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Fatal Fail
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:48 pm


I am curious about what people think of it.

Quote:
I stand tall before the breakdown
The mirror reflecting a distorted image
I feed the hunger, the anger and the hate
Look beyond the foolish desire for power
Dreams are shattered and left for insanity to consume
Struggle with my selfish desires and lost memory
The time to control is slowly creeping it's way here
It shall seize your body and mind
Despair will fill your cold dead eyes once again
Finally I shall fall and feel the hurt and pain I want
Such selfish fools we've become...
I hear my orders, I will betray the masters
The hunger is aching, the pain won't last forever
I'll ask it to be over and hope for you to lose all sanity
A little harsh the anger cries
Twitching as I hit the floor, hatred is on my mind
I plead for the punishment we deserve and it is ignored
The devils suffer and the angels sing; What are we?
All of the madness builds-up and attacks the mind
In the end, we'll all fall


Is it good, bad? What is it?
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 9:11 pm


Vampires? That's what it reminds me of...

Muffinocalypse


Fatal Fail
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:25 pm


Really? o.o
Cool! xD
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:13 pm


Really cool poem. ^w^
Awesome job =) heart

9tOwl
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QAceQ

PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:28 pm


It reminds my of Schizophrenia. xD
But it's very good.
I likes it.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:31 pm


Thanks

And LOL :0 Yey

Fatal Fail
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Kimiko_FallenKillerOfHell

PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:37 pm


Nice poem ^-^
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:38 pm


Thanks
xD

Fatal Fail
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Jaa Vaa Monster

PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 4:29 pm


Mmmmyeah.

I got ******** TWILIGHT HAS POISONED OUR MINDS. D:<
PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 5:02 pm


I like it

Double Solitaire


xXDark_KissXx

PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 5:41 pm


That's really good! Did you enter it in the Art Arena?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 7:24 pm


xXDark_KissXx
That's really good! Did you enter it in the Art Arena?

Nope. I've never put any writing in there.

Fatal Fail
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 1:41 am


I'm too much of an optimistic person to really enjoy that poem thoroughly. Its not you, its me. =)

Artistic-wise, it blends nice.
You sound quite talented.
I concur with the above,
submit it!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 11:56 am


It's in the arena. xD
Click here to go see!!
Whoa.

Fatal Fail
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Lonely Consumer

PostPosted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:26 pm


This makes me think of someone whos spent thier life in emptyness and more of the same in death
Desperately crying out as they try to gain attention, from either heaven or hell, just some sort of reconition, any sort.
I like it x3
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