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 Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:11 am
Hey y'all!!
this thread is a place where you can post some original poetry
or you can comment on other people's poetry.
I'll start it.
these poems are about this certain guy. Yes, he is on gaia. lol
You said you loved me that one night,
In the parking lot I was filled with delight.
You asked to be my boyfriend,
That night my happiness wouldn't end.
The next morning I was really pumped,
And when I got here, I got dumped.
I was filled with despair,
and I didn't think it was fair.
You moved on to another girl,
and my thoughts began to whirl.
Then the chaos began to start,
And I was motivated to make this art.
I try to be friends with you,
but all you can think about is the other girl you knew.
I miss you that is clear,
but its your loss you should've come near.
___________________________
*Sigh*
I look up at the sky.
In the clouds i see you and me,
frolicking in a tree.
I have loved you forever,
through all kinds of weather.
I wish you would notice me.
My drum. My beat. My soul.
Since you left, I have never been whole.
I miss you. I love you more than life.
once we even had a strife.
I wish you would notice me
so together we shall be.
I love you.
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:26 am
Tis is one about my ex boyfriend and his new girlfriend, my best friend, and how I feel about it. It was sort of my fault I guess as everyone keeps saying. I just miss him more then anthing and I plan to wait forever for him like he told me when we broke up so he could do something for a friend. He was helping a friend of ours by going out with her to show her that her old bf was a good one. He said something that messed with my head and I thought that it wouldn't work from that point on but I was wrong and it would so have worked. It still will, I'll get him back one day. I'll wait. This poem is for him and it's titled:
~I Miss You~
I miss you...
Oh how can I make you see?
That your love is the only kind meant for me
It's the little things I miss about you
Like at your house, in the garage, just us two
Sitting on your lap with your arms tight around me
When we were like this you were the only one that I could see...
I miss you...
I miss your laugh
I miss your smile
When we were together it was all worthwhile
Now we're apart
And you broke my heart
I tried to move on
But without you
I was a pawn
Looking up at my King
And on his arm...
Was his new Queen
I miss you...
As I tried to think past,
What happened last,
You were getting ready to leave
And came to see me
But so did she...
And there on your bike,
Again! Did you see?
He kissed her again infront of me!
Oh great! Now I'm pissed off!
I swear I can't take much more of this!
Her eyes locked on me as lips touched lips!
I miss you...
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:51 am
saturnnightshade Tis is one about my ex boyfriend and his new girlfriend, my best friend, and how I feel about it. It was sort of my fault I guess as everyone keeps saying. I just miss him more then anthing and I plan to wait forever for him like he told me when we broke up so he could do something for a friend. He was helping a friend of ours by going out with her to show her that her old bf was a good one. He said something that messed with my head and I thought that it wouldn't work from that point on but I was wrong and it would so have worked. It still will, I'll get him back one day. I'll wait. This poem is for him and it's titled: ~I Miss You~
I miss you...
Oh how can I make you see?
That your love is the only kind meant for me
It's the little things I miss about you
Like at your house, in the garage, just us two
Sitting on your lap with your arms tight around me
When we were like this you were the only one that I could see...
I miss you...
I miss your laugh
I miss your smile
When we were together it was all worthwhile
Now we're apart
And you broke my heart
I tried to move on
But without you
I was a pawn
Looking up at my King
And on his arm...
Was his new Queen
I miss you...
As I tried to think past,
What happened last,
You were getting ready to leave
And came to see me
But so did she...
And there on your bike,
Again! Did you see?
He kissed her again infront of me!
Oh great! Now I'm pissed off!
I swear I can't take much more of this!
Her eyes locked on me as lips touched lips!
I miss you...thts rlly good.
