Couldn't stop reading it! Gave me a LOT to think about. Parents were angry that I wouldn't get off the computer too! If a story has a happy ending...
haha, parents always get angty about that.
I'm glad that I'm living on my own so that problem is solved for me ^_^
and what did it give you to think about? I'd like to know, seems fun to know what my stories make people think about.
..then it simply hasn't ended yet
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:54 am
Brain Akazariua dflame90 Brain Akazariua dflame90 I said it in the feedback, but wow! That was great! Couldn't stop reading it! Gave me a LOT to think about. Parents were angry that I wouldn't get off the computer too! If a story has a happy ending...
haha, parents always get angty about that.
I'm glad that I'm living on my own so that problem is solved for me ^_^
and what did it give you to think about? I'd like to know, seems fun to know what my stories make people think about.
..then it simply hasn't ended yet Made me think of a few of my old friends. I had a friend that wrote stories too, but she was more of fanfiction than straight-up stories. I think I read one or two with demonic parts to it but this is the best I've ever read. Great work.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:06 am
dflame90 Brain Akazariua dflame90 Brain Akazariua dflame90 I said it in the feedback, but wow! That was great! Couldn't stop reading it! Gave me a LOT to think about. Parents were angry that I wouldn't get off the computer too! If a story has a happy ending...
haha, parents always get angty about that.
I'm glad that I'm living on my own so that problem is solved for me ^_^
and what did it give you to think about? I'd like to know, seems fun to know what my stories make people think about.
..then it simply hasn't ended yet Made me think of a few of my old friends. I had a friend that wrote stories too, but she was more of fanfiction than straight-up stories. I think I read one or two with demonic parts to it but this is the best I've ever read. Great work. If a story has a happy ending...
thanks ^_^
I'm only capable of writing dark and mysterious stuff.
or when I'm drunk, then I'm able to write down my feelings towards things or persons. it's kinda fun to do.
..then it simply hasn't ended yet
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