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 Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:18 pm
Purottou(Plot): Roux City, Castle Spire Year 643
The wind whistled through the arches of the vast Gouthic Castle, a melody of multicoloured leaves danced around in circles at its steps. Upon closer inspectioun, a subtle design was carved into the arches.
This was the home of the soon to be captain of the Arch, Ayden Black. His father, Markus Black was assasinated only a few days ago, and he is to become the captain. But this brash and arrogant little teen was too young to inherit the name, and so he awaits the day to selfishly claim something he was only entrusted, but not earned.
In contrast, only one other in the entire city could change the way he looked at things. A young, beautiful girl about his age dubbed Rei resided within the city in a quaint home. Her fondness of animals and extensive talents have shaped her personality into something nothing less than beautiful. Her heart was as tender and loving as a saint, though she hides behind a wall of shyness.
Only Fate could bring them together, and it seems as if Fate lived in both of them this time.
Our story begins in this castle, this city, this year. So let the memories unfold, and may the Light guide your way.
(PS. Feel free to change anything, Sarah, and I'll post my first reply now.)
PROFIIIIIIILE~!
Name: Rei (Ray)
Picture: Rei
Gender:Female~
Age:13
Short Bio: Rei lives with her mother, father, and older sister Isabel. She enjoys things like reading, writing, and drawing, and she's pretty smart. She grew up around pets such as cats. She can sometimes be a little shy, but she's kind and makes friends easily.
Hmm. Dana's gonna be her character. His name is Ayden. XD
Dana's Character:
(Lasy. Lasylasylasy. OH NO SCOTT DIES NO I mean. Yeah. I'm going as a boy, otherwise I'd be an annoying little Yachiruu. )
Pic: AYDEN
(You've seen this before)
Gendre: ♂ (Man.)
Age: Hmm. Well... in my story he's 17
But I'll make him 15 for now. >w>
(Cause in the picture he doesn't look 13. o.0 )
Bio: Hmm. Well. Uhm.
Quote: The bandages were there in the first place in order to conceal the fact it was badly damaged from an accident, and his freakish curse.
He has Central Heterochromia (Different eye colour in one or two eyes.)
So... the centre of his eyes are red, surrounding area is black.
Uhm. Well. He's one of those people who can be an arse house.
And he will make you mad. A lot. But he has a good side.
Though... few have lived to see it.
HELLO DANAAAA (random edit. Let's see if you notice. xD) I SHALL INVADE HER POST TOO!! HELLO DANANA! ~Pat
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Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:28 pm
"Hark. What an annouyance." said Ayden with a sharp tongue. He glared at the little servant who spilt blistering tea all over his fresly cleaned garments. He brushed himself off briskly and slowly arose from his seat.
"I-I apologise, Master Ay-"
"Silence, you cad. Leave my sight before I find my dagger.*"
The tiny servant ran towards the large ornate doors and stumbled before finally disappearing from view**.
His gauntlets were splashed with the dark arouma of Sei' An*** tea, making him even angrier.
"I.... HATE.... Sei' An tea! " He roared.
Quickly, several other servants burst from the doors in response to his sudden outburst.
He stood so silently, so stiffly, and bore a look so menacing it could scare away little rabbits and make crying kids shut up.
They hastily moved about, undressing him and putting replacement attire.
He finally got fed up and yelled, "ENOUGH!"
The servants quickly fled in fear and left Ayden alone half naked.
Sigh... he thought.... Peace and Tranquility.
He slowly sank in his chair-bed-thingyfutonIdunno and cursed himself to sleep.
((*His... Dagger.... (MUAHAHHAHA. )
** Okay. I really think Ayden was thinking right now, "Man, I'll never have kids."
*** Sei' An is a city from Okami. XD
Ayden is a damn idiout. But I love him. XD ))
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:00 am
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OMG~ NEW RP 8D
lol. Changed my peecture. Love this one for some reason ^^ And the plot is so cuuute ^^ Hee hee.
Anyways, yeah. POST AWAYYYYYY~))
Rei was violently torn from her peaceful sleep, waking up to the sound of her bratty older sister's voice.
"Rei!" She snapped, glaring with those big, brown eyes of her's, "Don't you know it's not ladylike to nap during the day!"
Rei yawned. "I'm...Sorry. I stayed up a bit later than usual..."
