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PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 3:28 pm


Name: Laetitia
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Craft: n/a
Rank: Candidate
Physical Description: Laetitia is 5’2 and weighs 115 lbs, she likes to keep her brown shoulder blade length hair in a braid, either loose or pinned up, to prevent any hair falling into her brown eyes . She’s of medium build, she has subtle curves, and her skin has a tan to it. Lia can pull off a gown or a tunic and pants without batting an eye.

Personality: Laetitia is a hardworking girl. She knows what needs to be done and gets it done. She rarely likes to take a break from any task, be it training or chore. She strongly dislikes slackers, or those who abuse their position. Lia, as she prefers to be called, is fairly outspoken. She has learned to hold her tongue when necessary. She isn’t one to gossip. She is very confident in herself, her appearance, her sexuality, and anything tied to her. Overall she’s reliable and loyal.
History: Laetitia was one of four children, a son and three daughters, born to a Baker and a Farmer. Lia was the second daughter born, and never minded having to be bossed around by an older sister and an older brother.

Lia helped out both her parents wherever she was needed. She learned the basics to cooking and farming. She was never to be apprenticed because she was “attractive enough” to find a husband and further business deals for her family. Never minding that she was to be a pawn, Lia worked hard learning all she could from her parents’ crafts.

Not soon after her mother and father agreed that she could marry at 20, a dragonrider found her when she was at Ista hold with her father.

Pets: none
Other/Talents:

Will this character be a candidate? Yes, please

Picture: n/a
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:28 pm


I'm going to have to ask you write a bit more in the personality, please. When we try to match dragons and candidates, we want to make sure it's a good match, so lots of personality is good! I'd also like to seem some flaws, every trait you listed is some sort of positive, which makes your character seem sort of unrealistic.

Just a small note, it'd also be strange for her to be learning both her parents' crafts. I'd pick one, and it wouldn't hurt to expand her history, either.

soutou
Crew

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