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my first attempt at a vampire poem

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wat do u think of my poem?
its like awsome
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:18 pm


this was my first attempt at a vampire poem and i havent made another one since it when i put it on deviantart.com alot of ppl favorited it

its called Vampires Hate Being Vampires

I am a creature of the night about to scare you on this frightening night. Monsters beware me for if you don’t I’ll kill you but to others surprise I’ll set them aside for now but when I meet a mortal with a frightful look on their face. I can hear your heart pounding. Smell the red warm fluids that pulse through your veins and with a flicker of light that comes from the gleam of my fangs that glow red from the feasts I have had tonight. I will be gone in a flash and the dawn of day will come. You may see me again when the sun with its bright beams of light go down and the moon along with its beautiful dimmed gleam will rise but one thing will be different this time we meet I won’t let you slide as easily as the last time we met. I will sink my fangs into the fragile flesh of your neck. I’ll eat my fill and then leave you to die. Just remember that if you ever meet me or anyone else of my kind you will be drained of your blood and then left to wither and die. Well now I will tell you tell you a fact so please don’t judge us until you have listened to it because you do not no the suffering of our curse we have been forced to live with. We did not ask to be born monstrous creatures of the night. Never to see the light of day, to walk among your kind, to feel loved not hated or betrayed. We have been and always will be looking for a way to stop our murderous bloody cravings of ours. It is not our fault or maybe it is I guess its for you to decide. We are sorry we are the ones who had to end your lives. When we go home we sulk in our rooms, sit in our corners, yell into our pillows as we cry. For we pity you. We are sorrowful and ashamed of what we have done. Before you go my clan and I have one last thing to say. We are sorry for all the pain we have put you through but in the end you will go to heaven or hell and do not half to live in an eternal life of blood shed, sacrifice, and torture like this clan of mine forever hunted.  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:36 pm


smile tis good but this belongs in the art and writing section.

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xXDantesRebellionXx

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:40 pm


Kisara Momochi
smile tis good but this belongs in the art and writing section.

ohh sorry i kinda just got into this guild a couple mins ago
ill put it in there if u want me to just say if u do mkay
PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:58 pm


XD go ahead. Thats my section sweatdrop and i'mtrying to get more people on it

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Chili Fox

PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:18 pm


i like ur poem, vamps r awsome^^
PostPosted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:35 am


BlossomOfAshes
i like ur poem, vamps r awsome^^

ty

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Chili Fox

PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:15 am


ur welcome
hehe
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