"A bit?" Her sister complained, "I swear I could hear the scratching of that pen of your's all night." She shook her head. "That writing is never going to get you anywhere..." She muttered.
Excuse me for being creative...Rei had half a mind to say aloud.
"I'm sorry. Please, don't tell mother. I know she'll ask why I've been gone for a few hours, so...I was out...Watering the flowers. And I didn't catch the time." She had a bit of a pleading look.
Her sister rolled her eyes. "Alright, fine. But don't do it again. " She flipped her golden hair back and watched Rei, making sure she would get up and greet the day...For the second time. Rei slowly got up and stretched her arms back.
"Could you be any more...Boyish?" Her sister scrunched up her nose.
Sometimes Rei's sister got on her nerves. Rei didn't understand the borders between how males and females should act, especially not in the privacy of their own home. And it's not like they were royalty. Rei shook her head, not answering her sister. She gathered up her nightgown and emerged from her bed, walking over to her window. She could just see the castle from where her house was positioned. It was beautiful. Often times she imagined her life inside it.
"Wouldn't it be lovely to live in a place like that?" Rei mused, smiling.
"Sure. But we don't. Get dressed and come down for lunch...Since you missed breakfast." Her sister scowled agian, finally walking out of Rei's bedroom. Rei sighed, finally having a quiet moment to herself.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:53 pm
 Ayden... My son... Bring peace to this kingdom...
"Nn..." he stirred, "Nnngh -- AGGH! "
Ayden was torn from his sleep and awoke in a cold sweat. His sheets were drenched with sweat and... blood*?
A tiny servant stood before him, staring at Ayden with curious eyes and a slight head tilt.
"No! NO! It isn't what you think! Be gone you vermin!"
The little servant boy scurried out in his ragged clothes as Ayden flashed his evil glare.
I... I dreamt... of... her again...
"Master, " said a poetic voice. It was his mistress, Sayuun. "Are you... well?"
He scoffed. "As if you'd know."
He shut his eyes tightly and thought for a bit, and finally it was decided.
"Sayuun, " he said to his mistress, the only one whom he trusted, "I shall
be going out. Do not send guards to follow me. I think it's time I took a stroll around this wretched place. "
"Yes, Master Ayden." she said with her calm, soothing voice.
Ayden nodded and strafed to his bathroom**.
He could see the blood tears from his eyes again. He wiped them away and spun the bandages around his face, their familiar clothiness seemed relieving.
He quietely opened his cabinet and took out a small, inconspicious item, then, placing in his pocket, and stepped back into his room, ambling to his wardrobe.
He clutched a peasant outfit, an auburn, tattered hood and scarf along with
a sark and leggings*. Ayden took a quick glance at Sayuun, and she knew it meant "Close your eyes. "
She did, only quietely peeking a tiny bit.
He quickly undressed and cloaked himself with his new peasant outfit, then took a running jump and bolted out the window, leaving Sayuun with a rosy tint and a look of glee upon her face.
(( * He looked next to him and found... Megan Fox!
Kidding. Kidding.
OH PETE. It's not what you think!! D:**
* Stolen.... from his servants! XD
Ehehehe. I think I had a little TMI here.
FANSERVICE! D< ))
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:10 pm
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(( o.e lol xD))
Rei leaned her elbow on her portruding windowsill, gazing at the castle for another moment. It really was quite a sight. Unlike Isabel, her sister, who said it made her feel like such a peasent (which technically they were), Rei found the sight beautiful. Remembering her story she told Isabel to repeat to their mother, she thought she should actually water the garden. She walked over to her wardrobe, pulling out a faded, rose-colored dress. She sighed. This was one of her favorite dresses, and it was probably going to start ripping soon. In fact, it already had a hole in it. She frowned. She slipped out of her cream-colored nightgown and slid her faded dress over her head and onto the rest of her. She quickly put her feet into some shoes, and opened her window. Her mother couldn't know she was still in her room. She climbed out her window feet-first, another act Isabel would think "boyish" if she were here, and landed on the soft dirt with a quiet thump. She turned left, to the area behind her home, where their small garden was. She picked up the bucket resting on the edge of her modest little house, and began walking to the well, only a few yards from where her and her family lived.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:22 pm
"Ack!" He scowled, "That bloody fool was supposed to be here hours ago. "
He stood at the foot of the castle and looked up. To a normal persoun, it'd seem marvelous. But to him, it was a wretched place where only fools could live. He removed the bandages from his eyes and said
"Look at them. Politics is the opium of the masses. Royalty is no longer what it used to be. "
He glanced down at his feet. "I'm no more of a peasant than these blokes in the streets... "
"Politics. You took my father, take me as well! You already have my eyes! If there is some peruvial and somehow higher force, may he strike me down!"