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:07 pm
this is about someone with bad breath:
roses are red
with stems of green
your breath smells bad
use more listorine biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:15 pm
batfink71 this is about someone with bad breath: roses are red with stems of green your breath smells bad use more listorine biggrin Dude!!! That was so freakin funny rofl
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:01 pm
batfink71 this is about someone with bad breath: roses are red with stems of green your breath smells bad use more listorine biggrin lol
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:16 pm
On that open sea.. just you and me out alone a pone it just letting our hearts bleed... you and I both with our own patols rowing to our own heart bets.. row our way back into love... out there in that open sea. On to our land just you and me... heart
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:18 pm
I take a deep breath in
Inhaling the grey skies
Breathing out pure sorrow
In a cloud of smoke
I watch as smoke rolls off the paper
I sit back and wonder
Where did it all go wrong?
When did I get into this?
My depression held at bay
Thoughts held away
But what would she think?
If she saw me right now?
Flashes in my mind
Fate so unkind
My life signed
away, never to find
My way back, to who I was
Respectable, with a future
Someone she would love
Someone she used to love
But now it doesn't matter
She would never love this
She told me she loved me
The day before she passed away
As the smoke thickens
I lose myself in the haze
Doesn't matter anyways
By tomorrow I'll be with you
I can feel darkness taking over
With tears streaming from my eyes
I whisper your name in the dark
Soon we'll be together again...
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:21 pm
wow u guys r pretty good.
biggrin
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 12:21 am
bloomgirlbec wow u guys r pretty good. biggrin have you seen the posts in the music subforum?
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:50 pm
I sit on the shore watching the sunset go down,
I hear voices in the winds and looked back to the holy grail.
What is it You ask? Its my life. The good and bad, to restart a new beginning.
I stood up and walked over to the voices of the winds that called my name. I stared up at one of them. He was tall and thin. I smiled to him. As he smiled back. Saying everything was going to be okay. and then everything. Turn black.
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:25 pm
roses are red
and violets are blue
id ask you out
but ur to damn ugly 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 5:10 pm
bloomgirlbec saturnnightshade Tis is one about my ex boyfriend and his new girlfriend, my best friend, and how I feel about it. It was sort of my fault I guess as everyone keeps saying. I just miss him more then anthing and I plan to wait forever for him like he told me when we broke up so he could do something for a friend. He was helping a friend of ours by going out with her to show her that her old bf was a good one. He said something that messed with my head and I thought that it wouldn't work from that point on but I was wrong and it would so have worked. It still will, I'll get him back one day. I'll wait. This poem is for him and it's titled: ~I Miss You~
I miss you...
Oh how can I make you see?
That your love is the only kind meant for me
It's the little things I miss about you
Like at your house, in the garage, just us two
Sitting on your lap with your arms tight around me
When we were like this you were the only one that I could see...
I miss you...
I miss your laugh
I miss your smile
When we were together it was all worthwhile
Now we're apart
And you broke my heart
I tried to move on
But without you
I was a pawn
Looking up at my King
And on his arm...
Was his new Queen
I miss you...
As I tried to think past,
What happened last,
You were getting ready to leave
And came to see me
But so did she...
And there on your bike,
Again! Did you see?
He kissed her again infront of me!
Oh great! Now I'm pissed off!
I swear I can't take much more of this!
Her eyes locked on me as lips touched lips!
I miss you...thts rlly good. Thanks~ This was about my ex boyfriend Josh. There's a long and very sad story with new information added to it with my friend's digging. I missed him so much whenever someone said his name my heart started fluttering and now it's just dead. I honestly don't care about him as a boyfriend anymore. As a friend yes, a very good friend. But a boyfriend, no, never again... If for some strange reason anyone wants to know the story feel free to PM me about it...
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 5:30 pm
Insignifigance
My words are pointless
My thoughts are trash
My opinions are worthless
You'd say in a flash
With all my key points
And with all my kind ways
You still don't listen
You don't even phase
Well Iv'e had enough
Of this insignifigant way
Listen to me
Or else, dare say
My speech will raze
Upon your mumbling stutter
Till all is left is an angry shudder
Warning, words aclaim
insignifigance, they won't pay
But to whom who listens
Importance runs deep,
to all who desire,
to be heard, to speak
- Meh
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 3:31 pm
batfink71 roses are red and violets are blue id ask you out but ur to damn ugly 3nodding uhh... okay??
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