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PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:23 pm


Two wrongs don’t make a right,
But three lefts do.
Two rights make a u-turn;
Two u-turns make a circle;
Two circles make a figure eight;
Two figure eights make a butterfly;
Two butterflies make a baby butterfly;
Two baby butterflies make a meal;
Two meals make a full stomach;
Two full stomachs make a clogged toilet;
Two clogged toilets make a clogged sewer;
Two clogged sewers make a stinky city;
Two stinky cities make a stinky country;
Two stinky countries make mayhem;
Two mayhems make chaos;
Two chaoses makes…let’s just go back to two wrongs don’t make a right…


Note:This is just a silly poem I wrote as a sample writing for creative writing club a few years back.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 11:09 pm


Haha I quite like it.

Especially the second line. The fact that it doesn't start with 'two' like every other line should throw the poem off, but it doesn't. You made it work. Bravo!

I love your progression of ideas. They're usually quite unexpected but I think that's part of what makes this poem work.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:48 pm


Spastic waffles
Haha I quite like it.

Especially the second line. The fact that it doesn't start with 'two' like every other line should throw the poem off, but it doesn't. You made it work. Bravo!

I love your progression of ideas. They're usually quite unexpected but I think that's part of what makes this poem work.


Thanks. this poem was something I came up with during creative writing club 3-4 years ago. All of my friends enjoy it and still quote it from time to time, especially the first few lines.
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