The sky abouve him begin to darken, and the birds of sadness were upon him. Rain started to pour from the clouds, drenching the little confused liutenant. He placed the bandages back on his face and he no longer felt wet.
"Perhaps, it is I who is imagining things. "
He ran off in the directioun of the well, thinking a drink of water would satisfy his thirst for answers, his bandaged eyes making his visioun and perceptioun invert the colours of everything around him.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:46 pm
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Rei strolled down the dirt road to the well, bucket swaying slighty as she held it by it's handle. She started humming a tune. No song in particular, just notes that happened to sound good together. Perhaps my next written peice should be a song, Rei thought. But she didn't know anything about writing music. She could barely read music. Boys were so lucky that they were educated in that sort of thing. Rei's hope was quickly buried.
The well was ahead of her, and Rei looked straight ahead at her closest source of water. She smiled a bit. She walked up to the edge of the well, resting her bucket on the stone. She looked down into the calm pool of water. She reached for the rope, and attatched her bucket to it, slowly lowering it to the bottom of the well. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw another figure heading towards the well. No, running. She looked up quickly, seeing it was a boy, who looked about Rei's age. He looked like he had bandages on his face. She felt bad, for whatever those bandages were for. She looked down to see that her bucket was full, and started to raise it to the surface again.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:13 pm
This is madness. This world has gone to the dogs. Every second another one has become a martyr, and though weak they are what the world has come to bestride. They are humans as well, and are no different from myself. Do they not deserve the home of a king? It sickens me.
Ayden contemplated to himself, for his mind was always to be kept busy.
Fleetly, the well was in view.
"Blast. Someone is there already. " He continued to run, and meant to stop before a glimpse of a familiar person obstucted his vision. One moment, as soon as the figure disappeared, he saw a beautiful young lady inches from his face, and the next he had crashed right into her.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 3:48 pm
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Rei retreived her bucket of water from the bottom of the well, folding it into her arms because of it's added weight. I can't recall the last time Isabel came to collect water, Rei thought randomly, realizing she did this almost every day now. Rei turned to begin walking back home with the water, and she only had half a second to realize that the boy she saw a few moments ago was right in front of her face. And then he crashed into her, sending her falling backwards. She landed on her back, dropping the bucket she was holding and spilling the water all over the ground. The bucket rolled slowly once out of Rei's hands, hitting the edge of the well. Rei blinked once, then sat up, leaning on her palms. "Hello...?" Rei greeted the boy who bumped into her. She wondered if he was blind.
(( KUONI SARAH! GREETINGS FROM NEE-CHAN! ((Nay- chan.)) (Big sister. Self-proclaimed) You don't think I'd notice? I'm the #1 Editour of my posts. I keep editing them. And I know they MUST be pefaightoh. I swear to Pete. Now let's see if you notice thice.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:14 pm
When Ayden Came to, he found himself sprawled out on the ground, but luckily his disguise was not revealing.
"YOU B-" He suddenly cut himself off.
I'm not the Captain. I'm supposed to be at the castle. I will be arrested. I will be punished. I will be whipped. She will tell. She will tell.
The words repeated in his mind, taunting him. For now, and only for now... I will be...
...NICE!
"I-I... apologise... I was looking for a friend, you see... I did not.... mean .... for you to drop your pail. Let me get that for you."
Still on the ground, he reached for the pail, and thought about how pretty the girl was. Clasping it, he pushed himself off the ground to the well.
With a grimace, he thought to himself,
This is peasant's work. I am a captain. This is peasant's work.
He lowered the bucket hurriedly to avoid shame, and pulled it up clumsily. By the time it had reached the top, there was no longer any water in the pail.
"Nngh. Damn HobberKnicker."
He kept pulling the rope again and again and finally he managed to get 1/4 of the water in the pail. Without thinking, he hastily gulped down all the water from the pail, wiping sweat from his forehead.
"Aaahh... WAIT- NO!.... That's it."
Ayden found a bunch of stones nearby and threw them all into the well, making the water level rise up. He stuck the pail into the well and pulled it out, full.
