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 Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 9:44 am
This Poem is called Fly Away, i made it 4 years ago ;P
this is also the very first poem i have ever made ;D
Fly away
Far away
Away from the place
Where you were born
Travel through
The icy plains
And over the harsh terrain
Fly away
Away from the pain
You have seen and caused
Leave behind everything
And follow you’re heart
Far and beyond
Fly away from the fear
Of being hurt
By the ones you hold dear
And you will see
That flying away
Wasn’t such a bad idea
Fly away
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:10 pm
o 3o
nobody wants to read it? D;
*sobs in a corner of the forum* ;~;
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:00 pm
Don't feel bad, I think this forum has become overwhelming for most people, they look at it all and just say "forget it". However we currently have a policy on not deleting anything containing art so this is the best we can clean it up. Anyway your poem is great and in my interpretation found symbolism to personal freedom, very quick flow, Well done. :3
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:06 am
o///O
ty
here is some more >,<
MY Fallen Angel
All the hope in this world died
As I saw you fall from the sky
I never knew that angels could cry
I wish to hold you close
But as I reach for you
You disappear
I cried that night as I realized
You will never magically appear
To fight away all my fears
You held me together all these years
But since you disappeared
I felt my sanity leave me
I want these thoughts to leave me
I want to feel peace
Peace only you can bring me
Oh why did you have to defy him?
Oh why did you have to fall from the darkened sky?
Why did the soil take you in?
I have so many questions that need to be answered
But I shall never get them
For you committed the ultimate sin
You took the life of another
Just so you could be with me
Oh my darkened angel
Come to me again
Bring the sanity back into me
I wish to be free from the realization
That I will never get to see
The form of my angel
My fallen angel
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:07 am
Here is another one >,<
Agony: Romeo and Juliet redone.
I watch the blood
Floe freely down my hands
As he lays there dead
I cry in agony of what I’ve just
Done
I wish to be free
I just want to be free
He holds me in his dead gaze
As I stand there holding the blade
I wish I hadn’t done it
But he made me
He made me
Feel things I never wanted to feel
He told me things
I never wanted to hear
Even as he lies there
Dead in his own blood
He won’t leave me alone
So I’ll take matters into my own hands
I bring the blade to my wrist and cut
Now I’ll be with him.
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:10 am
And another o////O
Sweet sensitivity
To be sucked into your dream
Rendered helpless for all eternity
Must be such a pleasing feeling
To escape
From every thing
That haunts your daily dreams
What sweet sensitivity
Bite the hand that feeds you
Grasp the hand that denies you
Its time they feel the pain that creeps inside
Of the very thing they created
Release your inner pain
Create the very thing
That everyone fears
What sweet sensitivity
Run away
Scream
Cower in fear
There’s nothing
Anyone
Can do for you
Take in the power
Take in the hate
Become the thing that they fear
And
Discriminate
What sweet sensitivity
Let your henge fall
Show your true emotions to the world
Relish in their fear
Nothing can save them now
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:12 am
o////O
Stone cold
I look into your stone cold eyes
And realize
This was never meant to be
It’s all turning into a tragedy
I was never meant to love
Much less someone like you
I was suppose to be pure
But now
My world is tainted
And all because of you
Why did I fall?
I look into your stone cold eyes
And realize
I have fallen in love with you
What have you done to me?
I never wanted to love before
I thought love was a weak emotion
In truth
It is
Why can’t you see what you’re doing to me?
I looked up to you
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?
(Whisper)
This isn’t how it’s suppose to be
I look into your stone cold eyes
And realize
You have taken over me
I look away from your eyes
And realize
You have all of me
I will never be set free
From this burning sensation
Deep inside of me
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