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YayAuLait

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:10 pm


Hay again guild ouo<3

I started a 100 themes challenge thing for myself ( and I probably will not finish it anytime soon, if at all XD;; )

I drew these two pictures that I'm proud of, but even drawings you love can get improvement no?? ;v;

http://onehappystar.deviantart.com/art/100Themes-35-Hold-My-Hand-133064282
For that, I mostly want critiques on the body XD Anatomy and such~ Maybe a redline.. Ohh and clothing fold-related crits may help ;v;<33 I remember the last time I posted here, someone had told me about the legs.. How I should add more meat to it ( haha ) XDD does it look fine? DX;;

http://onehappystar.deviantart.com/art/100Themes-59-No-Way-Out-133149997
For this one.. since it's mainly just hair, I want to see if anyone else thinks the hair is fine and dandy XD;; is it too flow-y? Does it seem like it's drooping on the floor? Are the effects too much or too little? Maybe crit on the blood? :0!

I loved the concepts I came up with ;v;<33 not to be so high of myself LOL OTL;;

Please critique as harsh as you can, I won't sue XD~
PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 5:37 am


I have to say for the first drawing I really love how it came out. It as a surreal feel to it without it being surreal. Although I have to say length of the leg below the knee is a bit short and the feet are a bit small. But really this picture is absolutely awesome.

The second Picture is truly captivating in the sense that if you try to escape she'll be there to stop you. As for the blood it does seem as the you splotched it on with the brush. Which, in this case makes the pattern seem a bit to circular. At least in my eyes. I could just be off in this case.

Overall you have two great pieces. Definitely something you should be proud of. Although they both appear a little flat. But of course that could have been intentional. You did a great job, really, keep it up! heart

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YayAuLait

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 6:05 am


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I have to say for the first drawing I really love how it came out. It as a surreal feel to it without it being surreal. Although I have to say length of the leg below the knee is a bit short and the feet are a bit small. But really this picture is absolutely awesome.

The second Picture is truly captivating in the sense that if you try to escape she'll be there to stop you. As for the blood it does seem as the you splotched it on with the brush. Which, in this case makes the pattern seem a bit to circular. At least in my eyes. I could just be off in this case.

Overall you have two great pieces. Definitely something you should be proud of. Although they both appear a little flat. But of course that could have been intentional. You did a great job, really, keep it up! heart


Wao thank you! ;v;<33

Ahh I see the legs being too short below the knees XD;; I've noticed how small the feet were!! I thought it was just me, guess not 8D;; I'll be sure to see to that next time~

Yuhh I'm trying to get better at drawing blood ;v; I see that blood usually doesn't splotch on in a perfect circle LOL XD I guess everyone has different opinions; art is in the eye of the beholder~

Thanks for the crits and compliments!<3
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