"Here... you... go... Miss... I apologise..." And he handed it to her.((Is this better? I NOTICED 8D xDDDDDDD))
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:46 pm
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"Oh, that's...Fine," Rei managed to get out, both of them sitting awkwardly on the gound. She wasn't one to pick fights over things like this. She watched the boy grab her pail, attempting to fill it and give it back to her. She couldn't help but giggle a bit. What took the boy several tries, and cost him much frustration, would have taken Rei only seconds, and barely any effort. And yet boys were the higher-up sex?
She found it kind of cute, that he was trying so hard. Maybe it was good that Isabel hadn't gotten the water today. She would have surely ripped this boy's head off by now.
"Here... you... go... Miss... I apologise..." He held out her pail, finally filled with water.
"Thank you. And, it's fine." She smiled, brushing a strand of hair from her face. I should be going soon...She stressed, mentally.
((I NOTICED 8D))
((YOU DID IT WRONG! You were supposed to edit one of my posts. XD Oh well. There goes our little game. O.e))
MUCH. Bettre.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 8:58 pm
"Y-yeah... " he said sheepishly, a heated flush filing his face and spreading like a plague of locusts.
GAH. She looked at me like an idiout!
like an idiout....
like an idiout...
STYU-UPID MIND- ECHO!
He glanced at the ground like an embarrased goat who ate the socks in the garbage. Then, looking back up at the girl, he faked a crooked smile and scratched his head. The bandages that were loosened from the fall and the extremely harsh labour** began to fall apart, revealing his eyes for a splt second. The crimson iris and jet black sclera began to show. His scar was also present, and if you were to stand close enough, they would be obvious. His eyes widened when he felt the sun on his bare upper facial skin and he quickly pulled his hood over his head, in trying to conceal it.
Blast... if she finds out I am not just a peasant...
No, I must not think this way.
((**LIES! ))
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:45 pm
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Rei giggled a bit. No one had ever seemed so...nervous, around her. Her mother had said that's how her father was when they met. And they had been about Rei's age. Oh, this was wonderful, she thought. But she was getting ahead of herself. He was a stranger. She knew nothing about this boy. And maybe he was just embarrassed for his lack of chore skills. Rei knew she would be.
"So, what is your name?" Rei asked sweetly, smiling at him. For a short moment, the boy's face had been exposed, and he covered it up as if Rei weren't supposed to see. She was curious, as to what he looked like now. Oh, Rei thought. What if he's one of those crooks who disguises their face so no one knows who steals their belongings? No, he was too nice for that. After all, he helped her get her water back. Even if it took him ten times longer.
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 3:44 pm
Haha, now I will show them that I am greater than any peasant. I am. I am. For I am The Captain of The ARCH!
"I am but A------"
Wait. I am not supposed to be allowed outside without permissioun. I am a Liutenant still. She cannot know. She cannout know.
"Ar-- Ehm-- Ro--- Pi--Dan---, " He stuttered, trying to come up with a false name.
"....
I am Emery. And who may I have the pleasure of adressing this day?"
She looks so sweet. She is making a fool of me. I am the king. I am the king.
...stop looking at me. Stop looking at me. My disgfigured face is hideous. I am a monster. I don't deserve you. I am nothing.
"I'm... not blind... I just.... I... There's a... Ponies.... It is chilly oustide you see. I feel... cold. "
He tried to fake a smile once more, but he had never smiled for ages, and almost forgot how to. It ended up as just a slight twitch and a revert back to his usual bitter facial expressioun.
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:17 pm
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"Well, hello Aremropidan Emery." She giggled. She was kidding around. She knew he meant Emery. But she wasn't sure why he had had such a hard time remembering his own name. Maybe he'd had an accident. That would explain the bandages, too. But she wouldn't ask. It wasn't...'ladylike', as Isabel so reminded the constantly curious Rei.
"Well. My name is Rei." Rei smiled. "It's a pleasure to meet you." She continued to look at him, wondering what was under those bandages.
"I'm... not blind... I just.... I... There's a... Ponies.... It is chilly oustide you see. I feel... cold," Emery stuttered.
Rei tilted her head a bit. She was wearing a summer dress today. She didn't think it was that cold. "Well, alright." She smiled. Then she gasped. She remembered, she was supposed to be watering the garden. "I'm sorry, I really must be going..." She bit her bottom lip.
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