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 Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:19 pm
Eyam_legend There are no rules pertaining to this forum but one, diss the person above you. Don't diss a random person just because they dissed you. Other than that, be creative and have fun. Yeah, I'm gonna go off the top see where we get at.....lets see.... I can bust a rhyme like Busta Rhyme, I can commit a crime that ain't a crime, I can shine when the sun don't shine, and I can see if I'm blind. This s**t is so easy that I'm not even trying, I smoke the good stuff and so high you would think I'm actually flying. Insult me or my loved ones and I'll leave your loved ones crying, cause trust me dog I guarantee you'd be dying. I'll rip your heart out your chest if you think you can best the best. See I am the best call me you king, better yet call me your god cause I run the block. I've been in the streets I know the beats so to me you just a child, so child take a seat. I am a beast you don't want to step up to me, do not compete cause you wont catch up with me, don't even try cause you know you'll get beat...yeah...
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:20 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:28 pm
I can top your s**t,I can beat that a**.You can't rule because your a fool.
There's only one god here,and he's in heaven,you can't take his place,because he's not leavin'.Your not the best you jsut think you,so sit a** down boy,and hear us play this guitar.You know what you wanna hear,and so here I am.I'm gonna tell you that you ain't the little brightest thing there is,out there. There's way better people than you 'ought to be,and can do a hell alot ******** this s**t,and forget,and move the ******** on.
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:45 pm
b***h QUIT IT, you fail at writtens, so there's no way you could be a CRITIC
I'm as tight as it gets, and I got my "eye on a snitch" like it's QUIDDICH
you're about to get it, a verbal lashin by a VERBAL ASSASSIN
I'm eliminate this girl then ask, you want your corpse in a HURSE OR A BASKET?
I wan't being serious with any of that, I was just continuing off of what you wrote. No hard feelings right?
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 4:59 pm
Girl is that the best you got, I can't rule because I'm a fool? I will lyrically murder you but that would be cruel. My words are lethal weapons just as I am. Jaws are what I'm cracking and necks are what I'm snapping, but your neck is what I'm stuffen and your jaw gonna get a whole lot of nuttin' dayum, I just came on your s**t, you thought your rhymes were hard but I just proved they were useless. I will make your a** look stupid, so stand down dufus.
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:20 pm
Wait a minute, are you guys fighting? I think I'll add a bit more to your writing. I don't really know what to do with a rhyme. I can't really think straight, I've lost track of time. But i'll post my thing anyways, I've got nothing better to do. It's quarter past ten but I hope this will do:
What's with the warfare? It's pointless and retarded. (Don't talk s**t because this is what you started.) Poems aren't just rhymes; they're forms of expression. Each of them tell a unique lesson.
So before you start yapping, think over what you might say. It's better to make one meaningful rhyme than ten any day.
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:40 pm
Ya'll gotta point, but that done mean nothin'.
Your rap is your heart; now this is my part!
Ya'll gotta show some more feelin',
Be a bit fresher,
And give up the act that ya tryin' to start dealin'.
Tell 'bout your past, words that'll last!
Speak of your future, and sink in your seat.
We all gotta story, just don't get too gory.
Let's release our words, our cords, and drive in the Fords.
That's my rap. Tap. Time for a nap.
Peace.
((God I suck at rapping... hell, I had try. Oh well ))
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 1:58 am
Let's drop it once and I am out, retired years ago from this shiz.
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2...
3...
Crispy J is back for an encore I will burn all you suckers at the core/
blam blam blam explode and cook you in a fire you are cooked like a smore/
I'll rock you like a twenty buck whore, I may be dull but not dumb/
You asked it and im droppin it your mom came and I gave her some/
six liners leave everyone numb especially when i drop it and shock it/
last line of the night rookies keep it fresh cause this dog has bit/
Have fun and keep it fresh guys ^^
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:10 am
Put HIM IN A HURSE, I"M HITTIN HIM WORSE, you're loss is IMMINENT JERK
I'm a boss with rifles and "tossing bibles" is the only way you'll "drop a SIGNIFIGANT VERSE"
When the TECS START BREACHIN his CHEST STARTS LEAKIN it's best to GET SMART CRETIN
He should "stay retired", but this lame's gonna "give it another shot" like "BRET FAVRE DRINKIN"
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:31 am
It's a lost war you're lyrics dope and your mind run a muck/
Don't worry we'll keep it shut and hide from everyone how much you suck/
let's get buck and ******** this it's diss the guy above you i'll diss all of you/
six liners and dream liners I may be rusty and cant bust a rhyme ***** boo/
shoo this competition gotta sharpen my edge smashing you like a sledge/
hammers coming down smacking you around I may be white but i'm on the edge/
Shits out
keep it real
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:22 pm
You'll NEVER WIN, your terrible, and it has nothing to do with the MELANIN
Cuz the fact that you're sub-par at best is the only thing REL-E-VANT
DISPELL HIS SCRIPTS, mafter multiple verbal beatings he's COMPELLED TO QUIT
this benedict arnold "showing of inside information" is the only way he can "display INTEL-I-GENCE"
Good lines man, keep em coming. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:42 pm
Thanks
This guys spittin at a reflection only thing he can diss/
danced around his girl look i think hes gettin piss(ed)/
He is about to submiss he can't take it he's wack/
still going strong poppin words aint gonna cut slack/
had her on her back hit it like im hittin the rhymes/
sitting back relaxin poppin caps man this aint worth dimes/
check out new york times you'll see me i'm out
keep it fresh, lets see some new faces.
Yo people get stirring!
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:56 pm
what the ******** is that
u call that s**t rap
where im from b***h, thats known as crap
prepare to get yo a** smoked like weed
cuz ******** when i rap all u ******** bow down to me
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:11 pm
Dr Thump what the ******** is that u call that s**t rap where im from b***h, thats known as crap prepare to get yo a** smoked like weed cuz ******** when i rap all u ******** bow down to me wut the ******** i wasnt done to tell u tha truth i was starting to have fun so here i am again b***h im back for more to rap about the gangstas, crackheads, and whores found on the westside cali streets other fools keep rappin but i cant be beat hell yea im reppin the 805 where dealers do they thing and rival crews collide police patrolin always seem to pass by the brown side of town homie thats where i reside now im done so i must say good bye
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 4:03 am
If this is wat u call rappin and rippin it, it was wack and haha at least my flow is loud as yamaha rida
imma show ya how its done dirty dirty style if ya feel me
no need for a beef but s**t was wack esse n where da ******** is the gun homie
sure im only flip dis me all u like but at least i bang ur b***h last night n ditch her this mornin on top of motel 6 ur retarded d**k suckin c** hoe
since your gang affiliated where the weed n cash stacks dawg just to say as is
neva seen a fake g in da 805 but at least i seen og's on the 305 which is dade county son
so what if you don't get it at all and please dont sound like another illeterate being that drop out of high school just because you don't know what 2+2 is
oh no im back and u dont need to know the name just because your a thug that can't even game recognize game playa
even though im just a town menace please don't say that you like to play tetris which doesnt even need to compare since i already know u got a tecnis a** please dont make me say it to your b***h that u were caught havin sex with a hermige b***h in a cabage patch with strawberry short cake n at least you arent worse as r. kelly peeing on a college girl with no body lookin like a retard tranvestite.
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