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wAtFoRd

PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:20 am


Awright!
I'm not even going to bother writing a whole new collection of new poems. So...Feel free to flame my old poems. Yesh, my fellow gaians, I, Rodent trap, though it may not seem so, am a poet. Cool.

No title...Yet
Kill the man who defiled you
Let him think of what he's done.
Let his mind wander,
before his blood doth run.
Watch the red spill down the blade,
add colour to your soul.
Free yourself of feelings,
and in that jagged hole
will forever rest your hatred
which made you oh, so cold.

My cat is a psychologist
You graced my lips with yours,
and I melted in your mouth.
Until one day you spat me out
like some sick and disgusting trout
that made me want to shriek and shout:
"Good LORD! I feel like-"
"Honey, please let Whiskers out,"
My mother,
understanding,
wary,
like some sick and twisted
fairy.
Well Whiskers, it's just you and me.
And while I know you need to pee,
before I let you out, my pet,
I've got emotions and regret
that here inside me soul feel too
cramped.
And my heart is like outside:
Damp.
"Prown?" you ask me,
impatient,
Like the cat you are,
complacent.
Suddenly the room's less dark
And at my bedroom window: Hark!
Your voice,
your lips,
your deep, dark eyes,
you couldn't stay long in disguise,
you love me, yes-
And I love you.
Mental note as I tie my shoe:
Yes, I know I'm not some trout,
but: Forgot to let Whiskers out.

Point of view 1
The future is bleak
and my wrists are red
"Don't talk to strangers,"
That's what momma said.

I'm tied up tight
in a foreign bed,
"Don't talk to strangers,"
echoing in my head.

One pair of eyes
filled up with fright.
"Don't talk to strangers,''
I scream with all my might.

One pair of eyes
counting all the tears shed
"Don't talk to strangers,"
That's what momma said...

Point of view 2
The future is bleak
and my wrists are red
"Don't talk to strangers,"
That's what momma said.

I'm tied up tight
in a foreign bed,
"Don't talk to strangers,"
echoing in my head.

One pair of eyes
filled up with fright.
"Don't talk to strangers,''
I scream with all my might.

One pair of eyes
counting all the tears shed
"Don't talk to strangers,"
That's what momma said...

Point of view 2She looked so fine
with her eyes so wide,
her licorice lips
pressed against mine

She looked so good
with her face so pale
Brave as a lion
but as feeble as shale

She looked so great
with her gaze full of fright
kicking and screaming
with all her might.

She looked so swell
with her head bowed low,
cheeks so wet
and breaths so slow...

Beneath our mother's glare
The glass hits the pavement
like our heads against the air.

Whizzing by
the fireflies
beneath our mother's glare.

You reach out,
I take your hand,

wrecking footprints
in the sand,

dashing dreams,
or so it seems,

a world with you to share...

I close my eyes
and count to five,
beneath our mother's glare.

Fin.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 2:43 pm


O<

wAtFoRd


Kjralon
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:02 am


Rodent trap

My cat is a psychologist
You graced my lips with yours,
and I melted in your mouth. <-- It sounds like the narrator made out with the cat. xd
Until one day you spat me out
like some sick and disgusting trout <-- Eh, I don't like "trout".
that made me want to shriek and shout: <-- Don't like "shriek".
"Good LORD! I feel like-"
"Honey, please let Whiskers out,"
My mother,
understanding,
wary,
like some sick and twisted
fairy.
Well Whiskers, it's just you and me.
And while I know you need to pee,
before I let you out, my pet,
I've got emotions and regret
that here inside me soul feel too
cramped.
And my heart is like outside:
Damp. <-- Add a syllable to this line.
"Prown?" you ask me, <-- AW. KITTY! [attacks kitty, and snuggles accordingly]
impatient,
Like the cat you are,
complacent.
Suddenly the room's less dark
And at my bedroom window: Hark!
Your voice,
your lips,
your deep, dark eyes,
you couldn't stay long in disguise,
you love me, yes-
And I love you.
Mental note as I tie my shoe:
Yes, I know I'm not some trout, <-- Eh. "Trout" again.
but: Forgot to let Whiskers out.


xd I liked it. It's cute, and you're doing well with rhyming.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:17 pm


Yeah, I didn't like trout, either. I was just trying to go the farthest I could with 'out'.

wAtFoRd


wAtFoRd

PostPosted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 10:46 am


Hers
It's not surprising, it's her only fear,
for there is no light where her feet doth tread
and her life is hanging by a thread
which withers and wanes with each passing year.

The embers die softly on the hearth
And as her world turns violent red
Your eyes and mouth fill up with dread
She prepares to leave this very earth.

It's not surprising, it was her only fear,
for there's no room for life in the face of death
and she whispers upon her very last breath
a desperate plea that none will hear.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 1:04 pm


Rodent trap

No title...Yet

Kill the man who defiled you
Let him think of what he's done.
Let his mind wander,
before his blood doth run.
Watch the red spill down the blade,
add colour to your soul.
Free yourself of feelings,
and in that jagged hole
will forever rest your hatred
which made you oh, so cold.


Mmm, overall, this is cliche. If you go check in the OP/L subforum, you'll find at least one poem on the first page that sounds almost exactly like this. As much as I loved the one you wrote called my cat is a psychologist, I disliked this one.

I like the use of "doth", though! surprised No one ever uses that sort of language anymore, and I lurves it. whee

Kjralon
Captain


wAtFoRd

PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 8:43 am


Kjralon
Rodent trap

No title...Yet

Kill the man who defiled you
Let him think of what he's done.
Let his mind wander,
before his blood doth run.
Watch the red spill down the blade,
add colour to your soul.
Free yourself of feelings,
and in that jagged hole
will forever rest your hatred
which made you oh, so cold.


Mmm, overall, this is cliche. If you go check in the OP/L subforum, you'll find at least one poem on the first page that sounds almost exactly like this. As much as I loved the one you wrote called my cat is a psychologist, I disliked this one.

I like the use of "doth", though! surprised No one ever uses that sort of language anymore, and I lurves it. whee

Oog. I know. I didn't even mean to put that up on the internetz. I must have been smoking something. Or maybe, when I was walking the dog, I walked past some marijuana smokers and had a good whiff of second-hand pot. X3
PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 8:53 am


And yet...
24 hours:
Dawn:
Quickly, Quickly!
Stifle that yawn!
The stage is not availiable yet,
And yes, we're still readying the set,
But we're fast approaching dawn!

Ready everyone, and one-two-three:
Please count right in every measure,
this is pink and violet treasure,
for our early-birds' viewing pleasure!
*EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*-

Late morning:
The time is difficult to tell
As the hours dawdle t'ward lunch,
And my insides are in a bunch,
Awaiting the merciful bell.
Something tells me that my tummy
is the Harbinger of doom.
What's worse than being rumbly
in a quiet classroom?

Afternoon:
The shadows are causing such a commotion!
With every hour, they grow long.
It's as annoying as can be!
*.s.i.g.h.*
Ignore them. They're not worth your devotion.
And while the sun may not be strong,
Ignore them. They're just being contrary.

Sunset:
The curtains rise
before our eyes.
She streaks the set with
vibrant red,
All the famed critics agree:
It's too bad tonight's performance is free.

Evening:
Are you as ready as you feel?
For this evening will reveal
sharpened claws and
glistening maws
Eyes tinged with a crimson hue,
waiting to DEVOUR YOU...

Night:
The lovely twilight fading away
Marks the ending of the day,
And if the stars twinkle like fairy lights
Like they have all previous nights,
And if we keep nightmares at bay,
The world will live another day.

wAtFoRd

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