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 Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:13 pm
I was actually trying to make it look sexy, --like the pose an stuff-- this time around, cuz I've never really made any of the girls I drew purposely sexy, just pretty, so yea thats what I went for this time. Its in my siggy but heres the whole thing.
Tell me what you think? biggrin
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:45 am
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Right. Work on nothing. Got it. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:20 pm
It looks really good. I like the pose, but it looks a little awkward. The way her arm is twisting in the backround. And her chest is a little weird. Sorry I can't give very good advice sweatdrop I hardly ever draw girls. And I'm not really that great. But I hope my advice is good 3nodding I really like her feet and legs. Those look really great! So overall, I love it. heart
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:58 pm
No its good! biggrin I was trying to make it look like she was getting caught trying to fly away but I guess It didn't work out so well sweatdrop I'll work on those areas and I guess add some lines for a "flying" affect next time.
Thank you for your input! 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:23 am
Hmm~ I actually have a bit of a crush on that long and absurdly thin style. Let's see if I can be of some help...
+: Those legs are so sexy X3. ame thing goes for the hair and the wings, the marks and the cloth design. Since those things are right, I won't go into more detail of that : P
-: The breasts should probably end higher up on the body, especially the one further away from us. It's a perspective thing, the object (read: breast) closer to us should be bigger than the object (the other breast) further away! Speaking of further away, Draco mentioned her arm. For some reason it seems longer than the one closer to us, and the upper arm doesn't seem to be in line with the shoulder. Since it's clothed, the arm should 'pout out' compared to the shoulder's line, not the other way around.
This isn't really relevant for this drawing, since I'm not supposed to see it, but since I do, I might just as well comment it.
I can see a bit of your sketch of the heel - and darn that's a big heel 0.0 I mean, the heal normally IS big, but so is the rest of the foot. You flattened it out a little to early, so too much of the triangle shape disappeared.
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:33 pm
whee Yay! more tips, Thanks so much! I will most certainly work on those!
breasts especially! xp I've always had a problem with them, one of the reasons I hate drawing girls stare
I am wondering about the "pout-out" thing. are you saying their too small? (cause now that I look at it they do look a bit small)
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:59 pm
Well, breasts are a pain but practise (and above all - models of - errh, varying sizes) help a lot XD
On the pouting out stuff... how to explain in English... if you take a ruler and hold it against her upper arm, you will see that the arm is sort of... bent - and usually it would be bent out if anything, since the got cloth on her arms, but it's bent in.
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