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 Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:24 pm
Nation of Violence
The Asura Clan has been around since war has begun,the clan itself has never lost a warit was hired to win.....but now in the modern era wars have slowed down and the current leader of the asura has stopped taking working.Cain another frustrtated asuran has convinced the clan that the current bloodline is obselete has started a coup d'eat.
(will give out detailed bios upon request
Chapter One
After killing asura white the assassin benzen sends a hit squad after his son.
(new chara-white,benzen,black,brazil,kitomi,reiko,judorah,hilda,abigail).
Chapter Two
Following the trails of a thief the A.S.I.F finds themselves in a battle with the asuran Maxi Cold.
(new chara-maxi cold,sebastion,lorelei).
Chapter Three
Yuudai Belle comes after Brazil Masters in an attempt to decrease black offensive abilites,Brazil escapes.
(new chara-Yuudai Belle,Renka Belle,Azame)
Chapter Four
After hearing the news of Brazils assult black goes out for blood and is captured.
(new chara-none)
Chapter Five
Black is questioned by Kitsune Bane,and Maxi Cold after talking Black fights his way out.
(new chara-Kistne Bane,Ryoko bane)
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Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 2:44 pm
It sounds kind of confusing... like, not explained well enough. No clue what "A.S.I.F." is... Dunno who "black" or "white" is... your grammar is pretty bad overall; a bit of puncuation could really help.
Out of those combat options, they've all been done already. Ninjas used to be really interesting, but it's getting sorta overkilled nowadays. The fighting method isn't that important, though; it's the way you present it. You should go with whichever you know the most about, feel the most comfortable drawing, etc.
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